Two is better than one
Ok so this is my 2nd fan fic and I just wanna tell you all what its about before I start writing it.
So Bella got raped at 15 and ended up having a little girl. 3 years later Edward comes into the picture and Bella catches his eye. Charlie isn't doing anything but bringing Bella down so she decideds to move out. Edward however is not about to let her and Sara just walk out of hs life. After knowing Bella a couple of weeks Edward makes a decision to keep Bella in his life no matter what. Will Bella leave him and Forks forever or will she see that Edward is what she wants and needs and stay with him??
Comment and find out!!!
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Permalink Reply by Lauren Cullen on -
CHAPTER ONE~BPOV
*FLASH BACK*
I was getting ready for my freidns Alices party.
It was her 16th birthday party so I wasn'y going to miss it.
Her house was only 1 street away so my dad trusted me to walk down there by myself
"Bella come on" Jasper called
Jasper is my twin brother.
"Jaz go ahead, i'll meet you there'"
Alice is his girl friend
"K" he said as he walked out the door
I still had to wrap Alices present
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I started walking towards Alice and Emmetts house
Emmett is her older brother.
As I was walking I heard someone behind me.
I started walking a little faster but they started walking faster too and then they were running.
The next thing I knew everything went black
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When I came too I was in the woods.
I was bleeding too
"BELLA!" I heard
It was my dad
"Dad i'm over here" I yelled
I heard him running towards me
"Bella what happend?"
"I think I was rapped" whispered
*FLASH BACK OVER*
I was woken up by a crying.
I opened my eyes to see a Sara standing up in her crib
I looked at my clock, it was only 6:30
I got up and went to Sara's crib
"Ok Sara i'll get up" she started smiling
I couldn't help but smile at her.
Yes I was raped that night.
It was the worst night of my life.
But I got the best thing out of it, my little girl.
I picked her up and took her down stairs.
I ran into Jasper on the way down
"Heys Bells I made some eggs but didn't finish them you and Sara can have the rest"
"Thanks Jaz" I said
"Jazpoo" Sara said
"your welcome too little Sara" he said
Then he kissed her head
I took Sara down stairs .
I went over to the radio and turned on Saras fovorite CD, Winnie the Pooh.
My dad came down stairs
"Bella you better get ready for school or you'll be late"
"K dad. Come on Sara lets go get ready" I said
I still had to get her ready and me
Then I gotta take her to day care.
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I was at school now and I was talking to Alice
"Bella your still coming to my party this weekend right?" she asked
It had been almost 3 years since I was rapped
"Yes Alice, but my dads gotta work so idk what im going to do with Sara"
"Bring her" Alice and Emmett said together
"I dont kniw"
"Come on" Emmett whined
"Alright fine i'll bring her"
"YAY" Emmett screamed
"Sssshhhhh Emmett you'll scare the new students" alice said
So what on your mind after this chapter?
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Permalink Reply by Lauren Cullen on
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ok i'll check them out.
Are they all human?
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Permalink Reply by Lauren Cullen on
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ok i'll check them out.
lol I was ready to see what Takyra would say but I guess they logged off
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Permalink Reply by Takyra on
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Lol I'm sorry I wasn't on the computer for twoo whole days AGONYYYYYY, but anyway this is great I like how you started it off. The flashback was good I like how you explain how Charlie felt about her walking to Alice house by herself to make it seem that something was going to happen to Bella.Make sure you check your grammar, but after all of that this was Great and keep me posted.
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Permalink Reply by Katniss Rue Everdeen on -
Oh my goodness I love this! Please, please, please update me!
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Permalink Reply by Lauren Cullen on
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Sure will thanks for reading!
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Permalink Reply by ı'ϻ ƞoƗ һer ღ on -
good! Write it! :)
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Permalink Reply by Lauren Cullen on
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lol ok
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Permalink Reply by AlEx§EiRn§jAkE§lAvI§DaYsIa§LoVi on -
i love it!!!
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Permalink Reply by Kalness styles Cullen on -
Omg plzz keep le updated really good
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Permalink Reply by Lauren Cullen on
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CHAPTER 2 MEETING HIM BPOV
"What new students?" I asked
"The Cullens" Alice said
Just then the bell rang and I ran off to bio.
"Aw Bella your here your finally going to have a lab partner" Mr. Vaner said
"Who?" I asked
"Mr. Cullen"he told me
"Aw here he is now"
I turned around to see a bronze haired beauty
"Hi i'm Edward Cullen"
"I'm Bella Swan" I said
He smiled the most beatiful smile i'd ever seen
EPOV
When I went to my Bio. class and Mr. Vaner was talking to a girl
"Ah here he is now"
When the girl turned around I couldn't believe my eyes!
She was the most beatiful girl i'd ever seen
"Hi i'm Edward Cullen"
"I'm Bella Swan" she said
"Ok students please take your seats, class is about to start"
I followed Bella to our table.
As class went by me and Bella got to know each other.
We were so rapped up in talking we didn't even realize someone had walked in.
"Bella you have a phone call"
"From who?"
"The day care"
Belaa jumped out of her seat and ran outta the room
Why would a day care be calling Bella?
As class ended Bella still hadn't come back.
When the bell rang I walked out to see my sister Rosealie talking to some guy.
"Hey Edward this is Emmett, Emmett this is my brother Edward"
"Hi" we both said
"Do you know where Bella Swan is, she just had that class whith you." he said
"Um she ran outta class becuase she was told she had a phone call from the day care" I told him
"She got a call from where?" a guy behind me asked.
"The day care" I said again
After that he took off down the hall
"What was that about?" I asked Emmett
"Bellas his sister and hes a little bit over protective" he told me
Then the bell rang
Everyone went to different classes. Except for me, I stood there wandering what was going on.
BPOV
Why would Sara's day care be calling me?
I got to the office
"They said I had a phone call"
"Here you go, line 2"
"Hello this is Bella Swan Saras mother"
"Yes Sara is sick and starting to feel a little warm"
"Ok i'm on my way. Thankyou"
I hung up the phone and told the aid I was leaving.
As I walked out I saw Jasper coming down the hall
"Bella is Sara ok?''
"No shes sick I gotta go get her''
''ok i'll tell everyone not to come over"
"who all was coming over?
"Emmett, Alice and the Cullens"
"No dont do that they'll have to find out eventually"
"you sure?"
"Yeah"
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It was after school now so everyone was on there way.
Saras temp had finally gone down.
"Bells where you at?" Emmett screamed
Why was he so loud?
I ran down stairs
"Emmett ssshhh Saras asleep"
"sorry"
"Hey Bella" Edward said
"Hey Edward" I said with a smile
I knew I would have to pull Edward to the side.
I couldn't hide the fact I had Sara from him forever, he had the right to know.
There was an akward silience
"So Bella is everything ok?" Jasper asked
"Now" I said
"Good" he said
Edward looked very confused
All of a sudden Sara started crying
"Sorry Bells" Emmett said
I ran up stairs
Sara was still crying
"Its ok Sara"
"Jazpoo" she cried
"Ok i'll take you too Jazpoo" I told her
I hesitated to walk down stairs, but I knew I had to with sara still crying.
When I got down there everyone looked at me
"Jazpoo" she cried.
Alice and Emmet started laughing
"Oh shut up" Jasper said coming to get her
After Jasper had her she was ok.
"Awe what a cute little baby" Rosealie said
"Is she you little sister?" Edward asked
Alice and Emmett who were still laughingat the Jazpoo thing got quiet
Its now or never I thought
"No'' I gulped
"She's my daughter" I told him..
Dun Dun Dun find out what happens next!!! lol
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Permalink Reply by Kali' Cullen on -
Wow! I love the chapters and I hope that u can post soon and when u do will u keep me updated?
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