The Black Swan

this is my second fanfic. the first one didnt work out and it was my fault for not posting fast enough. so here is my second try, and i promise to udpate this ASAP. please be patient with me and dont give up on me if i dont reply very fast, im in an honors program at school, which means school, homework, shower, sleep. i do get free time and ill use as much of it as i can to wright more for you guys. a banner will be up soon! just bear with me please.

i will write more soon, and please give me some feedback! =)

almost every one is human, you'll have to read to find out whose not. =)

Banners Welcome!

Im Trying to make it that with every major step in the story a new banner will be put up to describe it sort of... (as in below Bella was alone, her world was plain, she had short black hair... get it?)

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Another one made by me. i got bored, but i wanted to try new things too. =)

what do you think?

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Prolouge:

i looked into his eyes and saw only pain. how could i have been so stupid? this was everything i had wanted, everything i had ever dreamed of from the very first day i started school here. this was all my fault, and now i was paying for it.

"im so sorry, you have to believe me"

"i want to, i really want to, but i dont think i can..."

as he walked away i felt the tears start fall over the ridges of my eyes. i sank against the wall and watched him, all up untill he became to small, and to blurry for my eyes to see anymore. i closed them and pulled my knees up. i fell, fell into the black desperation, and self pity that were now closing over me.

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Permalink Reply by Aileen Cullen on October 9, 2010 at 6:32pm

Aaaww!.. I´m gonna send u Protect-the-story-Vampires!..

and there gonna protect it ;-]
GHehe
and btw Ur not the only one ''liking it'' cuzz We LOVEE it! <3

u Love writing it and we love reading it
Everyone is Happy =]

Love ur banners btw and maybe gonna send u pic's =]
kay.?
the last chapter was a bit chort but still Amazing Just Like u <33

Xxx Ly!..Lills

Permalink Reply by Claire Who? on October 9, 2010 at 6:49pm

=D thank you SO much!
you just like made my day!
and of course!
send the pics and tell me what you want done to it!
ill do my best...
just to let you know though...
when i make my banners and pics and stuff..
i try to make them look simple..
haha like my banners and pics really only have writing the pics and maybe a few stamps..
i dont like all that extra fluffy stuff.
=p

Permalink Reply by Claire Who? on October 9, 2010 at 1:49pm

okay everyone.. Chapter 15 is kinda short, sorry... but please enjoy!
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excuse all errors!
haha

Chapter Fifteen

they had to be contacts.
how could his eyes change color like that if it wasnt contacts?
he changed pace. he was no longer trying to get me to believe him.
he tried a new tactic.
"look.. Bella when i came back from the bathroom i couldnt find you."
"believe me when i say i didnt move."
"really?" he sounded like he was getting angry. "because i came back to where we were and you werent there. i looked everywhere. i couldnt find you."
"i didnt move. your lying."
"no, im not. because when i finally did find you... you were with Mike. he had his hands up your skirt." he voice turned cold.
"he was drunk, Edward. its not like a stood there and let him touch me." i was exasperated. where was his mind? did he really believe what he was saying?
"yeah sure." his voice was not the velvet voice i was used to. it was cold, hard, and it matched his eyes now.
"come on Edward dont be like this." i started to panic. i couldnt lose him, no matter how angry i was, i couldnt let him go... "you have to believe me!"
the teacher shooshed us. he gave me the cold shoulder for the rest of class.
tears welled in my eyes.

he all but ran when the bell rang.

i drove home, and when i got there, i ignored Charlie, and went straight to my bedroom.
a few hours later he came up and knocked on my door, "Bells, dinner is ready."
i didnt answer him. when he opened my door i pretended i was asleep.
when my alarm went off i dragged my butt out of bed and threw on the first thing in my closet.
i looked as bad as i did yesterday.

the day went by slowly. all up untill lunch. i couldnt understand this.
i didnt know what i had done to him to make him so angry with me...
he was the one that ditched me.... right?
i had to talk to him.
i needed answers. so i cornered him.

at first he looked suprised and scared.
"Edward please..."
i looked into his eyes and saw only pain. how could i have been so stupid? this was everything i had wanted, everything i had ever dreamed of from the very first day
i started school here.
this was all my fault, and now i was paying for it.
"im so sorry, Edward, you have to believe me"
"i want to, i really want to, Bella.. but i dont think i can..."
as he walked away i felt the tears start fall over the ridges of my eyes. i sank against the wall and watched him,
all up untill he became to small, and to blurry for my eyes to see anymore. i closed them and pulled my knees up. i fell, fell into the black desperation,
and self pity that were now closing over me.

Permalink Reply by Claire Who? on October 9, 2010 at 1:50pm

What do you think?

Permalink Reply by Angie♪ on October 9, 2010 at 2:03pm

ahhh!! u have me crazy trying o figure out what happened!!!, but I love i!!!XD

Permalink Reply by Claire Who? on October 9, 2010 at 2:08pm

haha thanks you guys!
ill put more up soon! promise!
=)

Permalink Reply by sherry williams on October 15, 2010 at 7:08am

omg
nooooo
poor bella and edward
WHY did they do this because he was really happy without them
still love the story

Permalink Reply by Ɖαωи ˩ɛσи on July 2, 2011 at 11:11am

Ugh, why is Edward so angry. Bella should've said I waited for you 1/2 an hour and got worried and started to look everywhere for you and went outside and your car was gone.

Ugh, why is he acting like that.

Love your story

Permalink Reply by Bella Swan {Ultimate Twi-fan!} on October 9, 2010 at 2:44pm