The Twilight Saga

                                                  I can't escape this Hell

                                                 So many times I've tried

                                                 But I'm still caged inside

                                     Somebody get me through this nightmare

                                                    I can't control myself

                                  So what if you can see the darkest side of me

                                No one will ever change this animal I have become

                                             Help me believe it's not the real me

                                            Somebody help me tame this animal



I held her in my arms, tears falling down my face slowly. How could I have done this to her?! I loved her!


Iris's eyes were wide, but blank. Her face was pale, almost blue. There was nothing left of her now. It had been an accident. But I had taken her life away.


" Help!" I finally managed to cry, even though I knew it was too late.


I knew I couldn't stay here now. They would never want to help me learn control. They would think I killed Iris on purpose. No one would believe it had been an accident. They wouldn't believe I had loved her.


I would never get close to anyone ever again. It was far too risky. I should have known that before. But I couldn't stop Iris from loving me as well.


My hands shook slightly as I brushed her brown hair from her face. I could hear them comming now. So I knew I needed to leave. I pressed my lips to her cold ones briefly, then let her lay on the ground.


They were getting closer now. But I closed her beautiful eyes gently first. She looked more peaceful now. But it only made more tears fall. I had no choice but to run.


Stumbling through the woods, I heard them get to her. I kept going without looking back, knowing I could never go back there again. Rob the Virtuous would know what I had done. Hatred flared through me just from thinking about him.


The sirens blared around me already. I ran faster, desperate to get away. The police were already comming. I whiped at my tears furiously, trying to keep my vision clear. But I finally tripped and fell to the ground.


The flashlights were only yards away. Now I knew I couldn't get away. So I just curled up on the ground and waited for them to take me away, wishing I could just die like Iris.


Tags: dark, gabriel, lone, visions, wolfe

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i like it
but sad :) :(
hope so :) love your writing style
aww that's really sad
I love it:)
wow, love it, Nina :)

I love it Great Job!!!
Wow Nina! That's an extraordinary introduction to a sad story so far. Now I'm really interested to know what's going to happen to Gabriel now that he lost his love!

Excellent first chapter as well! I love the fact Gabriel just gave up and wanted to die for killing Iris. Who is this person Zetes that comes to Gabriel's aid when he was beginning to lose hope?

Nina you are an awesome writer! You have captured my interest with your powerful introduction and first chapter. I can't wait to see what's coming up next. Smiles from The Bear! A job well done!
Nina This is going to be fun. :-)
i lvoe this nina!!!!!!!!!!!!
I really love ur story and u should update me when u post another chapter. Actually u should add me as ur friend.


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