Sunrise - Sequal To Breaking Dawn {please read!!}

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Permalink Reply by Lan R Cullen on October 17, 2009 at 3:19pm

Great, great start, please continue...

Permalink Reply by syrah caraig on October 19, 2009 at 1:32am

are you working on the next chapter?update me please............and its great!!!!!!!! i like it..

Permalink Reply by ashtie on October 19, 2009 at 10:44am

okay start writing more..

Permalink Reply by Renesmee Carlie Cullen/Black on November 3, 2009 at 3:59pm

Thanks for all of the support guys!!

Permalink Reply by Renesmee Carlie Cullen/Black on November 3, 2009 at 4:34pm

ok, sorry I havent posted in so long, here is chapter 2!!

Chapter 2 - Challenges
When I finished shopping, my arms swinging with the bags with clothes of my choice, I actually skipped a little like a little girl. I already turned into a human for my shopping. You know. For shaking hands and stuff. I do that all the time back home. Except for the fact that I don’t buy my own clothes.

Soon, I heard a faint meow. My head turned at the sound. The source seems to be coming from an alley. I went in. God, it’s dark in there. Good thing my eyes are sensitive, even when I’m a human. Another meow. I looked down behind a Dumpster. A little ball of marmalade fur. Aw. It’s a little kitten. It’s wounded. I gently picked her up and looked her all over carefully. Its leg was bleeding so badly. At least her leg is the only thing that’s bleeding. The blood just spread all over the fur. I put the little kitten on the ground and looked around for water. But before I found any, I gasped. Before I even took a breath, I was smashed into the wall of the alley. My head seemed to be bleeding. A figure was holding my shoulder into the wall. His hands were cold and hard. Vampire, I thought. I felt like groaning. I didn’t know there were more vampires. Ugh. I have such a taste in choosing areas to stay in.

“What luck I have today,” He said. “A nice, tasty meal.”

I froze when I heard the perfect, smooth voice. If my calculations are correct, and I am certain it is, this vampire drinks human blood.

“Don’t you smell lovely today?” He chuckled. He seems to be playing with his food. In other words, me. The vampire took a deep breath through his nose.

“I can’t wait to taste you, little girl.”

His mouth bent over, he smiled as he pulled back his lips showing his teeth. I shut my eyes tight and wished that Alice will not see me dead. Now I know that I would have to defend myself. Alone. Now. Water. I need water. But before a found any, I pushed the vampire away with my feet and threw him off me. Hmm. I’m strong even as a human. Interesting. I have no idea why I did that, though, but I did. Oh well. It worked pretty effectively anyway. Next thing I know I was thrown out of the alley, into the side of the road. I looked under me. A water vent! I stood up. The vampire was coming. I raised my arms. Strike! The vampire was smashed into the unbreakable wall of ice. He fell to the ground. I smiled. I was privately happy about what I did to a vampire while being human. I have to say, this vampire is an idiot to try to make me its dinner, and while I was trying to heal a wounded kitten. I moved my arms and the ice turned into water and I pushed the vampire into the wall of a building. I turned the water covering him back into ice. Not so difficult. And there won’t be any questions from the people since the ice would melt before dawn. I felt like doing a victory dance. My first battle with a vampire. It was fun too.

I went back into the alley. I picked up my fallen shopping bags and I wrapped the kitten in a dress I bought. I cradled the kitten close to me and I went outside the alley again to see the vampire struggling. Hah! It’ll be funny if the vampire wasn’t going to kill me in the first place.

I heard screeching car wheels. I spun around to see a Mercedes S55 AMG coming toward me at full speed. It stopped in front of me and Edward said, “Get in!”

I hesitated.

“Come on!” Jasper said.

“Um, there isn’t really any danger now and…”

But I didn’t get to finish my sentence. I think it was Emmett who got out
of the car and shoved me into the car.

“Ugh, pushy,” I complained when I got in.

The driver, Carlisle, chuckled, and sped away. We were soon at the house. Wow, they all probably drive fast. Obviously. Emmett heaved me out of the car.

“Seriously, Emmett!” I complained.

“Come on!” He said urgently.

I followed, or rather, got pulled toward the house. When I got inside, Esme sighed in relief and Alice danced toward me. I gave her the shopping bags. She went upstairs with them and was back in three seconds.

“How did you do that?” Jasper said.

“Do what?” I asked.

“The water,” Edward replied.

Oh. They meant my water-bending.

Oh shoot, they meant my water-bending! What other excuse can I say? “Um……” I hesitated. I shouldn’t tell anymore lies. But I continued to try.

“Well, I have to defend myself, don’t I? I won’t want some vampire to drink my blood, and seriously, wouldn’t you defend yourself, and---” I said in one breath.

“But how did you do it?” Carlisle interrupted. “And please, you should breathe more often between speeches,” He added with a smile.

“Oh fine. I learned that years ago.” I met their eyes. “When I was human,”

“But how did you learn it?” Bella asked. Alice must have told them the details of my “future”.

“In the North Pole. There was a hidden water tribe there, and they taught me.”

Lies, lie, lies. Seriously! When would I be able to tell them the truth?

Would they still accept me? I am so irritated.

But at least there is a hidden water tribe. Just like I described. I read it in my books. What else can I read for years? I read practically every single book in the library, and I tell you, that library is huge.

“So humans can be unnatural?” Rosalie said in interest.

“Well, since I said I learned it while I was human, then yes,” I said.

“Awesome,” Jacob said with a smile.

“But why do you have to pull me here, just to ask questions?” I intercepted.

“The vampire,” Edward said simply.

“The vampire who was trapped between a wall and ice! There really wasn’t any danger,” I said.

“You know Jess, vampires are very strong,” Alice said.

“I know, but they aren’t strong enough to break the ice.”

They all raised their eyebrows. I sighed with impatience.

“You see, I’m really…advanced.”

“Ah,” Emmett said. “Shocking.”

“I know, right?”

And then they eyed the bundle of clothes in my arms.

“And why…” Alice asked.

“I heard the wounded kitten in the alley, so I went in and tried to see what’s going on.”

“Don’t you think we would drink the kitten’s blood?” Emmett asked.

I glared at him. “Not when I’m around. And anyway, I trust you.”

“Ugh, your smell is getting to us,” Rose said.

“What smell? I haven’t been exactly near a werewolf in the last 24 hours!”

“I meant your human smell.”

“Isn’t that good? Now I can stay human for long amounts of time and not worry that you all will have me for a snack!”

They laughed.

“We’ll get used to it.” Bella said.

“Now, sweetie, you can rest,” Esme said.

“Oh goody,” I said. “Did you add a bed in my room, or do you expect me to sleep on the couch?”

“Go on! We added a bed in your room.”

“Good thing,” I yawned.

“Surprisingly, your blood’s not so strong anymore,” Jasper said.

I smiled. Yes, of course, their vampire instincts told them so. After that vampire incident, I added poison to my blood. No more human blood drinking vampires near me. “Well, then, see you tomorrow.”

I walked up the stairs. I sighed a little when I closed the door of my bedroom. I saw that the shopping bags were here, brought up by Alice, and that they did put a bed here. It was a nice, comfortable-looking bed. I put down the kitten onto the bed, onto one of the pillows, and I waterbended the water from my clothes off, leaving them nice and dry, and the water stayed onto my hands. Then I placed my hands onto the leg of the kitten. The water glowed light-blue and I knew that the kitten was healed.

“I will call you Opal,” I told the kitten. I was prepared to keep her. I really did trust my new family of vampires downstairs. Bizarre. Me, a princess, having a family of vampires. What would the people say? I shrugged. I don’t care what the people say.

I changed into my nightgown and fell onto my bed. I looked at the ceiling, then at the walls. I would decorate my room tomorrow. I looked out into the night. Tomorrow would be a new day. The whole day I will spend with my family. And it was a close one after they asked about the water-bending. I wondered how long I would have to keep on lying.

And with all these thoughts, I fell asleep.

When I woke up, went down the stairs, everyone was missing. I looked around the house. Still no one. Where did they all go? Then the scene changed. I was in the Grand Hall of my palace. Now I see them. They are all tied up and it appears that they cannot break free. My advisor was smiling at his capture, enjoying seeing them struggle. He smiled, and threw a match into the group of my loved ones…

I woke up gasping. It’s just a dream, it’s just a dream, I thought to myself. No, it’s not a dream. It’s a nightmare. It’s just a nightmare, a nightmare. Or it can be the future. It’s not the future, it’s not the future. But there is a chance that I am endangering them. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw Opal nudging my hand. I sighed and got dressed into one of the outfits I picked last night. I shivered at the reminder. Even if that vampire did drink all my blood, I wouldn’t die. It’s just that it’ll feel so weird that someone has me like a juice box. And I do not want to be a cardboard box filled with liquid.

I opened the door.

“Stay,” I told Opal.

Please, they’ll be hunting. Then I won’t have that awkward feeling when I’m around them. But they got used to me already, and I kind of got used to them as well. I smiled when I went down the stairs.

“Good morning,” I said.

“Morning. How’s sleep?” Emmett said.

I scowled. “I didn’t know that you would like to know how sleep was.”

“He meant if you slept well.” Edward said.

“I know,” I replied. “Comfy. Pleasant. Warm. Horrible nightmare. Yea, I slept well.”

They all chuckled.

“What kind of nightmare did you have?” Jasper asked.

“I just told you, a horrible one.” And when Jasper looked like he was going to say more, I hurried up and said, “Oh, and do you have any food here?”

“Of course.” Esme said and she flitted to the kitchen. Hmm. I didn’t know vampires got kitchens. Maybe it’s because of Jacob and his other werewolf friends. Esme asked me to go to the kitchen. I did.

“What would you like, Jess?”

“Um, well its ok. You can give me anything.”

“Would you like a scrambled eggs?”

“That would be perfect,” I smiled.

She flashed a dimpled smile and sped to make my desired breakfast. She’s number one best mom already.

In less than five minutes, she handed me a plate with my early meal.

“Thanks, mom,” I said with a grin.

She looked surprised for a second, and then smiled too. And then she left the room.

I quickly swallowed down my breakfast while it was still warm. At home I can eat whatever I liked, but this breakfast had something different, something that made it delicious. Obviously the ingredient of love. Something that my palace never had. I stood up as soon as I was done and walked to the sink. I scrubbed the plate. And while I was doing that, I thought. What if my guards found me here? What if they captured the members of my family? What if, what if, what if? Ok, now I’m going crazy. What if, what if, what if? Ugh, will I stop thinking that? I am so glad Edward can’t read my mind. It would be so embarrassing. And they would know about who I am, and the danger they are in. But I can’t leave them. I love them so much already.

Also, I have to control my feelings. Because of Jasper. I was now drying the dish. I finished soon. I looked at the plate. It was shiny and it sparkled. It was a pretty good job for someone who never washed a plate before. I smiled at my handiwork, and placed it into the opened cupboard. I hesitated and went out of the kitchen. Emmett and Jasper were playing chess. I raised my eyebrows when Alice was mouthing Emmett’s next moves behind his back. She placed a finger to her lips and I shrugged and let that pass without comment. I wondered why Alice didn’t play. Then, Emmett scowled and flipped over one of his pieces. I think that was the king. I guess he got no more moves left. But what did I know anyway? I’m not interested in that board game and no one in the palace would want to teach me; they all fear that they would beat me.

I sighed and went to the couch. I saw Carlisle reading a huge book. I looked at the book in interest. Might be something I would read. He looked at me. He smiled and gestured to me. He stood up and I followed suit. I followed him until we were at his office. We went inside and I gaped at the bright room. There were paintings, and a desk that seems too old for Carlisle, or er, Dad. But what really took my interest were the books. All of them were big volumes. I’m loving this place already. Absentmindedly, I walked to one of the shelves and placed my hands over one of them and took it out.

“I know you would like those books.” Carlisle said. “From your look, I knew you are a great reader.” He smiled at me. I smiled back. We seemed to have an inaudible conservation between our smiles.

Finally I asked, “Can I take out this?”

“Of course you can. You are welcome to this office and take out any book you like.”

“Thanks, Dad. Or do you prefer Carlisle?”

“Whatever you prefer.”

“Ok. Um, thanks.”

He smiled once more and left the room. I waited a minute and went out of the office with the book in my hands and went straight to my new room. I saw Opal coming straight toward me and meowed quietly. I sighed. She was hungry. I smiled weakly and placed my book on a desk. I wondered if they would let me go shopping again after yesterday. As I turned toward the door, Alice was already there. She grinned and handed me a plastic bag. Cat food.

“I knew you would be needing this.”

“Obviously,” I said. “Thanks, Alice. You’re the best.”

“Oh, you’re welcome,” She answered. “And I know.”

And then she left with a smile. I went back over to Opal. She came to me loyally. I smiled at the little thing. I gave her a handful of treats and she ate it from my hands. Aww. She is so cute. While she ate, I thought of the same things I already thought of in the kitchen. Once again, I am glad
Edward can’t into my mind. I just feel sorry for the others. I was so deep in my minds that I didn’t even notice Opal licking my palm. Gross! I smiled at the kitten and scolded her in my mind. This was another upside; I was able to communicate with creatures with my mind. But in the end I forgave her. She’s just an immature kitten. I walked away from Opal and wiped my hands with a dry rag. Opal whined and I threw a quick smile at her.

“Don’t worry. It’s ok.”

At my words, Opal seemed to relax and her breathing did also; she also cares about me. How nice! She’s family already. I then turned to the mirror. It was the first time I looked at myself clearly since I left home. When I stared at my own reflection, I almost gasped. I always thought that at home the servants would put an enchantment on the mirrors so that I won’t become upset at my appearance. But I was sure that this mirror was not enchanted. In the mirror, I have long, straight dark-brown hair. My human eyes were dark-brown. They matched each other perfectly. My face was heart-shaped, and my body was slender and graceful, even when I wasn’t moving. I was beautiful, I had to admit. I don’t know why I was surprised. I was expected to be beautiful because I was…royal? Noble? Whatever. And then I walked out of the room.



(A/N - I would really appriciate it if you made me a banner, THANKS!!!!!)

Permalink Reply by syrah caraig on November 5, 2009 at 8:11pm

wow it's awesome...update me soon..please

Permalink Reply by Ms. Cullen on November 4, 2009 at 8:10pm

It is really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Permalink Reply by ♥♥Sarah_Lynn_Black♥♥ on November 5, 2009 at 6:09pm

OMG, i love it, please post more!!!!!!!!!!!!

Permalink Reply by syrah caraig on November 5, 2009 at 8:04pm

nice are you working on the next chapter?

Permalink Reply by Renesmee Carlie Cullen/Black on November 5, 2009 at 8:27pm

Chapter 3 - The Guilt is Killing Me Alive

As I walked down the stairs of my new house, I saw my family waiting for me. The first to speak is Esme.

“Um, Jess? When we went to Alaska to get you, we didn’t get a chance to hunt. And I’m sure you hardly hunted either. Would you like to come with us?”

She smiled a dimpled smile.

“Oh,” I said. “Ok, sure. I would like a nice meal vampire style anyway.”

And then I smiled too. I was glad I was wearing jeans today.

“But wait,” I said. “How do you feed on animals instead of humans?”

“But I thought you know,” Alice said. “You hunt animals too.”

I blushed. “I just wanted to know how you all did it.”

Carlisle was the one who answered me now. “I’ll tell you some other time. But now we need to hunt.” I nodded.

And we set off toward the forest.
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Emmett growled when the bear he was fighting tried to hit his head. The bear missed. Now I knew that Emmett likes to play with his food. Vicious food, particularly bears. I watched his little battle while sitting on a flat rock. Edward was behind some trees draining a mountain lion. I just had some deer and elk. When I was draining the animals, I remember how I would feel if I was being a snack for a vampire. So I just gave up.

When I came out of my thoughts, Emmett laughed and jumped at the bear. Then he placed his mouth near the bear’s neck and drank deeply. Edward came out of the trees with butterscotch eyes.

“Are you sure you don’t need anymore?” he asked.

“Yea, I’m sure,” I replied. “That’s pretty much why I’m just sitting here instead of hunting, you see.”

My brothers laughed. I didn’t even know Emmett was done having his bear. Well, he was.

“Ok, everyone good?” Carlisle asked. I didn’t see him coming.

“Yea, I think we all are good,” Jasper said. I didn’t know he was here either until he actually spoke.

Carlisle nodded and gestured us all to follow him home. We were practically flying through the green forest. We traveled in silence. Not that I don’t like it; I liked it more that way. That way, I don’t need to deal with questions and talking to my family. I get all nervous and embarrassed. The feeling feels weird. After a few moments, we were out of the forest. Less than a minute, we saw the white house. We then walked inside and sat down on the couches or chairs.

“Ok, Jess,” Carlisle said. “Tell us about yourself.”

This is exactly what I feared. “Er, what do you want to know?” I asked ruefully.

“How did you become a vampire?” Rosalie asked, cutting off Carlisle.

“Um…” I said, not knowing if I should lie again or tell the truth and put them in danger. But wouldn’t it be better if they knew about the danger they are in first?

They all patiently waited for me to answer. They seem to understand why I took so long, but I think they think that I don’t want to discuss about it. I sighed. I might as well tell them the whole story. They are too nice and they are family. Family members shouldn’t keep secrets, should they? I didn’t have a family before so I don’t know about them. Typical. I didn’t realize it, but tears ran down my face. I didn’t know that I changed forms already from vampire to human. It’s like my body knew that I should cry.

“Jess, what’s wrong?” Nessie asked me. I already adopted her nickname.

I kept crying, avoiding their eyes.

“Seriously, Jess! Why are you crying?” Esme asked.

I hastily wiped away the wetness in my eyes and looked at their faces. Some looked troubled, some looked confused, and still some looked sympathetic.

“I’m sorry!” I burst out. “I lied to you! I’m not even a vampire. I don’t deserve to be part of your family!”

And then I couldn’t take it anymore. I ran out of the room and out of the house.

I stopped at the edge of the river. I sat down at the bank and cried silently. I wiped away the tears that had betrayed me and looked up at the sunset. And I felt a sudden urge to cry again. I buried my head into my knees and I did.

I didn’t know how long I had been sitting here crying. I felt humiliated and weak. But it was a feeling I had for a long, long time. Finally, I raised my head from my knees. Gladly, it was still sunset. So I wasn’t crying here for a lengthy time. I sighed and took a deep breath. I still wasn’t ready to face the Cullens again. I kept staring ahead at the sunset. It’s so beautiful on this planet. I can’t bear to leave Earth. I’m leaving everything I love here and go back to my home with nothing for me to love. Well, there’s always the books. But even if I don’t leave Earth, my family would be punished. Maybe the whole planet would be punished. It would all my fault. I was so deep in my mind that I didn’t even notice everyone come and sit next to me.

They all were quiet, probably afraid that they would make me cry again. After a few minutes, I started to talk. To let them know that I am very dangerous and to get that big rock heaved from my chest.

“You know, I ran away from home. I am really not a vampire. I am the princess of the universe,” When I said those words, I heard a few gasps. But I kept on talking.

“I left my home because I was supposed to marry the sun prince. It was an arranged marriage. So I decided to come to Earth to avoid the wedding. And then I met you all,” I looked at everyone.

“So why do you feel so bad?” Edward asked. “You were right to leave.”

“Because I endangered you all for staying here. My people never listen to me, so they would think you kidnapped me or something. So I put you all in danger, and probably I endangered the planet too.”

It’s really surprising how easy I could speak with them now. “Well, they don’t know where you are now right?” Bella said. I nodded.

“Then you can still live with us.”

Emmett looked annoyed. Obviously he wanted to fight with more experienced people and creatures. I think there are a few vampires in my guard. Or maybe a few hundred. I don’t know.
Even Jasper seemed to want to fight. Carlisle looked like he wanted to talk them out of fighting. Me too. I sighed and stood up. They all did too.

“Well, I guess I could stay for a little longer,” I agreed with Bella. And then we walked toward the house.

Permalink Reply by Makizzle on November 8, 2009 at 10:29am

awesome!!! write more please!!!!!!!!!!!

Permalink Reply by Renesmee Carlie Cullen/Black on November 9, 2009 at 8:14pm

she is not a vampire!!! i read through it and she is not a vamp

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