the lovely Vannessa made this awsome Bannner for me, yay!! I love it!! thanks agian Vannessa!!!
My name is Bella Swan. And my life is a big bad screw up. I don't know why this happened to me...I don't know why my life is just a big clumsy peice of dump. I don't know why I ever thought anyone ever really cared about me.
He grabbed my arms and pulled the jacket sleeves up and seen everthing. I feel naked and exposed, as if someone just stripped me and put me in front of a camera.
Edward gasped. I looked at his face, he was very frightened.
Then he hugged me tight, "I'm so sorry" he said.
He started sobbing quiety, which made me start to cry and I just hugged him thight as if I were never going to see him again and sobbed in his chest.
I want to see what people think about this and let me know if you want me to write more.
i don't want to write if noones going to be reading it.
CHAPTER-4 part 2
haha, hopefully I will have the chapter up tonight!!
I just hope Charlie doesn't hurt her.
I'm halfways there, theres just one hint left for me to write, and I should be posting it tonight for sure!! let me tell you this, your gonna love it and probaly surprised!! Chapter 6 is the longest chapter I ever wrote for any story, hopefully since its longer, you guys will think its good!! I want to know what you guys think when I post it up, good or bad, let me know, you cant be a good writer if people never tell you if it was good or not. I won't get mad, I will try to change watever you think is bad the best I can!! I'm excited to post it up and re read the whole thing, even though I wrote it, I'm super excited! I'm excited to know what you guys think to, hopefully I get a lot of replies and more readers after this Chapter!!!!!!
thanks!! I'm pretty sure your stories arent bad! I wanna read them!! send me links pleasee!!
haha, I dont think the publishing will happen anytime soon, but if it does, we have to change names of course, but to what?? thats a good thing to think about!! lol!!
this is good i feel bad for bella write more soon
I'm gonna post it up in like ummm, an hour maybee, I'm almost done, I swear, it will be post and about an hour, maybe before that, I just need to think it through and type fast!! lol!!!
keep me update