This is the story of Marcus of the Volturi. I wrote this as an entry in the contest "Best One-Shot Volturi Story," which was about the day whichever Volturi was changed. I won the contest, so I imagine it's all right, I'm enjoying writing it. I hope you enjoy it!
OK friends, here's the new chapter...True to form, it's longer than the first one, and warning, it's definitely PG-13 for adult themes. I hope you enjoy it. I introduce Caius for those of you who have always wondered why he was always such a jerk! I think this explains it well...Please, comment and review, let me know what you think, if you want me to continue!
Each chapter I read of yours (from all of your stories) is better than the next. Chapter two had everything: rich detail, believable dialogue, and horrifying sadness (poor Caius/scary Caius!). You can feel the tragedy in the air by the end of the chapter. I was screaming "No! Don't change Caius!" to myself as I read the last lines. A masterpiece, Jess!
You have such a gift. With just the smallest character outline you are able to create a story that is rich and detailed and pulls at your heart-strings. Marcus and Didyme's story is beautiful and sad and compelling. Your first chapter pulled me in and had me wanting more. I love it!
i adore the volturi fan fics, i wish steph meyer had the gift sum of u fan fic writers do! especially u! she's talented cuz we all love twilight but this is awesum imho. i wish u could publish these stories but u all would get sued for infringement & all that jazz :P
there is another volturi tale, 2 actually i adore. i will message them to ya so u can read em for yerself.
this is awesum, thank u for sharing it w/us. as u can see by my screen name i love didyme & her story.
i hope u write more i luv yer style & have shared this link w/a few other volturi fans such as myself on facebook :)
i had a crazy dream w/carlisle in it last night (not sexually inappropriate) we were both working w/mentally retarded ppl & i totally fell head over heels for him & he liked me too (there was no esme or twilight tone to the dream or him) i knew he was diff but did not know how. i dont remember all of it but it ended with me sitting next to him on a chair & us talking about our feelings. then my cat jumped on my tummy & woke me up! i coulda killed him! but i love my simba so i petted him instead :)
i totally left all i was doing in the dust when i got the email linking me to the story, my bro in law went to work w/out my famous bkfts acai berry smoothie, i left the litter box detail for a bit later, i stopped looking up places to read tempted for free,etc.
it was great i loved it like i knew i would
can't wait for you to write more
your such a great writer you make it like your there doing a interview with him and him telling you about his life and everyone in it
please keep me posted and thank you for making it to where i can read it