The Twilight Saga

Okay, so i know i probably shouldn't be starting a new story considering I can hardly ever update, but, I had this amazing idea and I just couldn't let it go.

Preface: I stared into pools of purple and red and couldn't help but wonder, which would she choose? Good, or evil?

Chapter One:
I'm Thalia Cree, I have a twin sister named Trinity. The only difference, is our shocking eyes. You could say that we're different, but I'd like to call ourselves the Unknown. The reason will come soon, but for now I'd like to tell you a story.....

"Hurry up, Trinity!" I heard loud footsteps and then my sister appeared looking dangerous in short shorts and a red flowing shirt. She had on black high heel boots, and that made me dread what was coming today. Today is my sister and I's first day of junior year at Sea Ridge High School.

"Calm down, Thalia, haven't you ever heard of being fashionably late?" She had an eyebrow raised and a dangerous glint in her deep green eyes. Her long black hair was curled, which made her look like an evil goddess.

"Yes, Trin, I have. But you're fashionably late and mine are totally different things. Go get in the car." She rolled her eyes and stomped out the door. I looked around the small kitchen making sure it was clean, the marble counters were spotless and the deep red cabinets were shining in the light. I shrugged and grabbed my black purse then followed my sister out the door.

"You look rather adorable." Trinity told me mockingly as I got into my red convertible. I rolled my eyes and started the car. I was wearing a pink shirt with a black over coat along with jeans and ballet flats, not very adorable. I looked over a Trinity and saw her eyes turning red, dangit she can;t keep calm for more than two seconds.

"Trin, stop, control yourself. We can't make the same mistake as last time." I warned her repeatedly over the summer that this couldn't happen, she's so irresponsible.

"I'm sorry, I just have these thoughts...." She trailed off and her eyes turned blood red.

"Trin! Stop, humans are friends not enemies so change it."

My sister and I, we aren't normal. We appear as these shockingly beautiful twins, me with bright green eyes and her with dark green eyes, but we're totally and completely different from humans. We are at a constant battle choosing between the thoughts of beasts, wanting to take revenge on humans, or choosing the good side like our ancestors did. Once my sister gives over to the ravage thoughts, her eyes turn totally and completely red.
But I'm a totally different story. The gene is only passed onto twins, but my sister and I have it easy. Well, I do at least. its easier for me to choose good. Our eyes reveal our thoughts basically, and if I begin to think wrongly my eye turns red, but the other is a deep purple. And then a thought occurs to me each and every time, 'Our ancestors did and you can too.' That one insignificant thought is what makes me who I am, an Unknown.

No one knows why our people feel the way we do, legend says that there was a giant war between the Unknown people and the humans. They thought we were too different. And its true, we are. But, they thought we weren't normal enough to live together in peace. Our ancestors made a speech that went like this;

We were all put on this planet for a reason! Not to battle or to hate each other, but to coexist as one community. We were all given special talents, whether it be basketball or brains, we are all different. So, how can one group of people be too different, so what if we can fly or shoot fire from our arms. Or even cause a tsunami at will, we would never use thy talents against thee innocent. If we must continue this battle, we will die with dignity, we will not and I repeat we will not, use our powers on thee weak!
Ever since that great battle, it is a prominent gene that we want revenge on all humans. We can't control it, but we try. Only few people have lived a full and happy life as an Unknown, I'm hoping I'll be one of them.

"Come on, other half, we have a show to put on!" Trinity clapped her hands and brought me out of my thoughts.

'Shut up, Trin, no more speaking like we're different, if I sense something we're enrolling in a different, got it?' I said to her in my thoughts, knowing she'd hear. She nodded and slammed the car door. I rolled my eyes.

"Ow, you idiot, I'm going to kill you!" Someone said. A large man in a football jacket was stocking up to a man with blond hair and blue eyes, he was kind of built but no way could he stand up against a football play. I took a deep breath and walked over to them.

"Now, now boys, we wouldn't want to fight when a lady's present." I said as I walked up to the jock. I put my arm on him. "Now why don't you head to class."My hypnosis worked and he nodded and walked away quickly.

"Thanks, he thinks I tripped him. I of course didn't" He smiled and my cold heart skipped a beat.

"Uh, no problem. I'm Thalia, nice to meet you!" he smiled and shook my hand.

"James, its amazing to be in your presence." I had a feeling this was going to be a difficult school year.

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this sounds really good
plz keep me updated
This sounds really cool. I cant wait to read more! Please update me when you post more.
Chapter Two: Trouble Maker
Thalia's POV

"Oh my GOSH a snake! Kill it." I heard a bunch of people yelling.

"What's going on?" I asked. Trinity was smiling playfully at the snake and then her eyes became darker and the snake reacted, violently.

'Trin, snap out of it! don't make me slap you' Trinity's eyes turned back to normal but she just walked away, ugh, I'd have to do this myself.

'Hello, python, please don't take violence on these innocent people.' I said to the snake in my mind.

'Why ssssshould I? They all dessssserve to die!' It replied darkly.

'Please, stop, return to your nest or I will make you!' I told the snake.

'I'd like to sssssee you try!' I stalked up to the snake, grabbed it, and threw it into the bushes.

"Sorry about that, everyone, my sister's a bit of the prankster! It won't happen again." I felt awkward stares on my back as I walked towards my sister, she had two girls with her. One with bleach blond hair and a purple track suit on. The other bright red hair with a green track suit. The blond girl was... different. Her eyes were bright purple with a hint of grey, she seemed...... angry. Evil, like my sister.

"An Unknown!" I gasped when I reached my sister. The blond girl looked surprised, she grabbed mine and my sister's arms and yanked us outside.

"My name is Clarisse, I knew I'd find you here! Te prophecy, oh no, the prophecy! Reveal thy true eye color!" Clarisse commanded and with a flick of her wrist I felt my instincts change as good and evil fought a battle inside of me.

"Uh oh, only one has thee signs of thee born leader. Come thy twins and take me to your leader!" I shrugged at my sister and stared at Clarisse.

"I want answers! Reveal thy true eye color!" I flicked my finger and her eyes, they turned electric blue. I remembered the boy.

"What the-" CRASH!
this was great
plz write soon
Chapter Three
Thalia's POV

"The monster! He must have followed me here." The strange girl muttered. That's when I saw the horrific yellow eyes. The eyes of a dragon. "Thalia, Trinity, I need your help."

"How- I mean I don't know how to use my powers very well yet." I lied, I didn't want to risk my life for a stranger.

"Shut up, Thalia, we can do it. Lets get ready!" Trinity told me sharply and took off at amazing speed to the dragon.

"Fog, I call you to my usage!" Then all the humans in the area fell to the ground.

"What'd you do!" I gasped horrified.

"I put them to sleep, calm young one. Lets go assist your sister and uh, James." She said nervously, I knew it. Dangit, I definitely was going to speak to that boy about this. I followed her quickly, use water and earth, if you use fire he'll grow big-" She stopped and stared at Trinity, fire was her favorite.

"You imbecile! Trinity Marie Cree, get over here NOW!" Clarisse shouted. Trin appeared in front of her.


"You don't use fire on dragons...." I spoke softly and understanding came to her eyes.

"No wonder he kept blasting bigger and bigger fire balls, the bloody beast." She said and walked back over. I followed behind and spoke a silent prayer to whoever would answer, 'I would really appreciate if you gave me water, earth, wind, and lightning, thanks!' Then I felt a surge of power enter my body. I knew that when we used power we grew more beautiful, so I knew that at this very moments my eyes were no doubt silver, green, and blue, the colors of wind, earth, water, and lightning.

"Vines, come to me!" I called clearly and the vines wrapped around the dragons legs, keeping it from fleeing.

"Water come, cleanse the dragon's spirit, show me the real culprit!" You see, dragons were Unknowns that had chosen the wrong path, a path of evil, and completely changed spirits. "Lightning and wind work together, make it so he can't escape!" And before we knew it a young boy with glistening red eyes fell to the floor and all elements fled. I ran over to the young boy.

"Thalia, stop, before you tend to the boy we have matters to discuss. There's an ancient prophecy and curse you should know about. James, bring the boy, we're going to the shack." James nodded and walked over to the young one.

"Trinity, come on. There's a prophecy we have to know about." Then we followed the strange stranger to the said shack. Too bad we weren't prepared for what happened next, nor what happened after that. I don't think I'd ever be ready for what was coming. A battle indeed that it would be.

A young one that's last, he shall rise
A fallen king shall change sides
The different eyed will change thee world
and two will stand only against
thee one
this is REALLY good!!! I think you should publish!!!! lol. But i'm not kidding!!! You have a talent!!!! Keep posting!!!
another cliffy I love it. cant wait for more!
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yupp! :) it was no problem!!!! =) i like making banners as long as i have the right type of pic, or can find one!!! lol. if you need another one, just ask, and i can make one/them!!! :)
great chapter
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I'm writing more today :P Ha,, I <3 this story!


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