The Twilight Saga

this is my frist fan fic and i want to know what you guys think!
okay here a little summary:
three months after Breaking Dawn, the cullen are peacful living but what happens when Seth imprints on a girl who almost dead? Will the cullens save her? Seth wants to become a vamprie! after he found the girl. But after every seem to settle in again, a solar eclipse come and the cullens get turn back in humans, but thats the least of their problems, new members join the cullen family! How big will the family grow?


part one (its not alice this is a new person)
Marry Alice p.o.v
With my lucky charm I was going to the water with the sharks. I was not sure why I was doing to this. But I now remember: (flashback)

“If you want to be part of this club you have to jump with the sharks” Amy told when I wanted to join the swimming club.

“Yea, we have our own shark marked” Tammy told, me before we went to the lake. (end of flashback)

Now I was here seeing the sharks moving around, there was no was no phones, or house in about to miles. I told myself just poke the shark and swim away. Here we go one, two, and three. I fell in the water it’s very cold. But I had to go up for air, but I felt something past my legs.

Then I heard screaming and next thing I see red water all over the place. I started to feel a big pain by my stomach. I swam back up. But when I reach the top I saw no one there. I tried to get off the water but the pain in my stomach was killing me. I tried to get up fighting my pain and made it up on the land. I walked on my knees to a tree. I sat up on the tree. I was waiting to see if I was going to die. But then I thought I was dead. Because I started to feel like a dog stiffing me, maybe it was my lost dog, Cindy. Then I was picked up from the ground and then walked a few steps and everything was so fast I felt air past, me really fast. Then it stop I could not open my eyes but I felt that I was in some where like a house. All of a sudden the pain went away and I felt much tried and I fell asleep.

Bella p.o.v.

With playing with my little Nessie to eat her food but she would rather have blood. Its has been three months since the Volturi left.

“Mommy I want a nap I am tried” she said she talks very goo I reach out for her hand and she came to me. I control myself very well now. I turn on the T.V. Jacob was on the floor in his wolf form. Edward and I were listening to what Nessie was sleeping.

“Does he want Carlisle to go?”Edward said out of no where.

‘What” I asked.

He ignored me “Carlisle” he called instead.”Seth needs your help” then he paused for a second “Wait what? What you guys have is really strong and weird.” He went back to Carlisle and said “Can you help him he is over about a mile away I will go with you.”

I was confused then they all got up but I grab Edward’s hand before he got up right “what is going on?” I asked

“I will tell you later, but” he paused “Alice can you tell Bella when we are coming back?”

“Sure” she said

“Now Bella when Alice tells you that I am coming back I want you to go to Alice and Jasper’s room and stay there do not move I will come for you when it is clean ok?”

“Ok” he kissed me and ran out thought the window. Jacob and Carlisle had already left.

****okay so tell what you think****

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i can see promise in it. try to write a little more please?
Hmm... I am not sure what to say. Please do more so I may form an opinion. And let me know when you do so I may read.
heres more:

Edward’s p.o.v.
After I kissed Bella I ran out thought the window I was thinking how Seth can imprint on someone who he just met and mostly that she is almost dead.
When I got to the place, Seth and Jake were in their wolf form and Carlisle was with the girl. She had kind of short hair to her shoulder and glasses. Here hair had like dirty blond in the front but worn out. I did not notice how good she smelled. By her stomach she had blood a lot of blood.
“A shark bit her badly” Carlisle said mean while he put his scarf around her. “We need to take her home now”
“I will carry her so Alice can see me so she can tell Bella to stay away” I said
“Ok but lets go now she is dying on us”
I carried the girl up and ran fast as I could. When I started to read Alice’s mind she was already telling Bella to go up stairs. I went into the living room and I saw her face her eyes were close and her heart beat was slowing down so I ran up to the room that was mine which is empty now. There was a bed in there and I knew that Alice saw it so she did it.
I laid her on the bed; Carlisle was getting every thing set. He put morphine in her. Then he cut her shirt open to where that cut was. It looked like a moon shape.
“She got bitten very deep I do not think she will make it but I will do the best I can” Carlisle said to Seth
“No” he said “I want you to turn her into a vampire”
“Seth are you sure, you are different from her” Carlisle said to him “let me finish healing her wounds and we see if she gets better.”
“Seth can you wait outside?” I asked Seth
“No I want to stay here I want to be with her” he was mad
“Please we need space to work on” I pulled him towards the door and he was thinking.
‘I will leave it up to you two but if she does not get to make it turn her into a vampire’ Seth thought
“Fine we will” I said. Carlisle had finished with her cuts.
“There” he said as he finished I stated to hear her heart beat slowly down almost stopping. I looked at Carlisle; he got the oxygen, mean while I was trying to get her heart to beat faster. He put it on her then it went back to normal. Carlisle made sure that everything was alright. “We have to keep watching her constantly”
After we had to change our clothes because they were filled with blood. And we had to clean her up too. But we knew that Alice would love to dress her. I seem to notice that she looked like Alice in a way. But I did not know what to make out of it.
“Edward?” Carlisle asked

*sorry ill put more later*
Intersting keep writing.
yes, i think it's going good. write some more, please
there we goo.
its getting good now
keep writing!!
okay more :

I turn around “yes sorry let’s go to Alice so she can change her”

‘What is wrong Edward?’ Carlisle thought.

“It’s that this girl look like someone but I do not know is I should say”

“Do not worry Edward no one will tell you anything. Now tell me who she look like.”

“Well…she looks like…” I paused “Alice, it might sound crazy but I do not know”

“Well….” He was thinking about what to say “we should tell Alice”

“Yea” Carlisle and I walked out of the room were the girl was and went to Alice and Jasper’s

room. She was at the door when we got there. She looked confused. “What is it Edward?” she

I seem to notice when Carlisle and I were talking care of the girl that” I paused “…. She looks like you in a way.”

She did not see this coming because I just thought about saying to her now. She look at and then she look down the hallway. Alice was shocked.” But … how?”

“I do not know” she looked like she was going to cry but of course we can not.

“Can I change her now?” she asked I nodded and went into the room. Bella was in side and herd it all.

“Can you tell what if going on with that girl looking like Alice?” Bella said as I walked in.

“Jasper can you take care of Nessie mean while I talked to Bella?”

“OK” he said I walked Bella to the end of the hall

“OK let me start from the beginning.”


“Seth found a young girl around the age of Seth. And she was hurt badly, a shark biter her. So Carlisle and I went to her, oh and Seth imprinted on her.”

“Really wow that’s weird but how is that girl?”

“We had to give her oxygen because her heartbeat started to slow down but the wound are deep, Carlisle thinks she will get better.”

“Well that’s good but what about Alice?”

“Oh that girl looks like Alice in a way but I know it’s weird.”

“That’s ok honey” she said and gave me a kiss.

“Let’s go tell Seth the girl is okay but let check on Alice.”

By the time we got there Alice and Seth were there sitting next to her. The girl was still laying there she was changed already. Alice was thinking what the girls name is so she can find out where she came from. Seth looked tired but he stayed awake. Then that machine started going crazy and the girl started to move and blood was coming out of her mouth. I had to get Bella and Alice out there before they do anything.

thank read all of you that read it :)
wow is right keep me posted it really intersting and want what happen next.
WOW it s getting reall good!
plz rite more soon


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