The Twilight Saga

The story is set about six years after the events of Breaking Dawn. Renesmee has grown up quite a bit and her feelings for Jacob have changed. She understand the situation well but is not too sure how to express them. But a little vacation will change that...

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Chapter 1: Vacation

I looked down at my pray. The baby elk stood no chance against my speed and strength.
I leaned in and began extracting the blood. Ugh, elk blood wasn’t nearly as good as mountain loin. I wondered if mom or dad had caught any. Or if Uncle Emmet had caught a good grizzly.

When almost all the blood had been drained from the animal, I felt something warm brush against my leg. I caught the familiar, woodsy scent and smiled.

I spun around to find myself face to face (or rather nose to nose) with my russet brown wolf. My werewolf. My Jacob.

“Hey Jake,” I laughed, patting his head.

To return the greeting, Jacob licked the side of my face.

“Ewww, Jake. Gross!” I complained, wiping the side of my face with my sleeve, “I’ve told how many times not to do that.”

He just yelped with laughter, ducking his head to dodge my incoming nudge.

“Not funny,” I said, attempting to suppress a giggle.

I stuck my tongue out at Jake and ran off in the opposite direction. I knew he’d follow me, he always does.

Thanks to my supernatural speed, I was halfway across the forest in a few seconds. Green greeted me from every side as the trees passed me at lightning speed. Birds circled above me, creating a bright rainbow. I caught scent of more elk, but I was satisfied enough not to turn in that direction.

I came to a halt and looked around.
Jake was nowhere to be seen. Strange…
Turning in a 360 degree angle, my eyes searched every acre for sign of my werewolf.

Then I caught the smell of Jake’s woodsy scent, but just a tad bit too late. He sprung out from behind a tree and launched himself onto me, causing us to roll around on top of each other. Our favourite game ever since things had gotten back to normal and I was allowed out again. Mum and Dad had been pretty protective over me after the fiasco with the Volturi so I couldn’t be seen in public for a while. They didn’t want another misunderstanding…

But that was almost six years ago. Now I had the body of a sixteen year old, but the mind of a nineteen year old and this was due to my accelerated growth (which was due to the fact that I am a half-human and half-vampire). I had to be home schooled by Carlisle in order not to make anything look suspicious about me. Although a couple of month’s time I’d be going to school, to high school.

I was both excited and scared. Excited because I’d never been to school before and I’ve always wanted that experience. Not just the learning part, but also to be around people. This was probably going to be the most I’d been in the “public eye”.

But I was also very scared. I suppose this was because of all the books I’d been reading and movies I’d been watching of teenager’s first days at high school. They always seemed to be picked on; the one no-one wants to sit next to. Of course, what with dad reading my thoughts and Uncle Jazz sensing my emotions whenever the talk of my future came about, my family (including Jake) had tried to calm me down, telling me that I was worried for nothing.

I suppose attending school on reservation was going to make this all easier. There was talk of sending me to Forks High School, but we had decided against it for several reasons. It had only been six years since most of my family had been there and it would seem rather strange to have me (Bella and Edward’s daughter) start there. They could say I was a family member, but then I wouldn’t have anyone who’d be able to go with me. By attending school on reservation, I’d be able to be with Jake, Quil, Embry and the rest of the pack. Of course it was Jake’s idea – he hated being too far away from me. Like now.

When we were all rolled out, Jake and I lay on our backs, laughing ourselves breathless.

“We should be getting back home,” I murmured softly, rubbing Jake behind his ears. He moved his head up and down as if to nod and then got into his take off position. I knew that position too well – he wanted to race me. I chuckled and took my place beside him.

“And as usual, I’m going to beat you,” I said. Jake rolled his eyes. “One, two, three. GO!”

Of course I reached the edge of the forest a few seconds before Jake did, but that was he let me win. He went back into the forest to shift back into his human form.

It took him a while, but at last he came back. Jacob Black, my Jacob, walked out from behind the trees. As he came towards me, wearing just his cut jeans and that grin of his that made my own lips curve upwards, I took in everything about him. His deep set skin tone, his dark eyes, his hair – which was cropped the way I liked it. My eyes traveled down his neck, across his shoulders to his arms which supported biceps. Traveling south, my eyes noted his abdominal muscles – ooh, the ripple mounds of goodness. My Hands so desperately wanted to reach out, to touch, to feel, to…

“Ness?” Jake said, sounding unsure. Crap, he must have noticed my ogling. He looked down at himself self consciously, “is there something on me?”

“No – I mean yes. I meant I thought I saw something… Never mind,” I flustered, trying to cover up. Jake grinned again and pulled me into one of his bear hugs. “I hear your mom and dad calling us. We should go.”

Dad! Urgh, I’d forgotten about him. I hope he wasn’t close enough to hear my thoughts about Jake earlier. I dread to think his reaction…

Jake led me up to my grandparents’ house. Inside Uncle Emmet had his arms around Aunt Rose as they sat on the couch, watching T.V. Aunt Alice was crouched on the floor, her head between her hands, as though concentrating. She was probably “looking” for something in the future. Uncle Jazz was rubbing her back, as though soothing her. Was something wrong?

“No, honey, nothings wrong,” answered my dad’s voice. He and mum stepped out of the kitchen, smiling. “On the contrary, things are about to get more exciting.

“Oh great, it’s all gone!” complained Alice. She pointed at Jake. “Oh right, that’s why. Mr. Wolf is coming along.” She smiled at me, “I should have seen that coming.”

“You wouldn’t have been able to anyway,” Jake teased, kissing my forehead. A shiver of pleasure ran down my body.

“Well, the two of you better get packing,” said Dad. Then looked at Alice, “Oh right. You’ve already picked out their clothes for each day and packed them.”

Alice smirked.

“Dad, what’s going on?” I asked.

“We’re going on… ‘vacation’, Renesmee,” answered Mum.

“Really? Where too?” Weird, we’ve never done something like this before.

“To Africa,” answered Carlisle, my granddad. He and Grandma Esme were coming down the staircase. “We’re going to book the tickets now. I assume you will be joining us, Jacob?”

“Yes, doc,” answered Jake, as he squeezed my hand, “I’d never leave my Nessie.”

I felt the heat rush up to my cheeks, causing me to blush ferociously. His Nessie. I liked the way he said that.

Dad cleared his throat and gave me a stern look, though it seemed as though he was suppressing a smile.

“So, is everyone going?” I asked in attempt to change my thoughts.

“Of course, shorty,” grinned Emmet, “You didn’t think we were going to let you guys enjoy all the cheetahs and leopards.”

I frowned, “Cheetahs? Leopards? I’m guessing we’re not going to Egypt to visit the vampire clan there?”

“No, honey. Carlisle wanted to pay South Africa a little visit. He has some medical business he wanted to sort out,” answered Esme. “We thought we’d make a bit of a vacation out of it. At least then you and Jake will have something to tell your new friends at school.”

School… Right. I gulped as the fear caused a horrible feeling in my stomach.

“Ness, you’re going to be fine,” said Dad soothingly, “your friends are going to love you.”

“Of course they will. Otherwise they’ll have to answer to me,” said Jake, rubbing my back. He glanced at the clock on the wall. “Well I need to go and finalize things with the pack. How long do you think we’ll be gone for?”

“About a month at the most,” answered Mum, “Don’t worry, we’ll be back before September.”

“Alright. I’ll be back in ten minute. Don’t miss me too much,” teased Jake, pressing his cheek on my head.

A bear hug later, I stood and waved by the doorway as I watched him run out the house towards the forest, towards La Push. I hated moments like this.

“So, where about in South Africa are we going?” I asked as I turned around to face my family.

“Well, we’ll be residing on the Easy Coast,” answered Carlisle, “but for hunting we’ll go up further north.”

“Yeah, that’s where all the good stuff is,” said Emmet menacingly.

“But we’ll have to be careful,” warned Jazz, “Most of their wildlife is protected. We’ll have to find a less conspicuous spot.”

“And Jake can’t be in his wolf form for most of the time,” said Mum, “South Africans aren’t accustomed to seeing wolves among their wildlife.”

My knowledge on South Africa was minimal, so this was all news to me.

“Right, the tickets have been booked,” announced Esme, as she turned to face us, “We’ll be leaving in an hour.”

“Come on Ness,” Alice came over to me. “I can’t let you go like that to the airport in that.”

I looked down at my clothes. Right, going to the airport with blood stained clothes wasn’t exactly normal for a human – then again I wasn’t exactly a normal human either.

I let Alice drag me up the staircase, towards my slow torture…

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Chapter 7: First Day Plans

I lay on my back and closed my eyes. It felt as though I was floating on air. I could vaguely hear voices, laughing and happy, birds chirping merrily as they flew above in the sky and the sound of splashing water. Opening my eyes slowly, I came face to face (or rather, eye to eye) with the sun. To mortals' eyes, it would have hurt but to mine it was completely different. I could see each ray of light coming from the sun. I noted how they each came down to earth and onto my skin, causing it to sparkle. Like thousands of diamonds embedded in my skin, reflecting the sun’s beams. And it was only when I noticed my skin that I noticed my surroundings…

I was floating on water.

I was in the sea – or rather ON the sea – and was nowhere near the shoreline. I just floated on top of the water, not sinking nor moving.

I looked around for some sign of anyone I knew – or ANYONE for that matter. To my relief, I saw Jake swimming in my direction – of course he leaves me if he could. He was smiling at me, his eyes twinkling.

He kept moving towards me, his eyes never leaving mine… until he looked behind me. And the twinkling was gone, replaced by fear.

“Nessie,” he yelled, “swim over here! Now! We need to get out!”

I looked behind me and was gob smacked with horror. A wave, a bloody massive wave, had somehow started building up behind me, ready to crash down!

“Jake!” I tried to yell, but the water had begun to fall, the sound so deafening.

The water splashed on my face and in my mouth-

I opened my eyes and coughed till all the water was out my mouth and throat.

“Emmet!” A few voices shouted at once.

“What?” came his reply, “At least she is awake now. See? Told you it would work.”

He shut up when he saw the glare Aunt Rose gave him. Next to them, stood Mum and Dad who were both looking at me.

“Nightmare, Ness?” asked Dad.

“T’was turning into one,” I yawned, “What time is it?”

“About 5:55am,” answered Aunt Rose.

“Oh, how long ago did we get here? How long have I been sleeping?”

“Well… we got here on Saturday night and seeing that it is Monday…”

My eyes widened in disbelief.

“…I’d say you’ve been out for a day and a half.”

“So long? Holy crow, I must have been really tired.”

“Yeah, if it wasn’t for the snoring, we’d have thought you were dead,” chuckled Uncle Emmet.

“I do NOT snore,” I replied indignantly. “Anyway, is Jake up yet?”

“Not yet…” said Uncle Emmet, “You know I can fetch another glass of water…”

He wiggled his eye brows mischievously.

“Nah, I think I can handle this one myself, thanks,” I replied and climbed out of bed. I came to a halt when I reached the doorway.

“Er… which direction is his room?”

Mum laughed, “The room right the end. On your left.”

“Right, thanks.” And I dashed out the door till I got to the door at the end of the passageway. I turned the doorknob as softly as I could and tiptoed inside.

It was dark in the room, but it wasn’t difficult to point out the snoring figure on the bed in the middle.

I creeped over to where Jake lay and sat beside him, observing his still body. My weight, which sagged the bed as I sat, didn’t even wake him up.

His chest moved up and down as he breathed, in synch with his pulse rate. As much as I wanted him to be awake, to grin at me and to be enchanted by his dark, mysterious eyes, I didn’t want to wake him and spoil this sight.

When Jacob slept, innocence took over, erasing the hints of mischief that seemed practically etched into every part of his body. The stillness, besides his chest, of his body made me want to reach out and feel the softness of his skin, run my fingers along his strong, taught muscles, feel his heat burn my skin.

I glanced over at the clock on the pedestal, desperately trying to fight off the urge to touch him. 6am? Urgh, maybe if I woke him up then these urges would go away.

SO I sat on top of him (first thing I could think of) and leaned towards him, whispering, “Jake? Jacob… wake up, please.”

But I was too close and the urges acted through my fingers and I reached out and touched his nose. I ran my fingers down to his lips –

I squealed.

Jake had jerked his head a bit, in attempt to bite my fingers. He chuckled at my expression and opened his eyes. I threw him an annoyed look.

“Hey Ness,” he whispered, his hands reaching out for mine.

“Humph, maybe I should have brought Emmet and the water,” I mumbled. “Not so innocent now, hey.” I chuckled at his confused expression.

His hands found mine and started playing with my fingers.

“What time is it?” he yawned.

“About 6 am,” I shrugged.

“Only? It feels as though I’ve been asleep for more than a few hours…”

“That’s because you’ve probably been sleeping for more than a day,” I chuckled. “It’s Monday, sleepyhead!”

“Monday already?” His eyes widened. “Holy crow, that was long. No wonder I’m so hungry.” His tummy growled in agreement. “Breakfast?”

“Yup,” I replied. I jumped off Jake and onto the floor.

When we got to the kitchen, we were greeted by the smell of pancakes and eggs. My mouth watered at the scent.

“Morning, sweetheart,” greeted Esme, “Morning Jake.”

“Morning,” we yawned.

“Hope you‘re hungry,” she smiled, “Made your favourite.”

“Eggs!” One of my favourite human foods!

“And pancakes,” added Jake with satisfaction. “Thanks Esme.”
“It’s a pleasure,” she smiled. “Now tuck in.”

After about half an hour of stuffing our faces (hey, sleeping for one and a half days deprives you of four and a half meals!), we went to the lounge, where the rest of the family were discussing the days plans.

“Definitely not the beach,” said Uncle Jasper to my disappointment, “according to the weather, it’s going to be really sunny.”

“How about the shopping malls, then?” Aunt Alice suggested with a twinkle in her eyes. “Wonder what the fashion sense is like here…”

“Wherever you all decide to go, we’ve got to be back by four in the afternoon,” interrupted Grandpa Carlisle, “I’ve got a meeting at 4:30.”

“Well, we can’t go outside anywhere, so lets just settle on going to the shopping malls,” said Alice, determined to get her way.

“Alright, alright,” said Dad, “we may as well get the shopping mall trips over and done with, otherwise Alice won’t stop bugging us.”

Aunt Alice just stuck her tongue out at Dad and pushed Jake and I down the passageway, ordering us to be ready in an hour at the latest.

As we drove to Pavilion (which was one of the shopping malls Alice decided to check out first) in the cars we hired for our stay in South Africa, I wondered about Grandpa’s reason for coming to South Africa. Carlisle loved helping people so there must be a really good reason for us coming here.

“Hey Grandpa,” I asked, “Not to be rude, but what “Medical” business brought us down to South Africa?’

“Just like your dad, hey,” he chuckled, “Always inquiring.”

“Yeah, I guess. So, what is the reason?”

He looked at me. “Well Renesmee, there has been inquiries about the blood down here in South Africa. You know about the HI-virus, right?”

“Yes,” I replied. It was that disease which weakened humans’ immune systems.

“Well, more than that, Ness,” replied Dad to my thoughts.

“You see, there is something about the HIV and/or AIDS infected blood which has some doctors baffled. And I’ve been asked to help out with some research.”
“Oh, I see…” My mind wondered off.

“We’re here!” exclaimed Aunt Alice, pointing at the huge building.

“Two for The Grudge 3,” said Jake, as we waited in line at the movies.

“O-o-on your r-right,” replied the man, who was too busy ogling at me he tore the ticket. I heard Jake give a low growl as he shot the man a daggered look.

We specifically chose a horror movie because one of our favourite past times were to watch horror DVDs at home and laugh at all the gruesome parts which anyone could see was done on computer and was fake.

This movie was just as bad as the others, and Jake and I probably annoyed the rest of the audience by laughing so hard we cried whilst everyone else screamed.

It took me a while to realize that Jake’s arm had found its way around my shoulders. I wasn’t sure what to do… stay the same way, or lean my head on his shoulder?

“Ness, you alright?” whispered Jake in my ear, send shivers down my spine.

“Yeah, of course,” I replied, and leaned my head onto his shoulder. I sighed in satisfaction when he kissed my forehead, not being repulsed by my action.

I was so comfortable in that position that the next, so-called “scary” part freaked me out and I screamed with the rest of the audience. Jake howled in laughter at my reaction, causing quite a few people to turn around and glare at him.

“I think you’re too young to be watching too many horror movies, Ness,” he teased.

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