Why Me??(Bella/Edward story)
the lovely Vannessa made this awsome Bannner for me, yay!! I love it!! thanks agian Vannessa!!!
My name is Bella Swan. And my life is a big bad screw up. I don't know why this happened to me...I don't know why my life is just a big clumsy peice of dump. I don't know why I ever thought anyone ever really cared about me.
PreFace:
He grabbed my arms and pulled the jacket sleeves up and seen everthing. I feel naked and exposed, as if someone just stripped me and put me in front of a camera.
Edward gasped. I looked at his face, he was very frightened.
Then he hugged me tight, "I'm so sorry" he said.
He started sobbing quiety, which made me start to cry and I just hugged him thight as if I were never going to see him again and sobbed in his chest.
I want to see what people think about this and let me know if you want me to write more.
i don't want to write if noones going to be reading it.
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Permalink Reply by Kathrine Webber on
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plzz do more i need to know what happens
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Permalink Reply by MusicIsMyLife<3 on
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WHEN R U POSTING MORE IM DYING HERE POST LIKE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Permalink Reply by Beccaa on -
okay, i really like this and itss a good story and a great idea but i havve a few comments :D
- Less esclamation points?
- being emo iss really not something easily spoken about, no matter what. trust me, i know. so it wouldnt really happen like that.
- she's too happy to have that be happening. she needs to seem more depressed.
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Permalink Reply by Reka Thiru on -
Luv it :)
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