The Twilight Saga

Ok, So the other day this idea popped in my head and i really wanted to write soo here i am writing it!


Summary~ When Bella was in middle and high school she got made fun of because her weight and bad acne. When she got to high school she vowed that she would get revenge. She made a list of all the people that made fun of her. When she got done with college became a Model she went to train to learn how to fight and work a gun. She then meets Edward her personal trainer to keep her in shape and falls in love with him. Will Edward stand in her way of getting revenge? Or most importanly will he find out what she's up too?





"Fatty,Fatty acne eater." They sang to me as i walked my locker to get my books out for my last class. "Here come 4 eye's." One of them said. I knew they were talking about my Best Friend Angela Weber. "Hey Bella are you ready for our last class? Thank god." She asked me. "Not really." I asked closing my locker. This was the one class i had with my crush. Everytime i saw him I turned bright red and everybody teased me. "Only 2 more years till we graduate." She sang. "Yeah and 2 more years of getting made fun of." I said and sat down next to my lab partner aka crush. I opened my notebook up and turned to a clean page. All of a sudden i started to write:



                                                             HIT LIST                                                                     

                                                          Mike Newton                                                                 

                                                          Jessica Stanley                                                             

                                                           Amber Rose                                                                  

                                                          Tyler Crowley                                                                

                                                          Gianna Blake                                                                

                                                          Football team                                                                

                                                         Cheerleading team                                                        

                                                            Jacob Black                                                                 



I realize what i was writing; a hit list. It was a good idea. I would graduate,Lose weight,Get rid of my acne, train and get revenge. I reread the list. Wait Jacob Black i couldnt have him on there he was my crush he didnt do anything to me just made me blush. Jacob Black.  I crossed him off. Starting after i graduate i would change and get revenge.


I hope you guys liked the summary and the preface and will read the story, Please read and comment and tell me what you think of this idea!


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love it <33
keep me updaated!!
and post more soon!!!
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cool .. post moree
her tatto is and ur story is beautiful


It was my first day of college. And i was afaird i would get lost and people would make fun of me. I had still had acne but as bad as before. I dropped 20 more pounds all togather a total of 35 pounds. I looked thinner than before. I could fit into more nicer clothes. I even started to wear nicer clothes and started going out socializing. Maybe i would get another tattoo soon to show progress of my change. I grabbed my bags and walked to class knowing i would be late if i wasted another min. The class room was pretty big. It was like high school all over again. There was jocks in corner. Preppy girls in the other and nerds and others scattered around in seats. The teahcer came in and started writing on the bored. "Ok please find a seat." I was already seated. A boy with short brown hair sat down next to me. "Hey." He said looking at me. I was in shock. I stayed facing forward so he wouldnt see my hideous face. "Hey." The day dragged on with classes. It finally ended and i was ready to go and start this home work. I had training tomorrow at 8- 10 and i would come home shower and ate and go to class. I dont know how i did it but i did. I made it through the week. I was happy to say i could sleep in and go out. There was a knock on the door. I got up and answer it shocked to see my trainer Necole there. "What are you doing? It's my day off remember?" I asked. "I know i thought maybe we could do something together." She said stepping in beside me. We were really friends we just talked. "Ok." I said hesaitent. "So what would you like to do." She asked excitedly. "Um i dont know suprise me." I said and walked over to my couch. She though for a min. "You said you wish you could get revenge on your high school classmates that made fun of you right?" She asked. "Yeah." I asked not sure were this was going. "Ok we gotta mean you up first." She said. "Im not acually gonna going do anything to them." I lied. Of course i was gonna do something to them S.o.b's. "Well still your to nice. I have a suprise for you, come on." She said walking towards the door. I guess this could help with my revenge. I grabbed my phone and walked out the door following behind Necole to her car. "Ok this is it!" She said turning the car off. I looked out the window. I gasped. "I am not doing that!" I looked at Necole.

Ok that was Chapter.3 I know it was short. So comment and tell me what you think Bella is not doing.
great chapter! is she learning to use a gun??
yeah i think she is learning to get a gun


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