The Twilight Saga

The Honeymoon - Edward's POV (Chapters 2-7 of Breaking Dawn)
Twi, this banner is SO AWESOME! Thanks for sharing you're computer hacking genius with us lowly techtards. You are so talented it should be illegal. *grins*

Thank you, Sweet Cullen, for giving me permission to post this gorgeous picture. I have not found a more perfect depiction of Edward and Bella on Isle Esme ANYWHERE!

Lynn, thanks for making this. It looks like a book cover! (A VERY HOT book cover)

Thank you, Tami, for the honor of recognizing the Honeymoon with this banner. I really appreciate your support and friendship!
Ever since I received my first reader-comments on the old Twilight Saga website, I knew I wanted to write a PG-13 version. While my original story was intended for an audience of women like me (married, kids, etc), I wanted to share Edward’s POV with everyone who wanted more from that part of Breaking Dawn.

Somewhere along the way, The Honeymoon evolved into something much bigger, and I eventually wrote most of Breaking Dawn, Book 1 from Edward’s POV. However, the name, ‘The Honeymoon’, remains because that was my first inspiration.

I have a couple rules which I request that you follow:
1. If you want to share this story with friends, my preference is that you send them the link to this website. I don’t mind people e-mailing or even printing the story, but please do not post the file on any other website. I have chosen three websites to host the story, and those are where it will remain.

2. If you e-mail or print the story, do not alter it in any way. Most importantly, the dedication pages must always be included as part of the document.

1. I have included several songs that I feel match certain scenes within the story. Most are available if you search Youtube. I will try to add links soon. I encourage you to play them while you read those sections. You won’t be disappointed!

2. Many people have asked me what other stories I have written.

I have two other stories posted here:
‘Against All Odds’: This is a one-shot scene with Edward and Bella. Edward is mute, Bella is blind, but they discover love despite their disabilities.

'Fate Unfolding': This is a Halloween One-Shot where we see what MIGHT have happened if Edward had been strong enough to stay away from Bella when she first moved to Forks. Some things were just meant to be, one way or another.

3. Finally, this story is complete. I have no intention of writing any other parts of Breaking Dawn from Edward’s POV. However, the following authors have all written some beautiful stories. I recommend you read them!

Mary Hubbell, The Cottage, The Garden, Inferno, Swan Song, Sunset Serenades

Amber, The Meadow

CD, Edward’s Story from 1918 to the 1950’s

Jillian, Midnight Sun, the continuation

Erica, Eclipse EPOV

If I missed any, e-mail me and I’ll add them to the list here!

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This was an amazing piece of work, I was so impressed and emagined that I was reading this from S. Meyer's own hand. I'm not sure if you have, but, if you have not already done so, consider the remainder of BD from EPOVs and please add me as a friend. I have truly enjoyed your writing and am looking forward to more.
Thank you so much! Many people have asked and I HAVE considered continuing the story. However, I have many other pressing projects and I won't be writing more of Breaking Dawn any time soon. I do, however, need to update the links here with other great Edward POV Fan Fictions. Anyone who has suggestions, send me a message with the link! We love us some EDWARD!
when i seen SM's partial draft of midnight sun, i wished she would re-write all 4 books from Edwards POV..... it just makes things so much more interesting. and breaking dawn was by far my favorite book in the saga... for obvious reasons i'm sure. anyhow, i was reading you're story, and it's really great.... i feel like you stuck to the storyline very well, and captured Edwards character amazingly.... the only thing is.... i have this longing to read the rest of the book from his POV.... i really wish you would consider picking up where you left off... and finish the rest of the story for us.... that would be so great =-D
Like I mentioned to Adrienne, I have considered a continuation, but it wouldn't be any time soon. It was an effort to stick to the storyline and the characters as SM wrote them, but it was my only real goal when writing. Even so, I have found or been notified of a couple minor errors. I'm trying to find the energy to go back through and correct them. LOL We'll see if it ever happens.
could you email me this story, i didn't have time to finish reading it but i want to so please! my email address is please send it to me!
Sent, enjoy!
Thanks, Nicole. This is probably the biggest project I have ever taken on or finished. But, with All Worlds Collide (co-written w/ Tami, Staceycakes, Lynn and Angel) and several other projects underway. . . it definitely won't be the last!
I can only agree with all the other compliments on here. It is perfect and much needed I feel Edward's point of view is so enthralling. Being able to hear his inner thoughts is so addictive and I found myself feeling disappointed when the story ended as I wanted to know how he felt through the pregnancy and birth and finally to their perfect time together when Bella had changed. Have you considered continuing Breakind Dawn? I have read both your versions and I really love them you are very talented. Thank you so much
Shoegirl. . . it is so hard saying 'no' to you guys! But, I am not continuing the story at this time. We really are a bunch of masochists, aren't we? Book 2 of Breaking Dawn is MISERABLE!!!! Edward is literally suicidal, Jacob is possessed by jealousy and murderous tendencies, and the entire house of vampires is on edge. I would be popping Prozac like Tic-Tacs to get through writing it. LOL

Thanks for reading both versions. . . I hate that the racy scenes can take away from Edward and Bella's journey, so I am always thrilled when people read the PG-13 version and get the real taste of all the emotions and turmoil he is experiencing.

I think you are in denial. . . Dangerous Obsession has become an obsession for a lot of us. Chris and Angie are just so unique and the entire plot is creative, volatile, engaging. . . you get the picture.

We are all waiting for them to make their official appearance in All Worlds Collide. . . Can't Wait!
I really enjoyed this honeymoon! Can I also get a copy of the adult version!! Thank you tons for this little boost in all of our twilighted hearts!!!
The PG-13 story was great, thanks for sharing it with all of us fans! I havent seen the adult version however, can someone email it to me? Thanks so much!!


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