The Twilight Saga

"Bella, Bella?" a voice called out to me by my side,
I opened my eyes to a dark gray room, the blinds were open & pale white door was in front of my bed..
someone was brushing my hair with their hand, i turned my head in response to see my Mum smiling down to me.
"Mum?" my voice was hazy, as if we hadn't spoke a word in months, "yes Bella, its me"
I hadn't seen my Mum since the wedding, her hair was different, long and instead of her usual top and shorts, she was wearing a long sleeved jumper and long jeans...
"where am i?" Every time i spoke it came out in a cough, whats wrong with me?
"Forks hospital," a new voice came from the bottom of my bed..
Its was Carlisle he was staring at me intently an expression across his face i couldn't work out...
worried maybe...
"What?!" "What happened?" How could i be in hospital?? What was Carlisle up to?? Where was Edward??
"Bella," he stopped short and looked up to my Mum,"I..think its best if you tell her" she replied to his glance in a wary tone..
He nodded and carried on, "Bella what is the last thing you remember?" I looked for a sign that he wanted me to do something, lie or tell the truth? It took me a second till i decided to tell a half lie
(just in case), "talking to Alice, she was getting me ready for Rose and Ems wedding,"
Carlisle eyes widened, his jaw dropped slightly & i could feel my Mums hand slip of my hair on to her lap...
Looked around to finally see Charlie & Phil standing behind my Mum, Phil looked sad, worried and Charlie was just plain shocked....
What did i say?
"Bella..." Carlisle Voice was edgy, "what else?", i looked at him confused, he took in my mood and changed the question...
"Tell me, why do you think you are in here?" he sat on the edge of my bed, "uhh..i hit my head again?" although that wouldn't be possible...
"Bella, three years ago, you got hit by a van.." he looked at me intently again, "huh? what do you mean??" my voice cracked,
"Bella, you have been in a coma for three years, ever since you got hit by that van in your schools parking lot.."

Please comment, if you like it ill write more soon!!

Chap' 2, page 1.
Chap' 3, page 2.
Chap' 4, page 3.
Chap' 5, page 3.
Chap' 6, page 3.
Chap' 7, page 4.
Chap' 8, page 6.
Chap' 9, page 7.
Chap' 10, page 8.
Chap' 11, page 10.
Chap' 12, page 12.
Chap' 13, page 14.
Chap' 14, page 18.
Chap' 15, page 18.
Chap' 16, page 19.

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hahaha yay to comment but i do confess that this story is trippy the harkat the dream, nessie being dead, jane showing up in airport were Edwards at so keep writing
yeah i'm gonna catch up with Edwards part later.. its back at Bellas part now for the moment lol
Yay! You posted! I cant wait for more. Please post soon!
What the heck is that thing?!
That was great, Can't wait to read more
Glad you're back Viktoria!!! Great chapter!

yep good to hear or more like read from you again good job keep going please!!!!!!=]<3
wow vic you did take your time......but im glad you are out of it more soon
love sky
Cliffhanger??? Dannggg. Please post more soon its been forever since you last posted. Im just aching for more of this wonderful yet confusing but also intriguing story. Post more soon. Merci(thank you in french).

summer is over girl and you left us hangging on the cliff {dicided to mix it up a bit} you last wrote this story October 3, 2009 and now it is may 26 2010 soo you better post more soon or else!!!!!!!!
GOOD LORD!!!! I thought that there would be more! but there isnt!! I miss this story. I wanna know how it ends!! Pweeze!!! I snuck on here just so that I could read this and to see that there isn't any porgress is sadd. Dont make me get the Volturi on you!!!!

with all my heart
nic cullen
i like you idea nic lets go together if ஐღ Viktoria ღஐ doesnt post soon soo

ஐღ Viktoria ღஐ
you better update soon or i will go to the voltori and fill out the form die and you will be the one with the blood on your hands {metaphorically speaking of coarse} but you will be the one to cause my death!!!


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