The Twilight Saga

Ok, So the other day this idea popped in my head and i really wanted to write soo here i am writing it!


Summary~ When Bella was in middle and high school she got made fun of because her weight and bad acne. When she got to high school she vowed that she would get revenge. She made a list of all the people that made fun of her. When she got done with college became a Model she went to train to learn how to fight and work a gun. She then meets Edward her personal trainer to keep her in shape and falls in love with him. Will Edward stand in her way of getting revenge? Or most importanly will he find out what she's up too?





"Fatty,Fatty acne eater." They sang to me as i walked my locker to get my books out for my last class. "Here come 4 eye's." One of them said. I knew they were talking about my Best Friend Angela Weber. "Hey Bella are you ready for our last class? Thank god." She asked me. "Not really." I asked closing my locker. This was the one class i had with my crush. Everytime i saw him I turned bright red and everybody teased me. "Only 2 more years till we graduate." She sang. "Yeah and 2 more years of getting made fun of." I said and sat down next to my lab partner aka crush. I opened my notebook up and turned to a clean page. All of a sudden i started to write:



                                                             HIT LIST                                                                     

                                                          Mike Newton                                                                 

                                                          Jessica Stanley                                                             

                                                           Amber Rose                                                                  

                                                          Tyler Crowley                                                                

                                                          Gianna Blake                                                                

                                                          Football team                                                                

                                                         Cheerleading team                                                        

                                                            Jacob Black                                                                 



I realize what i was writing; a hit list. It was a good idea. I would graduate,Lose weight,Get rid of my acne, train and get revenge. I reread the list. Wait Jacob Black i couldnt have him on there he was my crush he didnt do anything to me just made me blush. Jacob Black.  I crossed him off. Starting after i graduate i would change and get revenge.


I hope you guys liked the summary and the preface and will read the story, Please read and comment and tell me what you think of this idea!


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Ch.8 sneek peek!












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Ch.8 sneek peek!

i woke up to my phone ringing. Who would be calling me this early in the morning? I trying to open my eye's but decided to keep them closed.

"Hello?" I asked sleepy/

"Bella! I told you to call me after your date! Now spill!" Kate said on the other end.

"What time is it?" I asked trying to open my eyes to look at the clock.

"9:52am now spill!" She demanded.

"Ok,Ok, fine." I sat up on my bed. "Ok so after you left he arrived shortly after. And let me tell you he look HOT!
Ok so then we went to my favorite restaurant, franchecas. There was already a table ready for us. So when we sat down he askes what's my favorite color. You wanna hear my answer? Green and not because it's the color of your eye's!! When i realized what i said i turned red. Then he replied. Brown and not because it's the color of your eye's when i asked him what his favorite color was. And let me tell you he has the best crookit smile ever!! I really like this guy, Kate!!"

"Sound's like you guys had a good time!" She stated.

"Oh my gosh we did Kate." I said smiling to myself thinking about last night. "Wait i didn't tell you the best part." I said remembering the best part of the night, the kiss.

"Good, i was hoping there was more!" She said probably bouncing up and down.

"Ok so after we left dinner he took me back home and walked me to the door. Then i asked him what his story was since we only talked about me and Kate guess what he said."

"What Bella? What?" She screamed.

"He said I'm just the son of Mr. and Mrs. Cullen , Out wondering the world, trying to find a nice girl who won't try to play me for my money. And then i kissed him!!! I was the best kiss ever!! But there was something about that kiss that i can't put me hand on." I said thinking about it. "Kate are you there?" I asked.

"Bella. Your dating Edward Cullen!! She screamed in the phone.

I didn't even think about it.

"Oh my gosh! I am!!!!!!" I screamed.

"Kate hold on someone's on the other line.


"Hello Bella? This is Edward." Omg it was him. I clicked back over.

"Kate it's Edward hold on." Yelled at her.

"Oh hey Edward!" I said trying to sound normal.

"Hey i was woundering if you wanted to get some lunch with me today?" He asked.

"I would love too. Where sound i meet you?" I asked him already up and on my feet.

"How about everyday's at 12?" He suggested.

"Sound's great!" I said trying not to yell.

"Great see ya there bye." He hung up.

"Kate im meeting him for lunch!!" I jumped up and down.

"Oh my gosh Bella get ready!! Call me this time when you get back!" She said.

"Ok if its not to late." I told her.

"Have fun!!" She sang and hung up.

Ok i'll update later on one day! Please comment!
OMG I'm loving this story. Please update FAST. I must read more. Ha ha :) <3 Just so you will update faster. he he.
New reader and it's awesome!!
love it
that was amazing
more please
love it.. !!! really the love the lines of Edward..
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i love it

I need more!!
omg omg plz write more what happends at lunch omg omg im hypervintalating some one get me a paper bag *someone hands me a paper bag * thank you stranger now update soon lol
wow amazing so far keep going update me asap
Wat a nice story


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