The Twilight Saga

Sorry if you came across mistakes. I didn't check over my work! I just fixed them.


"Nessie, are you ready to go home?" Jake asked after he finished his tenth hotdog. I sighed; we've been at La Push for a couple of hours know so, I probably should have expected this.

Dad would be dissapointed if I came home past midnight. This wouldn't be my first time coming to a Bonfire with a pack of hungry werewolves. It was acctually funny watching Jake eat a cow in less then twenty minutes.

My mother always told me that, one day, I would find somone who loves me- how daddy loves her. I never thought it was true untill one day, my life turned around. . .

Two years ago:

"Renesmee, Jacob will be here to pick you up at two. You may want to wear somthing warm, it's forty- five dergees, sweetie." My mother walked into my over- sized closet as she spoke.

I smiled. Nothing pleased me more, than to spend the day with my best friend. Jacob, could do the job.

"How is this?" She held in her hands; a light blue v-neck sweater and jeans.

"Thats perfect mom, thanks." I hoped off my bed and took the clothes from her.

"I'm going hunting with your father and we will return soon after you come home, okay?" Ewww. I definatly didn't need to hear about mom and dads 'Hunting' trips. She smiled and kissed my cheek. She started for my door..

"You're leaving right now?" I asked. She looked back and nodded.

"Your fathers very thirsty." She sighed."I'll see you later sweetie, I love you"

"Love you too" I whispered as she left.

I stripped my PJs off and put the new ones on.

A faint knock came on my bedroom door.JAKE!!!!!!!Yay!

"Come in!" The door slowley opened and Jake peeked around the room before meeting my eyes.

"Hey Nessie, Parents home?" He asked. I shook my head.

"No. . . hunting." I annonced.

"Hmm..." He sighed. "Hey, can I talk to you about somthing important?" He asked. His voice sounded shaky, nervous.

"Of course Jake" I walked over and took his hand.

His eyes met mine and he grinned; I led him to my bed.

"What would you like to discuss?" I asked in a calm tone.

He laughed at my speaking.

"Well, I wanted to just talk to you for a minute if you wouldn't mind." He looked sweaty. My Jake... Sweating? Possible?

"I wanted to talk about this now because. . . I cant say It. I.."

He took a deep breathe and closed his eyes.

"Nessie do you . . .love me?" He said in a grave tone ceeping his eyes shut.

"Of course I love you Jake," I told him and patted his huge shoulders.

"T-thats not what I meant..." He opened his eyes and looked into mine. "Nessie, I am in love with you." He said smoothly.

"I- I know that you are just getting us-" I cut him off by grabbing his face and pushed my lips to his. He was shocked, I could tell, but I didn't care.

Mostly, I had know idea what I was doing. My kiss was urgent.

I pulled my lips away from his after ten long seconds of his unrespondense.

"I'm sorry Jake, I don't kn-" This time I was cut off. His fingers braided themselves in my hair.

I pulled away. I had to say what was meant to be said.

"Jake, I'm in love with you too." I said.He smiled.

"I have been waiting for you to say that for so long." He sounded so relieved; it was heartbreaking.

I drew my fingers down his face and around his neck. I brought his face to mine again. I pushed him down on the bed so his head was on my pillow. He put both of his giant warm hand around my body.

"Nessie," He sighed my name. I brought my lips to his again. This kiss was different. His tongue gently explored my mouth as I did his.

Very, very gently Jake pulled the sweater over my head. I kept kissing him. I felt his bare chest under my fingers.

Somthing had acured to me then. I pulled away from his kiss to loom at him.

"Jacob, promise me you won't ever leave me?" I qeustioned.

"Nessie, you are insane if you think I would ever leave you." He began kissing me again. Ever? I would keep Jake forever.

Knowing that Jake loved me; nothing mattered but that.

I kissed him more. He unbuttoned my pants and took them off; I didn't care that we were in my room.

All I wanted was Jake.

And right then, I realized how long I had been in love with Jacob Black, without even noticing before.

Jacob's hands moved up to my face.

"Ness, Are you sure you want to do this?" He asked.

Knowing Jake; I knew exactly what he meant.

I nodded- it was true- I wanted to do this.I stripped his pants off without stopping. Jacob thrust himself inside me. It wasn't painful at all. I just sighed at the strange sensation that flowed through my body.

Jacob was amazing. Never had I done such a thing, but, I felt it was right.



Jakes POV

Wow! Never would I have thought Nessie had, just, fallen in love with me. I always pictured me telling Nessie that I had imprinted on her and she would love me still. BUT WOW! I had never mentioned imprinting at all and Ness still fell in love with me.


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“So Ness, What will it be, Grizzly or Cornflakes for breakfast?” Jake asked putting on his T-Shirt.
“I want to go hunting this morning if you don’t mind” I said. I was fully clothed by now and waiting for Jake (with his slow pace, it will be lunch time by the time he is ready).
“Grizzly it is,” He smirked. He took even a slower time putting on shoes.
I groaned loudly.
“Jake, I’m hungry, COME ON!” I screeched. He laughed at my expression and quickened tying his chucks.
“Jacob, you are going to phase right when we get out there!” I complained.
“No, I’d rather stay in human form while we hunt.” He said cheerfully.
He tied his last shoe lace and placed his foot on the ground.
“FINALLY!” I took his hand and ran out of the room with him on my heels.



I found two deer to fill me up. Jake stuck with one. Once I was finished I wiped my mouth off and looked at Jake who was swinging, like a monkey, I the trees. I laughed as he swing from branch to branch very quickly so they wouldn’t brake off..
He jumped off and landed right in front of me.
“So, what would you like to do today?” He asked.
“Um. .” I thought about that for a moment. “Lets go see Seth! I wanna bug him today!” I decided.
He laughed and nodded, “Okay..”
He kissed my cheek and lead me toward grandma and grandpa’s house to get the car
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Yeah, I hope they don't. I tried not to make it TOO bad so It won't get deleted.
Its not as bad (what people say) and its more PG so I changed IT PEOPLE!
*Note: This was written by me and my friend Terri.
“So Ness, What will it be, Grizzly or Cornflakes for breakfast?” Jake asked putting on his T-Shirt.
“I want to go hunting this morning if you don’t mind” I said. I was fully clothed by now and waiting for Jake (with his slow pace, it will be lunch time by the time he is ready).
“Grizzly it is,” He smirked. He took even a slower time putting on shoes.
I groaned loudly.
“Jake, I’m hungry, COME ON!” I screeched. He laughed at my expression and tied his chucks a tad bit faster for me.
“Jacob, you are going to phase right when we get out there!” I complained.
“No, I’d rather stay in human form while we hunt.” He said cheerfully.
He tied his last shoe lace and placed his foot on the ground.
“FINALLY!” I took his hand and ran out of the room with him on my heels.



I found two deer to fill me up. Jake stuck with one. Once I was finished I wiped my mouth off and looked at Jake who was swinging, like a monkey, in the trees. I laughed as he swung from branch to branch very quickly so they wouldn’t break with him still attached to the limbs.
He jumped off and landed right in front of me.
“So, what would you like to do today?” He asked.
“Um. .” I thought about that for a moment. “Lets go see Seth! I wanna bug him today!” I decided.
He laughed and nodded, “Okay..”
He kissed my cheek and led me toward grandma and grandpa’s house to get the car.

Our drive to LaPush was interesting. I turned into an ‘average’ teenager, even though I am still a child, and jammed to the music Jake had blaring loud enough I’m sure my other grandma could hear it in Florida. The volume bothered my sensitive ears, but the look on Jake’s face prevented me from turning it down. Once we arrived at Seth’s, Jake pulled me out of the car and pulled me into an urgent kiss. Seth came out and as soon as he pulled away I sighed. (It would be worse with my father around.)
“Hey guys! I see you’ve reached your goal Jake.” He winked at him. Jake stiffened his shoulders and punched Seth in his chest.
“Ow,” He said rubbing where Jake hit him. “Only the ladies can do that Jake, watch it!”
“As if you had one.” He taunted.
“Get real, Jake.” Seth said, then he lunged.
Fighting around like this was usual for the LaPush werewolves, so I just sat on the hood of the car and waited out the fight. “Jake! You broke my arm!” I heard Seth scream.
“Jake.” I said, getting off the hood. I had to set the arm before it started to heal, then I would have to break it again so it would set right. Good thing grandpa was a doctor. He had to re-break bones often, with the fights between the LaPush boys.
“No fair, Jake. You got a lucky swipe.” Seth said.
“You know I’m better than you, little boy.” Jake repeatedly used the 2 year difference to taunt Seth.
“No taunting Jake. He can’t right for, oh, a few hours. By then the bone should be repaired and ready to be broken again.” He just laughed.
“Billy!” I said at the same time as Jake said “Dad!”
“Kids!” As far as I was concerned, I had two dads. My actual dad and Billy. Billy got around in a wheelchair, so he wasn’t as I’m-ready-to-break-a-bone as the others.
My cell phone rang. “Hi, Dad!” I said cheerily into the phone.
“Renesmee. Thank God you answered. Get back here NOW!”
I frowned. “Daddy?”
“Alice had a vision.” With that, he hung up.
Everyone was looking at me, since they could all hear it. They had better hearing than me, so I just followed Jake to the car. If daddy was yelling, then the vision must be bad, and everyone knew it. He almost never yells, even when mom almost died giving birth to me, he didn’t yell at Jake when Jake had thoughts of disgust while he tried to save Mom. Bottom line, Dad doesn’t yell.
My phone rang again. “Mom?”
“Renesmee, did your Dad call you?”
“Yes. Me and Jake are on our way home. Is everything all right?”
“Honey, just get home.” Mom disconnected. Great, I thought. Just was I wanted two days away from my 8th birthday.
We arrived home and I was spilling onto the ground before Jake had the car stopped all the way. The big house seemed to have a dark cloud hanging over it, and even the many windows could not lighten the dark bleak look of the front porch as I scrambled to find out what was the matter. I was scared to find out what Alice saw, yet also equally eager. I mean, I could destroy the entire house and Daddy wouldn’t yell. And he was yelling for me to get home????????? It did not make sense.
“Nessie.” Jake stopped me at the door. “I just want to let you know, yell at Alice. She’s the ringleader. She was ready to rip Edwards head off because he didn’t want to do his part.” I didn’t get a chance to ask what he meant because he opened the door to reveal the biggest, whitest birthday party I had ever seen. Alice was dead
ALICE ISN'T REALLY DEAD! Nessie just wants to kill her at the moment.
WOW that was realy good i thaught something bad as going to happen lol :)
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