Time. It seemed to stop. I saw people, walking around me, but I couldn't focus on any of them. They all knew. They all knew I wasn't normal. That I was half human and half something else. I started to breath in and out. Although I was breathing, my chest felt tight. I started to cry. I started to panic. I started to smell the teen's blood. My throat felt like it was on fire. I started to cry more and my eyes were getting blurry...
"Nessie?" I jumped up from my bed, breathing heavily. I rubbed my eyes and noticed there were no tears. I sighed in relief. It was just a dream. A horrible nightmare at that. I looked up and noticed my dad looking at me. I crawled over to him and hugged him tight. I whispered. "I'm scared, Dad." I felt his chest go up and down, like he was laughing. "You have nothing to be worried about Nessie. You're human. You'll fit right now." He kissed the top of my forehead and looked at me. I smiled and saw my mom walk in. She was beautiful. Her skin was flawless and her eyes were starting to turn from red to gold. I sighed and looked at her. I hoped that I could be that beautiful some day. My mom walked over to me and sat down on the bed. She took my hand and held it in hers. Her hand was cold, like the rest of her body. She looked at me and sighed. "I'm just not ready to send her, Edward. What if she isn't ready?" My mom looked over at my dad. My dad just shook his head. "She's ready Bella. I can tell." My mom didn't look so convinced. I smiled at her and hugged her. She hugged me tight and let go. My mom and dad both got up, hand in hand and walked out. I got out of my bed and started to get dress for school. I heard a car coming towards the house and looked outside. Jacob Black appeared in the driveway and got out of the car. He raced up to the door and just walked in. He said his hellos and come up to my room. He smiled when he saw me. I smiled back. Jacob had "imprinted" on me. Whatever that meant. "You look nice." I giggled and took a bow. "Thank you" He took my things and we walked out of my room. I said goodbye to dad, mom, Alice and Esme. Everyone else was hunting. I walked out of the house and into Jacob's car. He put my things in the backseat and started the car. We headed to our first day of senior year. My first year as a student...
Please comment what you think. I would appreciate it. Thank you for taking the time to read my story. (:
sounds pretty good, yes you should continue :-)
Thank you. (: It means a lot. I know it's boring but that's how I like to write. Like a roller coaster. The ride up is boring but once you get to the top, it's all worth it. :D
Deff. keep it up. I'm enjoying this very much. Your writing style is great and has a perfect way of expressing emotion. I love it.
Thank you. (:
Seems appealing. You should continue