Speak Now

This is inspired by Taylor Swift's new song Speak Now.

Chapter 1
BPOV

I was at the airport waiting for my best friend, Edward Cullen. We have been friends since we were little and I've always had a crush on him. Edward had been off in Spain at an exchange program for college. We have been exchanging letters all year and since it was summer, he was finally graduating from college. He had mentioned that he had surprise for me that I would love and I was very excited.
Finally, after hours of waiting, I saw Edwards messy bronze hair.
"Edward!" I said and waved.
He ran up to me through the crowds of people and spun me around. "Look at you! You look so different!" he exclaimed. "You look taller."
"Not really." I said "Maybe a few inches."
"Well, it's good to be back here." Edward smiled.
"So, where's your surprise?" I asked.
Edward turned around and looked towards the crowds. "Um, I'm not sure." He exclaimed. "Oh! There she is!"
She? I thought. He brought a girl home?
"Melissa!" Edward said walking over to her and hugging her. I felt a part of my heart crack. I'd never seen Edward with another girl before. They walked over to ne hand-in-hand with smiles on their faces. "Bella, this is Melissa, my fiancé."
"Fiancé?" I asked.
"Yes." Edward said "We met during the exchange program and dated for a little bit."
"Next thing you know we are engaged!" Melissa exclaimed.
Mellisa had chesnut brown, straight hair with brown eyes. She was wearing a flowered blouse with tan shorts and tan sandals.
"What's with the get up?" I laughed. "Haven't you been to Forks before? Didn't Edward tell you about the weather we get?"
She gave me a snotty look and said "I'm from Florida. It's usually hot and sunny this time of the year. Not rainy and gross."
"Well, get used to it." I said "It's goig to be rainy and gross the whole time you're here. Welcome to Forks." I said.
She raised and eyebrow at me and Edward kissed her forehead. "I'm going to get our bags Melissa. You can stay here with Bella."
"Okay sweetie." She said.
"So, what part of-"
"Shut up. I don't want to be here and I just am because Edward wanted me to meet you. I know you guys are close but, I also know you have a things for him. It's so obvious. While I'm around though, things will change. We're getting married and you're not. So, welcome to paradise you're not marrying him and your fantasy is over." Melissa scowled at me and walked over to the convere belt to where Edward was.
"Nice to meet you too." I said "This will be fun."

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Permalink Reply by Anna on December 31, 2010 at 11:51pm

This is really good.
Can u plz keep me updated?

Permalink Reply by Janie z. on January 1, 2011 at 2:39pm

Oh wow!

Permalink Reply by Ashley Salvatore on January 1, 2011 at 5:54pm

Hey!!! New reader!!! Well, I love your story. It's... It's like SUPER good. ;D You know? While reading, at first, I thought that Jake was a good guy, but then you described that he hurts Bella, I changed my mind. My favorite part in this story of yours was when Bella came back to Edward and kissed him. I think that was sweet. Oh.. and it also reminded me a bit of 'Sweet Home Alabama' movie. You've made me want to watch that movie again!!! Anyways... It's good that Bella is pregnant. Hope the kid is Edward's, that would be a nice christmas present for him, woudn't it? And if speaking about Jake, I hope that he breaks up with Bella and leaves her. I mean, he hurt her, badly. As about Bella, I hope that she will be happy with Edward.

Once again, your story is fantastic. Can't wait to read more.

-Ash.

Permalink Reply by Abby on January 1, 2011 at 7:18pm