Rising Sun Completed

This is my first fan fic, it is Jacob and Renesmee's story. Hope you like it!! let me know what you think. Thanks.
Its pg-13 for now!!!

Thanks to any one who made me a banner!! i love them!!

Before i start, i do not own any of these characters, they belong to Stephanie Meyer.

Chapter One: Sixteen

" Get your bum out of bed Renesme Carlie Cullen!!! " Alice shouted at me.
"go away alice." i groaned
"not a chance nessie, its your birthday and you have presents to unrap!!!"
"oh yea. my birthday."
" yep, HAPPY SIXTEENTH BIRTHDAY RENESME!!!" she yelled at me
" Alice let me sleep!" i mumbled, rolling my face into the pillow.
"Haha, what a joke." She pulled on my ankles, and suddenly i was facing her.
"Lets get you dressed, and fast, emmet wil be up her in two minutes to drag you down if your not down there" she laughed
"how do you," i stopped as she tapped her temple and laughed with her. "oh yea"
she danced over to my wardrobe and pulled out a few things, undressed me and then redressed me. She then dragged me to the bathroom and put on foundation, lip gloss and mascara.
I looked in the mirror and my jaw dropped.
I was staring at the cutest pink dress, but it was sooo short! it stopped just above my knees, was strapless and exagerated all of my curves. But the part that shocked me was the height of the silver stilettoes.
"alice, nooo way!!!" i tried not to let my voice break, but it did anway
"Ohhh, Renesme your my favourite neice, and its your sixteenth birthday, let me have fun!!" she whined
" Aunty alice im your only neice. Fine."

She carried me down the stairs, were i could here my family, but i couldnt see them.
" HAPPY BIRTHDAY RENESMEE!!!"
they emerged from every where, scaring the life out of me.
Dad saw me, and gave Aunt Alice a dirty look.
"oh settle down edward, shes sixteen."She said playfully
Jasper hovered to her side, and watched Dad carefully.
"Edward" He said warningly.

And then i saw Jacob. He walked into the room, and then paused, his eyes lingering on my dress just a moment to long.
Dad growled at him, and i giggled, imagining what it was he was thinking.
"Happy Birthday Nessie" He said softly, to low for human ears to her, but ofcoarse i heard it.
I smiled as he walked over to me.
He kissed my head then handed me a small rapped box.

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Permalink Reply by Moriah on March 24, 2009 at 3:53pm

please write more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Permalink Reply by Faith Burdine on March 24, 2009 at 4:42pm

plz write more soon!!!!

Permalink Reply by Jordyn on March 24, 2009 at 8:14pm

i looooove your story!!!! and i realized that phanella can do the whole thoughts thing and in my story, my character can do that but she has to touch someone!!! but this is ah-freakin'-mazin'!!!!!!

Permalink Reply by Mrs Cullen on March 25, 2009 at 3:23am

Chapter Eleven : Problems

"Dad!!" I screeched at him. "What is happening!"
"Renesmee calm down, you are not helping the situation at all!" He said calmly.
"Edward, please tell us what has happened." Phanella said calmly, with tears in her eyes.
"Phanella, Renesmee,"
"Wait, were is everyone?" I cut in before he could finish. All my family was not here, except my Mother and Father, even Emmett had left since he brought us back.
"If you would let me finish." Dad said, annoyed now.
"Sorry." I muttered.
"Well, La Push seems to be... under attack." Dad said.

"What!! Vampires? whats wrong! Were is everyone? What is happening?" I yelled.
"Nessie, sweetie, please calm down, your Father will explain, just calm down. " Mum said, wrapping her arms around me.
"Well, The children of the moon have heard of Jacob and Sams packs, and have gone to La Push to..." He stopped there.
"Dad? To what? Were is Jacob? Who are they?" I cried.

"Seth and Jacob and every one are shapeshifters, not real werewolves, you did know that. The children of the moon are real werewolves, they are horrible destroyers, and they are in La Push, it is a full moon tonight, and the pack, plus our family has gone to drive them away. Collin is outside, and I can see everything that is happening down there. Dont Wor" He stopped short as Collin howled.

" What happened?" Phanella whimpered.
"No, no, Bella stay here, I have to go." Dad ran out the door, whispering something to Mum on his way out, to low for my half human ears. But the terror in her eyes showed that it was something bad.
"Mum?" I said.
"Its happening all over again. How could he? He should have known. No, no no." Mums shocked face showed if she could still cry, she would be.

Sorry its short, more in about ten minutes. =]

Permalink Reply by Mrs Cullen on March 25, 2009 at 3:52am

Chapter Twelve:

I sat in silence for nearly half an hour. Not moving anything except my eyes. I glanced from Mums petrified face, to the tears running down Phanellas cheeks.

I dont want this baby not to have a father Nessie. I heard in my head
I know Phanella. I dont want to grow old alone, neither of us do, but it could have been m-m-y Aunt, or Uncle, or Jacob-b-b.
I stutered, even in my head, and then, the tears slowly started to fall down my cheeks, as I thought of one of those that I loved, ripped to shreds by those vile monsters.

Alices POV:

As i stood next to my husband, with my family on either side of me, watching the children of the moon march closer and closer, i felt useless, my mind reading had always helped us, told me how to survive, even led me to Jasper, but I could not see our future now, I could not see who would survive this battle.
I felt Jasper take my hand, and kiss my forehead.
I looked over to see the wolves, lined up, ready to fight. I pictured the young boys that would suffer, and cringed away from the thought.

An hour of fighting, watching them drop, my spirits rising each time one of my side survived the battle, one of theirs dropping, never to move again, nothing could have prepared me for the sight of the very last child of the moon latching onto Jacob, hearing his bones snap under the strength of the monster. I ran, straight for it, and ripped of its head in on swift movement, shredding it to peices in the next.

In the five seconds it had taken me to pull it apart, my family had crowded around Jacob, Carlisle pointlessly perfomorming CPR, in his attempt to save Jacob, my brother, my friend, Jacob Black, the young boy, who had so much to live for.

Permalink Reply by Mrs Cullen on March 25, 2009 at 4:29am

Chapter Thirteen: Waking Up
Jakes POV:

I lay in what I guessed was a bed, whos bed it was I had no idea. I thought back to the fight, I couldnt remember much, I watched them being taken down, one by one. The next thing I remembered was my bones crunching under the hold of that monster, that had come to destroy all that I loved.

I thought of Renesmee then, her worried face as I bolted past her in the forest, it seemed like a lifetime ago, and wished I could have reminded her that I loved her, more than anything.

I listened hard to what was around me then. I heard Edward and Bella, there steady breathing, Bellas occasional whimper, I heard Alice, prancing around the room, worrying, she couldnt see me, so she felt useless. I heard crying, and soothing, Seth and Phanella trying to comfort Renesmee, my Renesmee. I heard Carlisle hovering over me, waiting for any sign of me waking up.

"I want to talk to Jacob alone." Renesmee muttered. Every one agreed.

First Rosalie came in with Emmett. " I never liked you, Jacob, but you mean alot to Renesmee, so please pull through this."
Emmett ruffled my hair. " Get well kid. Please." It was the most serious I had ever heard him.

Then Carlisle and Esme. " Please, Jacob, I am trying my hardest, I need you to try to." Carlisle said sadly. Esme kissed my head, and they two left.

Edward and Bella came next. "Please, Jacob, my son, I am so sorry." Was all Edward could say.
"Jacob, I love you, please, please get through this." Bella kissed my head, and left.

I heard Phanella whimpering as she and Seth walked in. they both kissed my head, Seths huge tears splashing onto my face, as he gently hugged me. " Jacob, my brother, I love you, dont die, pull through, be my babys Godfather, be my best man at the wedding, be there for me, please Jake, please."
"Jacob, Please, Please." Phanella whispered.

"I'm so sorry Jacob Black." I heard Alice talk before I heard her in the room. " I should have stopped this. I am sorry, please get better." She kissed my head, and left with Jasper.
"Get well, please." I heard Jasper whisper in my direction on the way out.

The last to come was Nessie. She carefully crossed the room, then sat next to me, and took my hand. I heard her crying, and knew an endless stream of tears ran down her face.
"I love you Jacob, Dont leave me here, please, I need you." She kissed me then, and as she did, I could not stand to know she was on pain because of me a second longer.
"I love you Renesmee Cullen. " I whispered. " I will love you forever. Every single second of every day, for the rest of forever."

She could not speak, as her happiness over took her, I wiped away her tears, and she pulled her self closer, being carefull not to hurt me, and kissed me.
"I love you Jacob Black, Dont ever ever let me go." She whispered.
I pulled my mouth away from hers just long enough to whisper back " I love you Renesmee Carlie Cullen."
And then, I pulled her as close as she could get to me, kissing her till i couldnt breathe.

This was my forever, my own, perfect peace of forever.

Permalink Reply by Drea on March 25, 2009 at 8:24am