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Renesmee’s POV

Waiting in our meadow was harder than I had expected. I had a mix of many different feelings rushing through me causing an overwhelming burst of nervousness. Jacob said to meet him in our secret meadow that we discovered at six o’clock. It was only five minutes past six but I was still impatient. Sometimes he calls and says to meet here but this time he sounded kind of weird. Just then my Jacob appeared 20 feet away from me. I jumped up from my rock I was sitting on.
“Hey Jake ” I squealed as I ran over and gave him a huge hug.
“Hi, Nessie.” What’s wrong with him? He just stood there looking at the ground.
“Ness, come sit down over here with me.” We sat down on the moist, squishy grass.
“Are you okay, Jacob? You look mad. Did I do something wrong?”
“Nessie, we need to talk. There is something I need to tell you...”

Chapter 1
I just wanted to stay asleep but obviously my family wasn’t going to have it. Aunt Alice was rummaging through my new wardrobe trying to find something “acceptable” for my first day of high school, well, my first day of school ever. My mom was trying to convince me to get out of bed. Why was Alice even at the cottage?
“Come on, honey. You know everything is going to be fine, you are going to make it ” They’re never going to give up
“Guys, I don’t want to go ” I felt like screaming. Why can’t they just let me stay home?
“Renesmee Carlie Cullen,” my mother said. She’s using her voice that she uses when I’m not going to get my way. “Why are you all of a sudden so scared? Last night you couldn’t wait to go and now look at you You are going to make plenty of friends, everyone will like you, and you will do fine ”
She just didn’t understand Nobody will like me because I’m a freak Who wants to be friends with a half vampire, half human girl? Sure, this was my first year of school, which is another reason that nobody will talk to me See, I’m not a regular girl who is having pre- high school anxieties. I’m not like everyone else. Right when I was about to start balling, my dad walked in giving me “the” look.
“Renesmee, stop being so negative of yourself ” Dang it. I forgot my dad could read minds. Wow. How many people can say that? “ Nobody will know about your real past, nobody will know about your family. Everything will be fine.”
They only see the optimistic side Technically I’m only seven years old but I look 16. It takes a lot of explaining but I’ll give it a try... My mom and dad met as Juniors in high school. My mom was human, my dad was a vampire. My dad wasn’t sure if he would be able to handle being so close to a human that smelled so good. Wow, that sounded odd. Anyway, long story short, they ended up getting married then I came along. I am half human, half vampire. And that is exactly why nobody is going to like me.
“Nessie ” Good old Auntie Alice, “Seriously, go take a shower while I pick out your outfit You need to look presentable for school ”
“Mom, please...” They can hardly resist giving me everything I want, maybe this can work.
“It’s not going to work this time Renesmee. Go get ready for school NOW.” Gotta love my father.
“Fine. Leave me alone for a few minutes to take a shower.” I said scowling at my whole family who were trying to reassure me. What the heck was everyone doing here? They have a house of there own
“You’ll be fine sweetie.” Grandpa Carlisle walked in and said, while hugging me. Oh my gosh, why were they here?
“They just wanted to be here when you woke up for school.” Dad said, obviously reading my mind.
I took a longer than necessary shower but I just wanted a few more minutes to myself before it was time to endure whatever was coming. When I stepped out of my bathroom, my outfit that Alice had picked out laying on my bed with a note on top.
You will do great Nessie, we will be there with you if you need anything at all. Love you, Aunt Rosalie.
I smiled to myself while throwing on the outfit without paying any attention to what it was. My Aunt Rosalie had always been there for me in a protective sort of way and I wasn’t really sure why. Her and my mom kind of had some kind of connection but I didn’t understand that either. Suddenly interrupting my thoughts was my phone that had started to ring.
“Hello?” I said into the receiver.
“Nessie What are you up to?” It was my Jacob. My Jake.
“I’m getting ready for school. We haven’t talked in forever What’s new?”
“It has only been three days I know, it seems like forever though. We should hang out this weekend.”
“But, Jake, its only Monday ” I complained.
“Sure, sure. How about tomorrow night? We can go down to First Beach.”
“Okay I’ll call you after school. Bye Jake.”
“Bye, Nessie.” Yay I’m surprised that its been so long since we’ve seen each other, and yes, three days is a lot for us.
Jacob has been my best friend ever since the day I was born. We usually see each other every day but Billy has been sick for the last few days and Jake wanted to keep an eye on him. I can’t wait to see him.
I walked back into my bathroom to brush my hair. As I ran the brush through my golden curls I heard my dad enter my room.
“Hey Nessie You look beautiful. Are you ready for breakfast? Your mom made you some eggs over at the house.” Yum, my favorite.
“Sure, lets go.” I said smiling at my dad.
Human speed just wasn’t fast enough for him as we ran as fast as we could. It only took about 7 seconds to get there.
“MORNING NESSIE ” Everyone screamed. I rolled my eyes but couldn’t help but to smile.
“Come on, eat so we can go, human.” Lovely Uncle Emmett.
I ate quick just so they would shut up.
“Everyone load up ” Auntie Alice called as she skipped off to her yellow Porsche. I climbed in the back seat with mom and dad with Alice and Jasper were in the front.
I’m off to my first day of school at Forks High School. Yipee.

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I'm glad you like it, and I hope your daughter does too! Chapter 10 should be up soon, I need to finish writing and do... something else that I can't tell you because it will ruin the suspense. Thanks for reading! =]
Here's chapter 10 guys! Read, comment, enjoy! =] And note that this starts in Bella's POV then changes to Nessie's towards the end. There is also a link at the end, make sure you check it out!!! =]


Chapter 10
Bella’s POV

The second Renesmee was out the door, we all returned to our spots where we were right before she came in; at the dinning room table. “That was a close one ” I said after everyone was seated.
“Back to party planning ” Alice chimed. She was referring to Renesmee’s eighth birthday party that we were planning for Saturday. On Friday Jasper and Alice were going to stay home from school; Jasper was just going to be a cover story (we were going to tell Nessie that they were going hunting), then Alice would really be party planning. Then, on Friday everyone would be going to school as usual. And the hardest part: keep Nessie out of the loop.
“Okay, so Friday me and Jasper are going to go buy the outfits for everyone.” Jasper shuddered, but Alice didn’t pause. “Then Saturday morning we are going to need to keep Renesmee out of the house so we can decorate. Anyone have an idea how we’re going to do that?” My mind clicked.
“We can have her go out to breakfast with Jacob ” I could tell Alice liked the idea because she giggled and did a ‘happy clap’.
Then Esme said, “But what about breakfast? She always wakes up waiting for breakfast.”
“We could call Jacob to ask her out to breakfast.” Edward said.
I nodded and grabbed my phone and dialed Jake’s cell phone number.
“Hello?” Jacob’s voice sounded groggy like he had been asleep. Oops. I forgot that he was human and needed sleep.
“Hey Jake. Sorry I woke you.” I explained the situation and he quickly agreed... anything to be with Renesmee.
“Thanks so much Jake Goodnight.” And we hung up.
So all the plans were worked out. Now we just had to make it to Saturday without Nessie finding out.

It was finally Saturday morning and we had (somehow) made it through without Renesmee finding out. She had just left with Jake for their out to eat. Now we are decorating every single square inch of the house, as Alice directs.
There are all kinds of decorations that Alice had bought. God knows how much money she spent just on decorations. All the decorations are black. Apparently Alice thinks that with everyone’s black outfits and decorations will perfectly contrast with the white walls and furniture. Whatever.
Alice was prancing around decorating and ordering us to put certain things wherever she thinks they will look just right. I’m just following her directions because I don’t really feel like getting shredded to pieces today.
“EMMETT ” Alice shrieked. “Get your lazy but off of that couch and help us And shut that stupid television off Do you see anyone else sitting around? ” Great, here we go again. This was the fourth time she caught him slacking off.
“Yes, mommy.” Emmett said rolling his eyes and following his orders. Alice gave him “the look”. Again.
“Emmett, don’t you want to have THE best party possible for your niece? The last actual birthday party we had turned out horrible ”
I saw Edward shudder. Alice was referring to my party they threw for me that ended up a disaster. Who knew that a party could be ruined by getting a paper cut? Vampires knew. So Emmett started helping us decorate again. Finally the hundreds of bags of several different decorations were empty. Alice squealed and starting jumping. “It’s perfect Isn’t perfect? I think its perfect ” She has issues.
“Yes, Alice, its perfect. Now what do we need to do?” I asked. Jake and Nessie had been gone for half an hour now, but we weren’t absolutely sure when they would return.
“Hmmm... presents Go wrap her presents ” Alice darted up the stairs. I ran over to Edward and pulled him towards his room so we could find Renesmee’s gifts to wrap them. Once we got up there, Edward went to his closet and grabbed the box. He handed me the gift while he got the wrapping paper. I wrapped the little box at vampire speed and ran back downstairs.
Everyone was already back with their presents, sitting in the living room, waiting for the next instructions. Alice stood and cleared her throat, “Okay, so now its time to get dressed. Bella, Esme, and Rosalie, go to the cottage. Jasper, Emmett, Edward, and Carlisle, go to my room. Your outfits have our names on the bags. Everyone, go get dressed, then come back here. Go ”
We all went to our designated areas and got dressed in our party clothes. Alice did pick out beautiful (and of course, black) dresses and accessories. Everyone looked perfect.
When we got back to the big house, Alice had a vision that we would all be hidden behind furniture in five minutes. Edward looked great, as always, in his black shirt with dark colored jeans. But when didn’t he look amazing?
As we were waiting for the final minutes to pass, I was thinking about how fast these eight years have gone. How had it passed so quickly? It seems like just yesterday we were standing in this house, reciting our vows. Then the beautiful honeymoon, my short pregnancy, then standing before the Volturi and their guard. But this must be a part of living for the rest of eternity. We didn’t have to worry about our time together being cut short. I will never have to say goodbye to my wonderful husband, or my beautiful daughter. We have forever.
Alice’s tinkling voice pulled me out of my thoughts. “Its time, its time ”
We all ducked behind various pieces of furniture as we heard two pairs of footsteps approaching the door. I heard the door unlock and we all jumped up. “SURPRISE ”
Renesmee’s POV

As we pulled up the driveway in front of the house, I was wondering why Alice forced me into wearing this dress. Its not like we were going to a party, it was just breakfast Then as we stepped through the doorway of the house, I found out why. Wow.

Link to their dresses:
Omg i love the chapter!!!
The dressees lookeed AWESOME!!!!!
I want Renesmee's Dress for my Graduation!!
Post more soon!
Thanks! It took forever to find THE right dresses and stuff. I'm glad you like it! =]
Realy liked it :)
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Loooved renesmee dresss :O
AAAHH!!! I have been waiting forever for your story update! Hurry with the next chap. lol. Oh and the dresses were beautiful!
love it really
the dresses fit perfectly to theire character =D
another awesome chapter.
i absolutley love Reneseme's dress. its my favorite out of all of them.
Thanks guys! I'm working on chapter 11 now. =]
awesome chap!


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