The Twilight Saga

The Broken Moon

 

chapter 1 the end ( the starting of this is chapter 3 of new moon and doesnot belone to me it belongs to shepine meyer.) We'd gone only a few steps into the trees when he stopped. We were barely on the trail–I could still see the house. Some walk. Edward leaned against a tree and stared at me, his expression unreadable. "Okay, let's talk," I said. It sounded braver than it felt. He took a deep breath. "Bella, we're leaving." I took a deep breath, too. This was an acceptable option. I thought I was prepared. But I still had to ask. "Why now? Another year–" "Bella, it's time. How much longer could we stay in Forks, after all? Carlisle can barely pass for thirty, and he's claiming thirty-three now. We'd have to start over soon regardless." His answer confused me. I thought the point of leaving was to let his family live in peace. Why did we have to leave if they were going? I stared at him, trying to understand what he meant. He stared back coldly. With a roll of nausea, I realized I'd misunderstood. "When you say we–," I whispered. "I mean my family and myself." Each word separate and distinct. I shook my head back and forth mechanically, trying to clear it. He waited without any sign of impatience. It took a few minutes before I could speak. "Okay," I said. "I'll come with you." "You can't, Bella. Where we're going… It's not the right place for you." "Where you are is the right place for me." "I'm no good for you, Bella." "Don't be ridiculous." I wanted to sound angry, but it just sounded like I was begging. "You're the very best part of my life." "My world is not for you," he said grimly. "What happened with Jasper–that was nothing, Edward! Nothing!" "You're right," he agreed. "It was exactly what was to be expected." "You promised! In Phoenix, you promised that you would stay–" "As long as that was best for you," he interrupted to correct me. "No! This is about my soul, isn't it?" I shouted, furious, the words exploding out of me–somehow it still sounded like a plea. "Carlisle told me about that, and I don't care, Edward. I don't care! You can have my soul. I don't want it without you–it's yours already!" He took a deep breath and stared, unseeingly, at the ground for a long moment. His mouth twisted the tiniest bit. When he finally looked up, his eyes were different, harder–like the liquid gold had frozen solid. "Bella, I don't want you to come with me." He spoke the words slowly and precisely, his cold eyes on my face, watching as I absorbed what he was really saying. There was a pause as I repeated the words in my head a few times, sifting through them for their real intent. "You… don't… want me?" I tried out the words, confused by the way they sounded, placed in that order. "No." I stared, uncomprehending, into his eyes. He stared back without apology. His eyes were like topaz–hard and clear and very deep. I felt like I could see into them for miles and miles, yet nowhere in rheir bottomless depths could I see a contradiction to the word he'd spoken. "Well, that changes things." I was surprised by how calm and reasonable my voice sounded. It must be because I was so numb. I couldn't realize what he was telling me. It still didn't make any sense. He looked away into the trees as he spoke again. "Of course, I'll always love you… in a way. But what happened the other night made me realize that it's time for a change. Because I'm… tired of pretending to be something I'm not, Bella. I am not human." He looked back, and the icy planes of his perfect face were not human. "I've let this go on much too long, and I'm sorry for that." "Don't." My voice was just a whisper now; awareness was beginning to seep through me, trickling like acid through my veins. "Don't do this." He just stared at me, and I could see from his eyes that my words were far too late. He already had. "You're not good for me, Bella." He turned his earlier words around, and so I had no argument. How well I knew that I wasn't good enough for him. I opened my mouth to say something, and then closed it again. He waited patiently, his face wiped clean of all emotion. I tried again. "If… that's what you want." He nodded once. My whole body went numb. I couldn't feel anything below the neck. "I would like to ask one favor, though, if that's not too much," he said. I wonder what he saw on my face, because something flickered across his own face in response. But, before I could identify it, he'd composed his features into the same serene mask. "Anything," I vowed, my voice faintly stronger. As I watched, his frozen eyes melted. The gold became liquid again, molten, burning down into mine with an intensity that was overwhelming. "Don't do anything reckless or stupid," he ordered, no longer detached. "Do you understand what I'm saying?" I nodded helplessly. His eyes cooled, the distance returned. "I'm thinking of Charlie, of course. He needs you. Take care of yourself–for him." I nodded again. "I will," I whispered. He seemed to relax just a little. "And I'll make you a promise in return," he said. "I promise that this will be the last time you'll see me. I won't come back. I won't put you through anything like this again. You can go on with your life without any more interference from me. It will be as if I'd never existed." My knees must have started to shake, because the trees were suddenly wobbling. I could hear the blood pounding faster than normal behind my ears. His voice sounded farther away. He smiled gently. "Don't worry. You're human–your memory is no more than a sieve. Time heals all wounds for your kind." "And your memories?" I asked. It sounded like there was something stuck in my throat, like I was choking. "Well"–he hesitated for a short second–"I won't forget. But my kind… we're very easily distracted." He smiled; the smile was tranquil and it did not touch his eyes. He took a step away from me. "That's everything, I suppose. We won't bother you again." The plural caught my attention. That surprised me; I would have thought I was beyond noticing anything. "Alice isn't coming back," I realized. I don't know how he heard me–the words made no sound–but he seemed to understand. He shook his head slowly, always watching my face. "No. They're all gone. I staved behind to tell you goodbye." "Alice is gone?" My voice was blank with disbelief. "She wanted to say goodbye, but I convinced her that a clean break would be better for you." I was dizzy; it was hard to concentrate. His words swirled around in my head, and I heard the doctor at the hospital in Phoenix, last spring, as he showed me the X-rays. You can see it's a clean break, his finger traced along the picture of my severed bone. That's good. It will heal more easily, more quickly. I tried to breathe normally. I needed to concentrate, to find a way out of this nightmare. "Goodbye, Bella," he said in the same quiet, peaceful voice. "Wait!" I choked out the word, reaching for him, willing my deadened legs to carry me forward. I thought he was reaching for me, too. But his cold hands locked around my wrists and pinned them to my sides. He leaned down, and pressed his lips very lightly to my forehead for the briefest instant. My eyes closed. "Take care of yourself," he breathed, cool against my skin. There was a light, unnatural breeze. My eyes flashed open. The leaves on a small vine maple shuddered with the gentle wind of his passage. He was gone. With shaky legs, ignoring the fact that my action was useless, I followed him into the forest. The evidence of his path had disappeared instantly. There were no footprints, the leaves were still again, but I walked forward without thinking. I could not do anything else. I had to keep moving. If I stopped looking for him, it was over. Love, life, meaning… over. I walked and walked. Time made no sense as I pushed slowly through the thick undergrowth. It was hours passing, but also only seconds. Maybe it felt like time had frozen because the forest looked the same no matter how far I went. I started to worry that I was traveling in a circle, a very small circle at that, but I kept going. I stumbled often, and, as it grew darker and darker, I fell often, too. Finally, I tripped over something–it was black now, I had no idea what caught my foot–and I stayed down. I rolled onto my side, so that I could breathe, and curled up on the wet bracken. As I lay there, I had a feeling that more time was passing than I realized. I couldn't remember how long it had been since nightfall. Was it always so dark here at night? Surely, as a rule, some little bit of moonlight would filter down through the clouds, through the chinks in the canopy of trees, and find the ground. Not tonight. Tonight the sky was utterly black. Perhaps there was no moon tonight–a lunar eclipse, a new moon. A new moon. I shivered, though I wasn't cold. maybe the moon was broken. lost in the day without her sun. completly diferent beings... but what if the moon loved then sun? what if the moon got so used to being in the suns world that she sould never find her way back to her own? that poor moon. The Broken Moon. edwar was my sun and i would never find my world again. i belonged in his. with him. what if that moon wanted to be apart of the day instead of night? It was black for a long time before I heard them calling. Someone was shouting my name. i didn't bother to move. more and more times i eard people calling my name. i heard footsteps come closer... and then go away again. i didn't want to be found. i wanted to die. i had to move or they would find me. but how? every time i moved even a little it felt like another peace of my heart fell off. but it would be better for the pain to go away.so i lokked around i could see a cave.i crawled into it. "no bella!" i heard his voise call. i lokked around... no one.was he watching me. i heard more foot steps. i went further into the cave. "bella no come out of the cave. let them see you and take you to charlie."he told me. charlie. oh ya.was i really going to leave him? but it was to late it was all dark and quiet now. "they are gone now edward it's to late. i am going to die now." i told him. i layed my head on the ice cold ground. "no bella get up! stand up they are not far from here. get up and out of the cave and yell to them they will come!" he yelled. "no edward, i would rather die here."i told him. "bella n-" and i sliped away. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ so should i wright more? and no bella is not dead just sleeping. *MORE STORYS BY THIS AUTHER* My Guardian Devil summery: have you ever felt bad for rosalie for not having a child? well an 11 year old girl named kerigan has been abused by her father since her mother died. when her father shot her in the shoulder she new it was enofe and ran away. almost dead rosalie finds her. see what happens next!!! http://www.thetwilightsaga.com/group/fanfiction/forum/topics/my-gua... Crazy Wrong love this is a new twilight story. bella just moved to forks and edward and rosalie are together and they are the cullens with carlisle as there father. another pack of vege vamps move there two. emmett alice and jasper hale. esme is a house disiner.emmett and alice are together. jasper loves bella, bella loves edward,edward loves rosalie and bella ,rosalie loves emmett and edward, emmett loves rosalie and loves alice and alice has a HUGE cruch on jasper. this is just all crazy wrong love. will anything end the way it should? will emmett and rosalie be together? will edward and bella? with jasper and alice? or will esme and carlisle? Impossible Love anybody here like carmen? from the denil coven? i found her cool so i invented her past. plez read! carmen was a regular everyday girl. when she was young she had black hair instead of brown(i'll explan later) she had a best friend named chase. she and him where outsiders. but one day chase started o avodie her. she tryed to vist but chases dad wouldn't alow it. when she was walking home a vampire was passing by. disided to have her as a late night snack. he bit her but chase and his werewolf buddy derek chased him off. she was turned. learn about the great advenchers they go on together. will they someday fall in love? http://www.thetwilightsaga.com/group/fanfiction/forum/topics/inposs... http://www.thetwilightsaga.com/group/fanfiction/forum/topics/crazy-...

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Permalink Reply by Marie Volturi aka Alec's ONLY gf on November 4, 2009 at 7:00pm
YES YOU SHOULD WRITE IT! OH AND JUST A SUGGESTION, THE PART FROM NEW MOON, OR ANY OTHER BOOK, YOU SHOULD WRITE IN ITALICS B/C IT'S KIND OF PLAGERISM OTHERWISE
Permalink Reply by partay!VAMP on November 4, 2009 at 7:04pm
interesting twist at the end!
i love it!
can't wait for more =D
pleazZ let me know when u update!!!
Permalink Reply by ♥TeamEdward♥(BellaCullen!) on November 4, 2009 at 7:19pm
i will! thank u guys vary much.
it will get alot better... u just wait.
Permalink Reply by Bells on November 5, 2009 at 12:35am
yes yes hell yes
u should write more
u start typing
right now
till your fingers bleed
this story sounds oresome
plz write more
u defienetly have a fan in me
plz plz add me as a friend and keep me posted
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Permalink Reply by Renesmee_Carlie_Mason_Cullen on November 5, 2009 at 1:15am
more , gosh that`s better than new moon sorry to everyone who loves new moon
Permalink Reply by DeeDee Cullen on November 5, 2009 at 4:31am
wow that was amazing plz write more soon and keep me updated thanks
Permalink Reply by ♥TeamEdward♥(BellaCullen!) on November 5, 2009 at 8:15am
chapter 2 pain, pain oh and gess what! more pain.
i slowly lifted my head up. it spun like crazy. i couldn't see... everything was all blurry. i shook my head. it felt like someone had smashed it with a hammer."ow!' i said gripping my head. then i heard a sound.
drip drip drip.
i went towards to sound.
dril drip drip.
i was reallly close now.... i reached my hand toward the driping sound. i felt water. i washed my eyes with it. now i could see. i was still in the cave. i was really thursty so i cupped my hands and dipped them into the water. the water looked fine it was crystle clear. beautiful. reminded me my of edwards skin when it sparkled. i loved his skin... his soft marble skin. just then a sharp pain went aganest my ceast."ow!" i let out a scream i hugged my lags to my cheast. it felt like a million knives stabbing my heart. i know what he would do if he where here. he would hug me to him tell me it was ok and that the pain would go away. he would be kissing my hair. with his wonderful lips. my most favorit thing in the world to do is kiss his or when he kisses my hair. another wave of pain hit my heart. i disided to go to sleep. there was no pain there. well... unless i had a bad dream. i layed down. it was vary uncofterbul.i crawled out of the cave. i grabed a few handfuls of leaves and i could maybe make a bed out of it. then i relized... it would take to long. and when ever i brought some in they would probley blow away with the wind. so i lokked for something else. there was nothing! "urg!" i leaned on a bush and layed there. it was vary cozy. wate i sec.... maybe i could pull it up from the roots! i griped on the bottom of it and tugged. i wasn't strong enof. but edward would want me to proteck myself in the best way... edward wants me to do this. so i yanked harder....
edward wants me to do this
edward wants me to do this
i chanted in my mind. it hert to think of his name. but i did it. i went flying when i pulled out the bush.when i landed on the ground it was soft. it was a big bunch of grass.i took both the bush and the big bunch of grass in the cave. the bush as a pillow and the grass as a blanket. i imaged edward right beside me humming my lulabye. i drifted off to sleep i wish this was all a dream.
when i woke up i was in my room edward beside me.
"did you have a bad dream love?" he asked me
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now i know it's not vary long but i g2g 2 school. hope u like this chappie!
Permalink Reply by SplishSplashStyle on November 8, 2009 at 7:26pm
plz keep me updated :)
THis is really good :)
Permalink Reply by ♥TeamEdward♥(BellaCullen!) on November 9, 2009 at 8:21pm
chapter 3 what happend?
i sat up. "edward?" i asked.
"yes love?" he asked. "oh edward!" i yelled tossing my self into his arms.
"shh love... it's ok." he kissed my hair. it felt just like i rememberd. i wept in his arms."love whats wrong? what happpend in your dream? you kept saying no edward and no edward i want to die. it scared me." he told me. his voise full of pain.
"e-e-e-edward i d-d-d-d-on-t-t what-t-t to talk-k-k-k about-t-t-t-t i-i-it. it might h-h-h-ert you-u-u-u to hear-r-r-r it." i told him.
"it's ok love i am strong enofe to handle it." he said strokeing my hair.
"i had a drean you left me." i told him. "bella i would never leave you." he told me hugging me closer.
"and even if i ever did... i would always be there makeing sure you where safe. alive." i couldn't help myselff anymore i lifted up my head and kissed him. he kissed me back more than he has ever kissed me before. we stayed like that glued together.soon it started to feel like i was kisssing hair. i opend my eyes. i was. he wasgone i was in a black room. "EDWARD!' i screamed wakeing in the cave again.
i knew i had to take care of myself for edward because i knew he was here... watching. i am kind of happy that i had that dream.. it reminded me he was there. makeing sure i am safe. so i got up drank some water ate some barrys... and life went on just like this.
3 MONTHS LATER
i woke p like every other moring screaming dreaming o the day when edward left me. it was exactly three months ago that he left me.
"good moring edward." i said out loud. i treated my everyday like he was there. i washed my face in the cold water and took a drink. i nibbed on a few barrys. i wasn't hugrey.i never was. i walked outside. there was sun today.
i layed out on the grass and let the warm sun hit my skin. only a little came through the tall trees.
"i love you edward." i wisperd. a red leaf fell on my head. i looked at it. it was shapped as a heart. i cryed like i did everyday and hugged it to me. then i heard russling in the trees. i sat up and ran into the cave. no one could findme and take me away from my cave. i peeked out. no one was there. then i felf a cold hand touch me. i turned around. i gasped.
"hello beautiful." i man said. he had black hair pail skin red eyes no to menchen the blood all over his shirt. he was a vampire i just new it.i backed away. i girl was behind me. she looked just like im. same black hair. her hair was down to her shoulders. i could feel her breath on my neck her teeth just inchess from my neck.
"what lila!" i stoped her. " i think i want to kept this one." he told lila. "oh... well ok milo. i know you have been without a mate for 100 years. if you really want her... you can have her." she said. milo nodded. she smiled.
"i know what you are!" i yelled to them. :of cores to do." lila said digging her teeth into my soft neck. i let out a scream.
i know whats happing. edwar told me about when he was turned into a vampire. he said it was more pain then you could ever amagen. and it was. i remember when james snapped my leg. i would take that compared to this. i would take it 200 times and be thankful for it.
"what id you name?" milo asked. i didn't even want him to know my name.
"marie." i tolds him screaming again.
"well hello i am milo. you will be living with me and my sister lila. we are vampire and now you are bein-"
"i know i know turned into a vampire i told you i know what you are!" i snapped at him. "wow she does. i gessed she was she was going to say something like you guys are murdders or robbers." lila moned. milo leaned down to me and kissed me. i tryed to brake free but there was know way. i was trapped with theseto vampires. no way out. what am i going to do? maybe after the trance formation i can frn away and finds the cullens.
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i know i haven't writen in a long time. and i am sorry. i was really busy this week. i had three tests i had to study for.
Permalink Reply by ♥TeamEdward♥(BellaCullen!) on November 13, 2009 at 7:19pm
chapter 4 trying to escape
my heart flutterd at it's last beats. milo was still leaning over me waiting for me to be done tranceforming.
my heart gave it's last beat and stoped. the fire stopped along with it. my eyes flutterd open. i wasn't in my cave anymore.
i was in a wonderful manstion.
"well good moring marie." i heard that bomming voise say. milo. i sat up. i could see alot better. i could see milos perfect feachers his dark red eyes with i tint of black. his curly clack cut short hair. and i just relized how perfect and eautiful lila is. her long black hair her wonderful eyes blood red. no black like milos.
she was really beautiful. almost as beautiful as rosalie. no one was as beautiful as edwards perfect sister.i could hear the wind in the trees a long way from here. i could here cars passing by splashing water everywhere. i could here every drop hit the ground.
"who are you?" i asked them. lila smiled.
"i am lila i am 19 this is my younger brother milo he is 3." she said giggleing
"lila! i am not three i am 17." he said hissing at his sister. it was kinda funny.
"well, anyways welcome to our tiny coven. this is the vandone coven." milo welcomed. he seemed nice.. but he did forsably kiss me.
"um. thanks but i can't join your coven." i said. milo looked at me upset." oh please? your my mate. my life." milo said. "um milo thats sweet but i am not your mate. my mate is somewhere out there and i ned to find him. his name is edward i am his and no one elses." i told him. "but marie you mine!" he pulled me towards him and kissed me. i grouled and tossed his across the room. "DON'T EVER TOUGH ME AGAIN!" i yelled. only then i cought a glance of myself in the mirror. that wasn't me... it was a beatiful inchanchress her skin pain wight her eyes blood red her hair a dark brown her lips dark and plump she was gorgess. lila came at me and tackled me.
"NOW HURT MY BROTHER AGAIN AND I WILL KILL YOU!" she screamed. she started into my eyes and a wave of pain wased over me. i let out a yelp.
"lila it'sok. i'm fine." milo said getting up. lila stopped looking at me and the pain was gone. "now you will love my brother stay in our coven and like it or i will kill you and your lover." she told me. for once i was more scared than ever. "now milo i think you should take her hunting." lila told milo."ok lila." milo took my hand and lead me out the door and into the city. we crossed the road like anyother person walked slowly like anyother person and talked like anyother person. "ok now breath in." i did. i smelled many humans. 'now see all the humans here... pick the one that smells the greatest." m glared at him. "what!! no i am not hunting humans i am going to hunt animals." i told him fermly i ran to the forests. he cought my arm and dragged me to the same place. "see that one over there. she smells wonderful now let your senses take over and attack." he told me. the girl he was pointing to was some one i knew... angala. hepushed me for word to her. "no i am not hunting humans now you can kill me if you want but i am not and i repeat not killing humans." this time i ran into the forest and he didn't catch me. when i was in the forest i let my senses take over and followed a wonderful sent... of a coger maybe? i followed it. yes it was a coger two. a male and a female. i took out the male first. sucked it dry. then i went for the female. but befoe i knew it she was going into a cave to protect her young. i sighed i couldn't kill her her children needed her. so i left and settled for some deer. when i was done milo was right there. "well hello again. that was pretty amazing. i could never think a new born could control there thurst for humans so well hum." he said. "you must be gifted." he smiled and kissed me. i put my hands to his chest to push him away but i heard lilas low hiss coming for the bushes. so i just shut down and waited for it to end.
1 MONTH LATER
Permalink Reply by ♪Audra♪ on November 13, 2009 at 7:30pm
OMG more
keep me updated
=D
Permalink Reply by ♥TeamEdward♥(BellaCullen!) on November 13, 2009 at 7:44pm
i will! i am so happy i got some people reading it!

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