Without

What would it have been like if Bella and Edward hadnt met until the night Bella was bitten? What would like be like for them? What if Bella didnt know what she wanted? Would it work out with them?

WITHOUT

Chapter 1: Footsteps (Bella POV)

   It’s September, it’s warm out tonight. The sun has already set and its now dark, nice night for a walk. I’d done this many times before, so there was nothing off about tonight usually walked at night to relax, let off steam and stress from the day.
   There weren’t many people out due to how late it was. I didn’t mind; it was peaceful.
   After a while, I noticed that there are footsteps behind me, to which I don’t pay any mind. The steps increased in pace, getting closer. Still, this doesn’t seem to be any threat to me.
   Soon the hooded figure walking behind calls out to me, “Hey!” Surely he can’t be talking to me? Who is he? “Excuse me?!” He calls out again, closer this time.
    I looked back and notice he has increased his pace, quickly closing the gap between the two of us.
   I begin to quicken my pace in order to, maybe, find somewhere to go? It’s late; I doubt anything is open right now.
   I look back again, he’s getting closer now.

I KNOW IT'S SHORT BUT, PLZ TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK?

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Permalink Reply by Cierra Cullen on November 5, 2011 at 10:31pm

Loved it ! ... Cant wait to read moree

Permalink Reply by Izzy-Marie @LoL Cullen.com :D on November 6, 2011 at 6:28pm

This chapter was awesome update soon

Permalink Reply by Bella Willow on November 8, 2011 at 8:24am

EPIC!

Permalink Reply by Cherie Cullen on December 23, 2011 at 2:56pm

Thank you Roslyn :)

Permalink Reply by Melissa on November 21, 2011 at 7:21pm

that was great!!!

Permalink Reply by calipso cullent on December 30, 2011 at 8:21pm

sorry bout ur grandmother Emmett we all are hope u feel better soon ur friend calipso cullen:)

Permalink Reply by Twi-EmmettCullenBreakingTwilight on December 20, 2011 at 7:04pm

Hi Cherie!

I am still with you along the way with this story. Please update soon!

I truly understand what you mean about Real Life. I have been going thru them myself especially with work & family.

I haven't lost your story and hope there are no further interruptions along the way as well.

Oh! I'm sorry I will be away for a little bit since I had a death in the family today. My husband's Grandmother passed away this morning so we will be attending the Wake and Funeral Services. I just spent some of my time at work on the SAGA trying to distract my mind and decided I will get my updated stories to keep me occupied.

If I am unable to log on once again due to RL I wish you my friend a Safe & Healthy Holiday near your Family & Friends.

Same to everyone who continue to follow your story as well.

Happy Holidays!

Hugs from Your Bear Twi-EmmettCullenBreakingTwilight

Permalink Reply by Cherie Cullen on December 23, 2011 at 2:55pm

Bear! I was just thinking about you! I'm happy you got to catch up but am so sorry for your familys loss. I will be here when you return and if you need a friend. Happy & Safe Holidays to your family as well. Much Love --Cherie--

Permalink Reply by Meghan H. on December 26, 2011 at 7:13am

Omg!!!!!! I love your story.... It's soooooooooo good!!!! I hope you update soon!

Permalink Reply by Alexandra Styles Cullen on December 27, 2011 at 10:50am