Kay well this is my first fan fiction and i don't think i''m a very good writing so this is probably really bad,sorry its so short:)Well anyways on With the story:)
p.s this about 9 years after Renesmee was born , her and Jake have loved each other for about 2 years.
Jacob's Point of view
I woke up early and looked over at Nessie, still asleep on the Cullen's couch, we both tanked here last night so we just stayed the night where we were. Minutes after i woke up Ness woke up. I went over to her "I'll be back in a few minutes' "Okay" I kissed her on the cheek said "I love you" than ran out the door, the sooner i was done what i need to do, the sooner i could see Nessie again, that made me run even faster. While i ran to Edward and Bella's cottage i was thinking of what i was going to be talking to them about. I got there and knocked on the door , Edward was there before i could take one breath. "Come in" he invited. I told them what i was thinking, they thought it was a good idea, so i went back to Renesmee.After i was dressed i went to Port Angeles to go ring shopping!
Renesmee's Point of view
"Come on Jake, just tell me what the birthday gift is!' i begged, wondering what this gift that was apparently the best gift ever was. He'd been bragging about it for days. "Okay come with me" He said, grinning. "Um Jake?" we were at a beautiful little place, full of flowers and trees with a little stream. "Shhh" is all he said. "Not to be rude but, i thought you were giving me my birthday gift?" I asked, confusion in my voice. "I am" he said quietly as he slid down on one knee. Now i finally figured out my gift.
"Nessie," he began. " I love you more than anything in this world, and i want to spend the rest of my life, no, the rest of forever with you, beside you. I hope you feel the same way too. So here it goes." he paused for a brief second than started talking again "Renesmee Carlie Cullen, will you marry me?"he asked me , while pulling the most beautiful ring i have ever seen out of his pocket. I didn't realize till now i was crying. "Of course I'll marry you Jacob!" I said, my eyes blurred with tears. He smiled and put the ring that was now mine on my finger, where it would stay forever. "Thank you" he said, his voice and face filled with happiness. Very gently he took my face in his hands and leaned in for a kiss. This was the first time we had ever kissed , besides on the cheek, and I'm glad we waited, because the glory of our first kiss made the moment so much more special. We stood there for minutes, without breaking away for air, i had never been so happy in my life and i wished we would never have to stop , but soon enough we both had to break away for air. When we did, we just stared deep into each others eyes. Finally i had to break the silence saying " I love you Jake". "I love you too Nessie, Happy Birthday" he replied smiling. Then we sat down and watched the perfect day come to and end.
So i hope you like the first chapter , comment and tell me what you thought and maybe if you have any ideas for what would happen in the next chapter which i will be starting soon! loveee-kristen