Edward has a troubled life but a little girl named Bella pull him through?
I curled my toes over the edge, looking down at the world. I felt the rough surface of the cliff cut into my skin and welcomed the slight distraction, but it wasn’t possible to forget this pain if only for a moment. How did I get here? I closed my eyes and tilted my head back. I let my lungs expand to their limits with the frozen winter air. I could hear voices in my head but the only one I cared about was her soft voice calling out to me.
“Edward, I love you.”
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