The Twilight Saga

Ok, So the other day this idea popped in my head and i really wanted to write soo here i am writing it!


Summary~ When Bella was in middle and high school she got made fun of because her weight and bad acne. When she got to high school she vowed that she would get revenge. She made a list of all the people that made fun of her. When she got done with college became a Model she went to train to learn how to fight and work a gun. She then meets Edward her personal trainer to keep her in shape and falls in love with him. Will Edward stand in her way of getting revenge? Or most importanly will he find out what she's up too?





"Fatty,Fatty acne eater." They sang to me as i walked my locker to get my books out for my last class. "Here come 4 eye's." One of them said. I knew they were talking about my Best Friend Angela Weber. "Hey Bella are you ready for our last class? Thank god." She asked me. "Not really." I asked closing my locker. This was the one class i had with my crush. Everytime i saw him I turned bright red and everybody teased me. "Only 2 more years till we graduate." She sang. "Yeah and 2 more years of getting made fun of." I said and sat down next to my lab partner aka crush. I opened my notebook up and turned to a clean page. All of a sudden i started to write:



                                                             HIT LIST                                                                     

                                                          Mike Newton                                                                 

                                                          Jessica Stanley                                                             

                                                           Amber Rose                                                                  

                                                          Tyler Crowley                                                                

                                                          Gianna Blake                                                                

                                                          Football team                                                                

                                                         Cheerleading team                                                        

                                                            Jacob Black                                                                 



I realize what i was writing; a hit list. It was a good idea. I would graduate,Lose weight,Get rid of my acne, train and get revenge. I reread the list. Wait Jacob Black i couldnt have him on there he was my crush he didnt do anything to me just made me blush. Jacob Black.  I crossed him off. Starting after i graduate i would change and get revenge.


I hope you guys liked the summary and the preface and will read the story, Please read and comment and tell me what you think of this idea!


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"Bella i wanna give you something." Edward said after we caught our breath. He reached over and grabbed something out of his pants pocket.

"I was gonna give you this at lunch because yesterday when i told you my story you didn't even seem to care about what i had, you liked me for me, Edward, and so i want you to have this just to remind you that i'll always be here for you no matter what happens." He slid the ring on my right hand. It was an Mawi Gold-plated jade and skull ring. It was beautiful.

"Edward this is amazing! I love it!" I kissed him and gave him an hug.

"I should take you an meet my family." Edward blurted out.

"Meet your parents already?" I asked nervously.

"Yeah, We should take this to the next leavel... I mean you know just dating.. Instead of just s3x buddies." He smiled.

"Ok, That sounds reasonable but i can't do it this week or next week." I said.

"Why not?" He asked.

"I'm busy this week and next week im visting some special friends in jacksonville." I said looking into his eyes. Yeah some special friends alright. "Sorry!"

"Aww its fine, Will just do it later." He kissed once again.

"We should get up and do something." I suggested after a few mins of silents.

"Ok." He said getting up.

"We should take a shower together." I said winking.

He grinned and picked me up and ran towards the bathroom.


"There's some clothes in the closet if you want to wear something new and fresh." I told Edward when we got out the shower.

"You have guy clothes here?" He asked suprised.

"Yeah why wouldn't i? Never know." I said

After we were both dressed we headed to the park. (bella's outfit )

Central park was were i went to relax. And with Edward there it made it even better. I didn't know if this was healthy but i was falling in love with Edward way to fast.

*Ok so i hoped you liked, i know it was short but short updates Monday's and Wednesday's and long updates Saturday's.

Oh and this weeks contest is to guess how old i am to read the next chapter first!Ok so now you know that go commet!
love it
cant wait to read the next chapter
13 i think
love it <333
that was sweet and they have to take it to the next level
in i think you are 15
keep me updated!!!
love shauny
this is amazing good job
love it
Loved the chapter and im gonna say ur like 15ish
Thumbs up!
awesome-more please
awesome write soon
i love it update soon
this is awsome
im gonna guess 16-17 hope im right!!! and awesome chapter by the way!!!


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