The Twilight Saga

the lovely Vannessa made this awsome Bannner for me, yay!! I love it!! thanks agian Vannessa!!!

 

 

My name is Bella Swan. And my life is a big bad screw up. I don't know why this happened to me...I don't know why my life is just a big clumsy peice of dump. I don't know why I ever thought anyone ever really cared about me.

 

PreFace:

He grabbed my arms and pulled the jacket sleeves up and seen everthing. I feel naked and exposed, as if someone just stripped me and put me in front of a camera.

Edward gasped. I looked at his face, he was very frightened.

Then he hugged me tight, "I'm so sorry" he said.

He started sobbing quiety, which made me start to cry and I just hugged him thight as if I were never going to see him again and sobbed in his chest.

 

I want to see what people think about this and let me know if you want me to write more.

i don't want to write if noones going to be reading it.

 

 

CHAPTER-1

CHAPTER-2

CHAPTER-3

CHAPTER-4

CHAPTER-4 part 2

CHAPTER-5

CHAPTER-6

CHAPTER-7

CHAPTER-8

CHAPTER-9

CHAPTER-10

CHAPTER-11

 

 

 

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plzz do more i need to know what happens
WHEN R U POSTING MORE IM DYING HERE POST LIKE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
okay, i really like this and itss a good story and a great idea but i havve a few comments  :D
  • Less esclamation points?
  • being emo iss really not something easily spoken about, no matter what. trust me, i know. so it wouldnt really happen like that.
  • she's too happy to have that be happening. she needs to seem more depressed.
I really like this trust me and im not trying to be mean, just constructive critisism. I think this could be evven better :D
Luv it :)

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