The Twilight Saga

bella is a talented vampire that knows how to sing, dance and have fun. she is known as the popular perfect rich girl in a little town called forks. she is accompanied by her family called the stewarts. one day during her dance recitals, the cullens moved to forks. will she found love other than her passion? is her love strong enough to conquer her it?

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Chapter 1 Dance recital

“Hurry drew!! I’m going to be late!!” I ran in human speed across the lawn towards the gym. Ugh! I hate running so slow. It makes me even more nervous. Today is my dance recital. Well this isn’t actually my first but every time I have a dance recital, I always get so nervous. I breathe in and out. I reminded myself. It’s not like I needed air, but it’s the only method I know that calm me.
“Relax Bella. Don’t worry everybody will love you.” drew said this as he me pulled to the backstage.

Drew is my brother. He have average built, pale just like every vamp I know. And he has a blonde shaggy hair. Drew is not my brother by blood but I treat him like one. “Hey drew, what time mom and the others are coming?” I asked nervously.

“Um... I don’t know maybe, before the show starts. Duh?!!” humph! He said as he raises one of his eyebrows. I just rolled my eyes at him. He is sometimes annoying.

After I got ready, the emcee started to introduce us. If I my heart is still beating, I swear it’s going to burst right out of my chest. After fidgeting for 20 minutes, my name was called. I went into the stage and started my ballet/hip hop dance. Drew was the one who thought of that idea.

The music was able to relax my body. I really love this song, Single Ladies by Beyonce’. Drew put a touch of his orchestra skills on the music by remixing my cd with some of his compositions. The crowd applauded when I was over. I’m kinda used to it though, the standing ovations, bouquets flying everywhere. I just want to have fun.

I saw my family sitting at the back row. Zon waved at me while the others just smile. I smile at them in return. I went directly to my dressing room to change. My teachers congratulated me, unexpectedly, Gail, my other brother came in with a bouquet of red roses.

“Congratulations lil sis. Your dance was awesome!! The people watched you with their mouths open. It was so hilarious.” His booming laugh surrounded my room.
I smack him in his head. “Stop it!” Gail is an annoying yet funny type of brother. He’s always there to make fun of me. Well every brother is. There was a silent knock.
“Oh mom!!”I run towards zon to catch her adoring hug.

Zon is the leader of our coven. We kinda treat her as our mom. She’s always there whenever you needed support and advice. She was the one who created us. She works as a doctor. I really admired her because of her self control and her passion to help others that needed her. “Bella you were great!!” she hugged me even tighter.
“Congrats Bella!!” Gleb and Quinn both came in.
“Well thanks guys. Where’s drew??” everyone looked at zon. “Guys?”
Zon was first to speak “there are other vampires that watched your show so drew was the one who entertained them.” she looked at me assuringly.
“Well then come on let’s meet them.” They all nodded.
Zon was explaining about the vampires on the way home.

“I don’t know anything about them yet, but drew was the one who meet up with them. They will be visiting us, so guys please behave, okay?” Gail, gleb and I just laugh at her.
Zon and Quinn looked at the three of us murderously.
“Don’t worry zon, I will make sure that there will be nothing to worry about.” Quinn reassured zon.

Gail snorted. “Yah like that’s gonna happen.”

“I mean it.” Zon said in her motherly tone.

“Yes, mom.” We all said.
When we came to house we saw a Volvo parked in front.
We went out all at the same time, all have wondering faces.

I heard drew’s voice “there home. Just wait till you see Bella.” I was surprised. I didn’t know that I will be a topic. I looked at zon curiously.

“They really wanted to meet you because they were amazed by your dance.” She smiled at me.
All I can say was “oh okay”
Drew opened the door for us.

Chapter 2 a new dimension

“Hey” drew greeted me.
I hugged him. “So how was the recital?”
I looked at him confused. “Didn’t you watch the show?”
He looked at me apologetically. “Sorry I didn’t, I have things to do.” He motioned his head towards our guest. “I see.”

There are five vampires sitting in the couch. They smiled at me, I just smiled back.
“Well hello, welcome to forks.” Zon said.
“Thank you.” The bronzed haired guy said.
“May I introduce you to my family, I am marizon by the way, but you can call me zon. This is Quinn, Gleb, Gail, and Bella.” Pointing at each one of us. “And I think you’ve all met drew.” They all nodded.
We all said hi to them. The bronze haired guy spoke again.
“It’s nice to meet you all. I am Edward. This is my sister Alice” pointing to a pixie like girl with deep black, cropped short hair pointing in all directions.
“Hi” Alice said. Then she hugged me, I hugged her back. “We are going to be great friends.” she said. I just smiled at her. She went back beside Edward.

“This is Rosalie, Emmett, and jasper” Edward continued.

Rosalie has golden blonde hair. She looked like a goddess, with her beautiful figure and a very confident face. She smiled at me. Emmett was big muscled guy with brown hair. He looked like Gail, just bigger. Jasper has honey blonde hair, tall and slender but till muscular.
“Hey Bella congrats by the way, I love your dance! Can you please teach me how to do it?!!”Alice said.
“Yeah sure” as Alice and me make our own conversation, the others did too. Emmett, jasper, drew, and Gail talked about sports and other guy stuff while Rosalie, Quinn and gleb went to hunt. And Edward and zon talked about the other two members of their coven that will visit us. Sometimes I caught Edward glancing at me.

I just smiled at him, don’t want to embarrass our guests. Well actually I want to. He’s expression was the funniest thing I’ve seen. I hope he doesn’t have someone else yet. Holy crap! What am I thinking? I just met the guy. I can’t just walk up to him, and tell him I love him. Oh wait. Did I say I love him? No way! Erase, erase, erase!

I shook my head. Alice keeps on babbling about shopping trips and some family facts about them.

What I learned so far, they are also vegetarians. They also have unique powers like us. Edward is a mind reader; Alice can see the future and jasper can control the emotions.

Suddenly Alice asks me a question. “Bella I was wondering, how come Edward couldn’t hear your family’s thoughts when we went to your recital?”

“Actually, that’s because of my power. I am a shield.” I told her glumly.

“Are you the only one who has a power in your family?” curiosity burning in her eyes.

“Actually Zon can heal any sick people while Quinn makes the time stop and Gail controls the weather.” She looked amazed.
“Really? She can heal people?? She should meet Carlisle, but he’s working at the hospital right now.”

“Carlisle?”

“Yeah he is our father and the leader of our coven. Oh and esme, she is Carlisle’s wife. She stays home while the five of us goes to school.”

Wow. Big family.

“Well that’s good, because zon is also a doctor. And since Quinn and gleb have work,
you and your siblings can...” Alice cut me off.
“Hangout together!” how did she?...oh yeah psychic

She’s very happy about the idea of us girls shopping together in Port Angeles. I really hate shopping, Quinn always drag me to different stores and always dress me up like a freaking Barbie doll. Ugh! So much for being a vampire, when you can’t have freedom. I’m really frustrated from all the nerve wrecking events this day.

When Carlisle and esme came to visit, we introduced ourselves again. As they make their way up to whole new conversations, I excused myself to the dance room to have a little relaxation. When I dance, it relaxes my mind. It’s very peaceful. Just me and the dance floor. When the song changed to my immortal by evanescence, there was a silent knock.

It was Edward.

I was shocked. I didn’t know what to say. What does he want?

“Hey”

I couldn’t say anything so I just nodded. He smiled at me. I crooked smile that took my breath away, if that was possible.

“Don’t worry I’m just going to watch. Your dancing amazes me.”

What? Is that for real? I amazed him. “Thanks”

I continued my dancing. Twisting and twirling around. The soul of music and the message of the song took me to another dimension. I went back to reality when someone clapped their hands. I was surprised Edward was still here. Usually when I danced like that, my family went out of this room. Maybe because they knew that I’m not with them at the moment. He walks across the room in human pace towards me. I just stood there confused at the same time shocked.

“That was the loveliest dance I have ever seen in my existence.”

What??!! I don’t know what to say. No one has ever said those things to me. I just stood there, still shocked with my mouth open.

He chuckled, and then put his hand under my chin to slowly close my mouth. I must look like an idiot! I can’t believe it. I lower my head to hide the embarrassment. I didn’t realize that his hand is still holding my chin. I took a glance at him. I was locked in his gaze. His beautiful golden eyes are dazzling. Its like filled with thousand diamonds and stars.
He smiled at me thoughtfully.
“When you were dancing, it’s like you’re in another dimension. And I didn’t know how but I think I was sucked in the black hole you were creating. Like a force, that wants me to be with you.” Those words that he let out, makes me want to hug him and kiss his mesmerizing lips.

I was happy.

Suddenly his smile turned into a frown. Maybe because of my face, I checked my mouth if it was still open. Whew! It’s a good thing it’s not; I would really look like a total idiot if I did. I rearrange my features. Then said

“Thank you, I don’t know what to say actually. No one has ever said that to me in my existence.” I smiled at him brightly.

His face lit up, and then became irritated. I suddenly heard voices.

“Nice one Bella!! Way the go to ruin the moment by looking like an idiot!” drew exclaimed.
Gleb and Gail started to whistle while jasper and Emmett was rolling on the floor laughing. What’s so funny?

That made me furious. I controlled my anger as much as possible. I didn’t want to make a scene. Edward frowned beside me.

Then gleb shouted “hey Bella! Look what I got!”

Gleb was waving a picture of me in a shocked expression with my mouth hanging open.

That’s it!!! I launched at them.

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links to the pages:
chapter 3 rumors & chapter 4 the big scene
chapter 5 clarifications
chapter 6 dance practices
chapter 7 the race
chapter 8 jealousy
chapter 9 Baltimore
chapter 10 the streets part 1
part 2
part 3
chapter 11 my past
chapter 12 the visit 
chapter 13 the ball
chapter 14 the news
chapter 15 the surprise
chapter 16 my sweet revenge
chapter 17 the dance
chapter 18 revenge, bloodshed and coming back 
chapter 19 love at first smell?
chapter 20 karaoke night!! part 1
part 2
part 3
part 4
chapter 21 cleansing
chapter 22 weirdest flight ever!!!
chapter 23 the cullen isle part 1
part 2
part 3
Chapter 24 crazy fashions, crazy vampires
chapter 25 Forkwarts?
chapter 26 a destined fairytale
chapter 27 it's all good!!
chapter 28 jealous? omg, yes! 
Chapter 30 the man who made it all happen
Chapter 31 The comeback of family crazy time 
chapter 34 our fisrt and last big concert
Chapter 35 This is it!

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Chapter 3 rumors

After the Cullens went home, zon promised that we will visit them anytime soon. I am still in shocked at what happened last night. I keep on thinking at his words

“I was sucked in the black hole you were creating. Like a force, that wants me to be with you.”

Those words let out a hundred questions I wanted to ask him. I imagined his eyes looking at me, like he’s a blind man that saw the sun for the first time. My thinking was interrupted by Quinn, who came crashing into my room. She started dragging me towards my personal torture chamber, the closet. People might think I’m absurd, but if you’re in my place~ unless you’re related to Quinn~ it really does suck. Me, being a stupid Barbie dress up doll, forever. Sometimes I really like the idea; Quinn is always the one who picked my outfits during recitals and various shows I attended. But sometimes she’s really overboard.

“Okay” Quinn said.

“Just make it fast okay.” I demanded to her.

“Oh shut up! Later you will thank me for this.” I rolled my eyes at her.

“Yah like that’s gonna happen.”

“Humph! We’ll see.” She grinned at me.
I look at her suspiciously. I let her do her thing while I suffer. After 10 minutes, it was all done at last! It’s a good thing vampires are fast because if not, I wouldn’t make it to school alive. I can’t really explain my out fit. I’m wearing a black bustier with thin straps and a backless waistcoat. I love wearing skinny jeans. I think it’s just like tights but not that comfortable. And I don’t even know why people invented these, ridiculous 6 inch sandals. It’s just so stupid to wear them when you know it can kill you whenever you try to walk.
(bella outfit http://www.polyvore.com/bella_hot/set?id=8018599)

Anyway, I went downstairs to say goodbye to zon. I noticed that Gail was staring at me just like drew. When I turned to look at them they composed their faces.
“What?” I asked them confused.

“Well it’s just that… you look kinda hot, Bella.” Drew said

“What ever.” I rolled my eyes at them. It is really unusual for Quinn to dress me up like this. She usually dresses me up with t-shirt, jeans and sneakers.

Gail suddenly came beside me. Then he started to circle around me with his hands crossed against his chest. He looked at me from head to toe. I copied him. Then he said

“Ohh... Bella, are dating that Edward dude??” what the? What is he thinking?

“No... I just met the guy last night. Are you out of your mind? And if I do, why do care?”

“Bella you’re our little sister. Of course we care.” he looked at me seriously.

“Thanks. I guess” that was awkward.

Then drew came at my side, wrapping his arm around my shoulder.
“Yeah and if he ever hurt you, I swear he will be sorry.”

“Yeah really sorry” said Gail.
When they said this, I know that they’re down right serious. They couldn’t stand me being in pain. My family is very supportive. They never let me down. Even at the time we bumped into the volturi. I cringed at the memory.

My brothers and I went to school. I was the one driving, I always do. I really love fast cars. My Infiniti G35 Coupe was a birthday gift from drew and Gail.

I really love it. And it’s color, midnight blue. Ha! My favorite. That was the best gift my brothers gave me, so far. We all have awesome cars. All of us are very obsessive about cars, including zon. She usually uses her Ford Edge CUV on her way to work.

We didn’t use the other cars except personal purposes. We didn’t want to drive any attention. So, the three of us got out of the car. People started starring, as always. Then, a Volvo parked beside my Infiniti. They all got out and said hi. Rosalie went beside me.
“Hey Bella, nice car!” she said. She was a bit fascinated with a little hint of jealousy.

“Thanks! You seem to be fascinated by fast cars.” I smiled at her.

“Yeah. We all are.” she said.

“Same for us.” Hmmm… maybe we’ll get along.

“maybe you can come by later, to see ours as well.” Drew intruded.

Rosalie smiled at him then nodded. Alice came to my other side.

“Hey Bella, can we watched your dance and singing rehearsals later?” she looked at me with a puppy dog eyes.

“Um…er, I don’t know Alice. It’s kind of a closed practice.” Drew said.

“How come Gail can come?? He’s gonna ruin it more than we do.” she said with a pouty face.

“Hey, I didn’t know Gail will come?” I looked at the both of them suspiciously. “What are you planning?”

“Um...nothing.” they both said at the same time. Putting innocent looks on their faces.


The bell rang. We all went to class. Alice and I went to English together. We talked silently as teacher discussed. We heard murmurs of the students behind us.
“Look at Bella, already making friends with the new kids. I bet she’s just doing that to be more popular.” Jessica Stanley said.

“Yeah, I bet she will flirt to Edward Cullen. She thinks she’s so pretty she can get every guy she wants...” The other girl agrees

“Humph! Just watch me later at the cafeteria, I’ll make a move before she does. Edward Cullen will be mine.” Stanley said.

This girl really irritates me. I fight the urge not to throw her at the wall.

Who cares? Yeah maybe I do, but I know Edward don’t like her. This would be interesting to watch. Alice and I rolled our eyes at them. They so don’t have a chance. I bet Gail and drew would be ecstatic if they hear this.

“Don’t worry Bella, there will be a good show later at the canteen.” she smiled at me. “I better hide this from Edward.”
“I’ll help you.” I told her. She looked at me curiously. “Shield remember?” while tapping my head.

She squealed in excitement. I just laugh at her. Class went by so fast. I hadn’t realized that I was walking towards trigonometry, when someone tapped my shoulder. I turned around to look who it was. Mike Newton, one of the guys who tried to ask me out on a date but failed. No one here in forks had been successful to ask me out because I don’t find them attractive and my brothers are always on guard.

He looked nervous and a bit pale.
I smiled at him. His heart stuttered.
“Hi Bella.”

“Mike hey. What’s up?”

“Um can I walk you to your next class?” not again?

“No thank you.” Ugh! He never gets tired.

“Oh okay. Maybe later you could hang out with us at the canteen, everyone was talking about your recital yesterday.” He looked hopeful.

“Sorry I can’t. I’m hanging out with a few friends.” His face fell.

“Who?” he demanded.

“The cullens.” I just smiled. Before he could respond, I turned around then entered the room. Everyone looked at me on my way to my seat. Some boys behind me whispered “wow! Is that Bella Stewart? She’s getting hotter everyday.” Tyler Crowley said.

“Yeah, but have you seen that Edward guy looked at her? I bet she will dump her. I think he is a freak, he is way too good-looking” Eric yorkie said.

“I bet she will not. Have you met Bella? She doesn’t like anybody, in an attractive kind of way, that is.” Tyler said

“We’ll see”

I think I’ll agree on Tyler. I mean Edward is hot, and good looking but I don’t think he likes me back. I sighed. Time passes by so fast. I hadn’t realized that it’s already time for my singing rehearsals. I went to the music room. Drew was already there. Only a few students attended this class. So it’s the perfect class to rehearse. Drew and I change our class schedules so we both have time for rehearsing on our recitals. We change Spanish class to singing rehearsals, while I change gym to dance rehearsals.
“Hey” I said in a glum tone.

“Hey, why so feeling glum, lil sis?” he ask concerned.

“Just not in the mood. A lot of people started to spread nasty rumors about me.”

“Don’t worry it’ll pass. And besides, those are just words. They won’t harm you. Physically.” He winked at me.

“Why don’t we practice on our duet. You ready?”

“Yeah.”

“Okay” I took a deep breath. He started the intro when Alice, jasper, Emmett and Edward came into the room.

“Hey guys your just in time. We’re about to practice on our duet.” Drew said happily. He always wants a good audience.

“Yah. We know.” After they settle their things, Alice came pulling me into the farthest place in the room.

“Hey. What’s up Alice?”

“Um… can you shield me like right now? Because I’m tired of thinking the periodic table over and over again.” She looked frustrated. I laugh at her expression.

“What are you laughing at?” a bit of anger glistening in her eyes.

“Alice, ever since you went off for 2nd period, you’re already under my shield.” Her mouth hanged open. I even laugh out louder at her expression.
“Well that was a waste. How come you didn’t tell me?” her voice sounds irritated.

“You didn’t ask. Don’t worry. Whenever you go, the shield can protect you.” I smiled at her warmly.

“Is there any problem?” jasper came to us a bit worried for her wife.

“Don’t worry jazz, everything’s fine.” Alice and I both looked at him warmly. Jasper just nodded.

Drew called over us “hey guys, come on.”
Drew started the intro to leave out all the rest by linkin park
(bold=drew itallic=bela bold and itallic= drew and bella)

“I dreamed I was missing
You were so scared
But no one would listen
Cause no one else cared

After my dreaming
I woke with this fear
What am I leaving
When I'm done here

So if you're asking me
I want you to know

[Chorus]
When my time comes
Forget the wrong that I've done
Help me leave behind some
Reasons to be missed

And don't resent me
And when you're feeling empty
Keep me in your memory

Leave out all the rest
Leave out all the rest
[End Chorus]


Don't be afraid
I've taken my beating
I've shared what I made

I'm strong on the surface
Not all the way through
I've never been perfect
But neither have you

So if you're asking me
I want you to know

[Chorus]
When my time comes
Forget the wrong that I've done
Help me leave behind some
Reasons to be missed

Don't resent me
And when you're feeling empty
Keep me in your memory

Leave out all the rest
Leave out all the rest
[End Chorus]


Forgetting
All the hurt inside
You've learned to hide so well

Pretending
Someone else can come and save me from myself
I can't be who you are

[Chorus]
When my time comes
Forget the wrong that I've done
Help me leave behind some
Reasons to be missed

Don't resent me
And when you're feeling empty
Keep me in your memory


.Leave out all the rest
Leave out all the rest

Forgetting
All the hurt inside
You've learned to hide so well


Pretending
Someone else can come and save me from myself

I can't be who you are
I can't be who you are”

After our song the little audience started applauding. Jasper and Emmett started whistling. Alice came to my side to hug me. Edward stood behind drew smiling. Emmett and jasper stood next to Alice and me.

Then Emmett bursted out strutting a pose “You guys rock!” while sticking both of his hands in the air with the “rock sign” (\m/) on.

We all chuckled at his joke.

“Technically we are, but I’ll consider that as complement” drew chocked out, still
laughing. We packed our things and went off to lunch still laughing.

Chapter 4 the big scene

We went to our usual spot at the cafeteria, only the difference is our group was larger. All the humans stared at our group. Rosalie and Gail catch up with us at the canteen. They waved at us.

“Hey guys. What did we miss?” Gail asked while sitting beside Edward.
“Only the best song rehearsals in the world!” Alice exclaimed.

Gail snickered. “Oh that. I always hear them practicing at home, so why do I even bother watch them here at school? My ears are falling off every time they practice.”
Rosalie frowned “aw. I didn’t see it. I’m stuck at gym.” Then she eyed the rest of her siblings. “How come you guys didn’t miss it? I got stuck with these lame humans while you guys ditch class. And without me!” she scolded them.

“It’s alright Rosalie, don’t be mad at them. Maybe you can ditch class later to see my dance rehearsal?” I offered her.

“Aw thanks Bella. Oh and don’t forget, I ‘ll come by~” Alice cut her. “Hey I want to come too!” she told us then pouted. We rolled her eyes at her. “Fine. We’ll come by later at your house to check at your cars.” Rosalie continued.

I noticed that Edward stiffed while Alice hide her laugh. Then I saw Jessica Stanley getting up her chair then walking towards our table. Oh. This must be the big scene that Alice must be saying. I tugged Alice in her ribs, while also trying to hide my laugh. The others just look confused. Jasper must have caught on at our mood when I heard him chuckle. The others watched Jessica come to our table. Jessica was confident on the outside, but on the inside, her heartbeat went faster when she came closer at our table.
She looked at me tauntingly, and then looked at Edward.
“Hey Edward, I was wondering maybe you could come by our table to meet up with a few of my friends?” her eyes full of hope. We all looked at her, shocked showing on our faces except for Alice.
“Um I’m sorry, do I know you?” Edward asked, a bit irritated by her presence. We all laughed at her. Her face looked like a tomato. She backed off a little them suddenly turned around. She bumped into a nerd carrying his lunch. His tray flew into the air then

PLOP!

Jessica was covered with chili and some gooey green liquid that turns out to be the nerd’s vegetable shake. She tries to get up but the goo was too slippery so she fell on her butt. I almost fell out of my chair because of this hilarious stunt. Jessica stumbled her way out of the cafeteria while leaving traces of chili and vegetable shake foot prints on the clean floor of the cafeteria. The room was shaking with laughter. If we could cry, I swear I’d be in tears.

Emmett shouted “that girl is funny as hell!”

I felt bad for the nerd, though. His name is Louise binns. He is one of the brightest and most helpful students here in forks high. I got up of my chair. Alice grabbed my hand, I looked at her smiling, and then she nodded. Jasper asked Alice “what’s she doing?”
“Just watch” said my brothers at the same time. I went over to Louise who was still standing on the spot where his food fell. He looked at me bewildered.

“Here” I said in a polite tone. I hand him 100 bucks as he reached out for it, I said “You might need some lunch. And I’m sorry, we didn’t mean no harm.” I smiled at him warmly.

Before he could react, I was out of the room with my family and friends, smiling at me in proud and amazement. My brothers went beside me. Edward was the first to break the silence.

“Bella, why did you..?” he asked curious.

Drew was the one who answered. “Bella doesn’t like anyone who gets hurt innocently.”

Then Gail confided. “And she never hurt someone unless they deserve it. Even if it was a tiny flaw to hurt her friends or family, she always gets them back.” All of them starred at me with amazement. But in Edward’s eyes there was a glint that I couldn’t understand. He smiled at me showing his gleaming teeth. I smile backed. Drew cleared his throat. I broke my gaze at him to look at my irritating brother.
That was soo cute! I love this story!
i love this story its soooooooo gooooood =] ;]
my irritating brother.
ik how she feels with irritating brothers. i have one
awwwwww.... this is so awesome keep it up(\m/)
guys thanks for commenting. i'll be posting chapter five later... i'm still working on it...don't worry i'll write for more!!
Hey that was great.. i wana know more.. its something different, but i like it when u use SM's characters. well done..Could you update me on your new posts.. can add me too..
hey this is awesome!!!

can you update me too please?

i would really appreciate it :D

thanks

x Ellie :D:D
you should send me a message when you've got more written. or could you send it in the message please. that would be easier than trying to find it. thanks bunches!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ♥ Riley
hey this is awesome. HAHA LOL porr Jessica.!!! Can you please update me too?? Thanks!!!

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