Shattered Memories; A Jacob and Bella story
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What if Bella hadn't reached Edward in time in Volterra, and he carried out his plan and killed himself? This is my 2nd FanFic, and I am going to write a small Preface and see what you guys think; tell me if I should continue.
**DISCLAIMER** I DO NOT IN ANY WAY OWN THESE CHARACTERS. (Except the ones I may make up.) They all belong to Stephenie Meyer.
Preface: Too late
EPOV:
Bella is dead. I will never see her beautiful and radiant face ever again; only in my memories will I be able to cherish her. I will never be able to hear her pulse thunder against her ribs; feel the warm touch of her soft lips against mine as our lips used to whisper in sync. Never again will her voice whisper my name in her sleep, and never again will I see her cheeks flush that beautiful shade of crimson that tempts me so...
It's all your fault. Just do it, you monster.
The weight of the six letters to my family suddenly were heavy in my pocket; how much this would hurt them.... But it must be done.
I love you, Bella. I thought before stepping into the direct noon sunlight that shone upon Volterra.
So... tell me what you think, and I'll continue if you would like;)
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Permalink Reply by Sophie on -
Yes you both are right indeed:)
I will continue if you guys want to see what happens -
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Permalink Reply by Ravenlovestwilight on -
keep going!!!! I have to know what is going to happen!!!! please please pleae post more as soon as you can!!!
WRITE AT VAMPIRE SPEEdD!!!!!!! -
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Permalink Reply by Lexa <3 on -
omg....omg..omg...I love Edward and Jacob but I don't want Edward to die! EUGH! I am so confused! ( not with the story with myself!) I love the idea...!
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Permalink Reply by FireBarry on -
This is such a great idea!
You are such a good writer Sophie that I have no doubt that you will pull of this story :D
Keep writing :D -
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Permalink Reply by Sophie on
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Chapter One: Time Has Run Out
BPOV:
Alice said I would have until noon; it was now eleven fifty-five, and Edward was nowhere in sight. My pulse thundered against my ribs and my lungs screamed as I stumbled through the horde of people, furiously scanning each crevice for my Edward; nothing.
11:57 C'mon Bella, c'mon Bella... Alice and the Cullens are depending on you now; Edward is depending on you. I thought to myself as I pumped my legs faster. People swarmed all around me in red cloakes; marching and holding Italy's flag. The crowd only thickened the more inward I moved; this is impossible.
Stop thinking that, Bells! Anything is possible...
12:00. The clock tower mocked me with it's dull bellow as noon dawned over Volterra.
Bong, bong, bong.
And that's when I heard the shrieking. Directly to my right, a mob of people were scattering every thinkable direction and screaming bloody murder. I saw a faint glimmer from the front of the crowd before I heard a scuffle, and the glitter disappeared.
No, I can't be too late! No, no, no!
"NO!" I screamed, elbowing my way through the crowd.
Please, God, heavenly Father, please don't let that be Edward! I prayed silently as tears welled up in my eyes. As I emerged from the crowd, I was staring into an alley way. There, on the cold cobblestone floor, was my Edward.
"No!" A sob erupted from my chest and clawed its way through my throat. I threw myself down upon him and buried my face in his stone-cold, rigid chest. "Edward!" I shrieked, balling. Hot tears exploded from my eyes and trickled down my face and fell onto his chest with a silent: Thud, thud.
My Edward was gone; gone forever, and I would never see him again.
"Why?" I screamed, sobs overcoming me; resulting in my voice cracking. I reached up and stroked his perfect, god-like face. For once, my favorite crooked smile did not appear.
"Bella, I'm so sorry... it had to be done." Came Aro's cold voice from above me.
"Had to be done? HAD TO BE DONE? NOTHING HAD TO BE DONE!" I screamed at him, tears streaming down my face.
"He was going to expose us. It was the only logical thing to do. You understand." That wasn't a question.
"Just leave, Aro. I don't want your pity or your excuses. Leave me to grieve in peace." I ordered, burying my face in his chest and sniffing in his perfect sweet scent.
I heard footsteps on the cobblestone for a few seconds and then, it was just me and the darkness of heartbreak and depression that would engulf me for the rest of my life. -
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Permalink Reply by Jake's Wolf Girl on -
I like it keep me posted plz
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Permalink Reply by Natalie <3 on -
Sophie, one word, RADFABTASTICSOMEFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 Try to take apart all those words and u'll know what I think. If you have no idea, it's Radical, Fabulous, Fantastic, Awesome, and Wonderful........ I luv it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE, for all that is good in the world, keep writing....................
Peace, Love, Happiness...........
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Permalink Reply by FireBarry on
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Oh that is so sad :(
That was VERY well written even if it was short :D -
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Permalink Reply by Sophie on
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Chapter Two: Jacob
This is only Pt. 1. I wanted to get some to you guys to keep you busy until I write more. Hopefully no one will cry!
I don't know how long I had been sleeping; all I remember is waking up to Alice's grieving face as she woke me up to what I thought was my worst nightmare. This was not a sick nightmare; fantasy had become reality. Edward was gone, and it was all my fault.
"Alice, I'm so sorry," I whispered, my throat thickening.
"Bella, it's no one's fault; it was just an awful case of mis-communication." She murmured, stroking his hair. "I found these in his pocket," she said, handing me six letters addressed to each Cullen. "Would you?" She asked, handing me the card with her name on it.
"Oh Alice, I don't know if I can..." I croaked, a tear falling down my cheek and hitting the paper with a pat.
"Please, Bells. For me."
Sweet Alice,
My favorite sister, I wish this decision I am making wouldn't effect the family with such impact, but I can no longer go on without my Bella. You know this is not my decision; it's destiny. Without Bella, I am nothing; she is my world. You understand. If anything happened to Jasper, you would have done the exact same. I know that when I'm gone, the family is going to mourn me so very deeply, but I have one last thing to ask of you: be strong for them. Be strong for Esme... I know this is going to tear the family apart, and she is going to be a mess. Be strong my dear Alice; it's what you're good at. Remember that I love you and you will always be my favorite sibling. I'll see you soon.
-Edward
We were both sobbing uncontrollably by the end. I had to pause every few sentences for that was all I could read without wailing out in pain. Alice's whole frame shuddered as she cried tearless sobs and she curled up in a ball; knees pulled tightly to her chest. I gently folded the letter back into it's original creases before crawling over to Alice and cradling her as she cried.
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Once we landed back in Forks, Alice and I embraced one last time before parting our ways. As much as I wanted to be with the Cullens, I knew that they had to grieve in private.
When I arrived home, Charlie was watching T.V. He abruptly shot off the couch and grabbed me into a bear-hug.
"Oh, honey," He mumbled into my hair. I couldn't help myself; I was soon blubbering.
"Dad-why-c-can't-I-s-stop-p-c-c-rying?" I choked out between sobs.
"Because you never finished." He said, his voice full of pain.
"I'm s-s-orry-D-dad."
"Don't be, honey. I just hate seeing you in so much pain.... I feel helpless." He admitted, squeezing me tighter. I slowly took deep breaths in an attempt to calm myself; I have to be strong for Charlie. I have to be strong for myself.
"Dad, I think I'm going to go to sleep," I murmured, gently pulling away. "I'll see you tomorrow..."
"Okay.... Night, hon. If you need anything and I mean anything just holler for me..." I could tell he was contemplating whether to supervise me or not.
"Okay I promise. Night."
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I woke up bawling; I had a nightmare about him. I was running through the crowd in Volterra, frantically looking for Edward as the 12:00 bells boomed over head. The only thing different, is that I could see Edward in his dark alley, waiting to step into the light. I tried to scream, to tell him no, but nothing came out of my mouth. No matter how hard I pushed my legs, I still moved at the same sluggish pace towards him. Hot tears were running down my face; I knew I was out of time. It's as if I was invisible; I was right in front of him! Right when I was three feet away from him, he stepped into the sun.
That's when the screams erupted as the Volturi leapt from the darkness and killed him.
I woke up screaming, teary-eyed, and sweat drenched. Charlie about had a heart attack. -
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Permalink Reply by Sophie on
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Yes Charlie knows Edward has passed; Carlisle and Esme called to warn him since Bella would be a mess when she got home. They didn't want him to freak out:)
I'm glad you liked it! I always get nervous that it's not good ;P -
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Permalink Reply by Lexa <3 on
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I was seriously just crying when I read the letter! OMG! That was soooo sad! I love the story, but I hate the part about Edward dying.... I love Jake too, but there always has to be an Edward.... hey could you do a chapter from his perspective in heaven that would be soooooo cool!
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