The Twilight Saga

Without

What would it have been like if Bella and Edward hadnt met until the night Bella was bitten? What would like be like for them? What if Bella didnt know what she wanted? Would it work out with them?

 

 

WITHOUT

 

Chapter 1: Footsteps  (Bella POV)


   It’s September, it’s warm out tonight. The sun has already set and its now dark, nice night for a walk. I’d done this many times before, so there was nothing off about tonight usually walked at night to relax, let off steam and stress from the day.
   There weren’t many people out due to how late it was. I didn’t mind; it was peaceful.
   After a while, I noticed that there are footsteps behind me, to which I don’t pay any mind. The steps increased in pace, getting closer. Still, this doesn’t seem to be any threat to me.
   Soon the hooded figure walking behind calls out to me, “Hey!” Surely he can’t be talking to me? Who is he? “Excuse me?!” He calls out again, closer this time.
    I looked back and notice he has increased his pace, quickly closing the gap between the two of us.
   I begin to quicken my pace in order to, maybe, find somewhere to go? It’s late; I doubt anything is open right now.
   I look back again, he’s getting closer now.
 
 
 
 
I KNOW IT'S SHORT BUT, PLZ TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK?

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Permalink Reply by sammii potter on October 15, 2010 at 7:40pm
awwwww,,i loveddddd it !!,,edward is sooo cute acting all sad and depressed lol,,nd jasper is really sweet aswell :),,hope you write more soon ~
Permalink Reply by Kathy lopez on March 5, 2012 at 9:18pm

LOVE IT!!

--KITKAT

Permalink Reply by Melissa on October 5, 2010 at 6:38pm
It was wonderful well worth the wait. Plz post as soon as you can
Permalink Reply by Andra Lee on October 5, 2010 at 10:26pm
I love where this is going!
Permalink Reply by MuslimEmoChick;) on October 6, 2010 at 3:15pm
awsome
Permalink Reply by sherry williams on October 6, 2010 at 3:58pm
******NEW READER******
wow
sounds good
cant wait to read more
Permalink Reply by Becca Duby on October 6, 2010 at 6:09pm
OMG! FRIEND ME! KEEP ME UPDATED! ANYTHING THAT GET GET ME TO READ THIS!!! AMAZING!
Permalink Reply by Cherie Cullen on October 6, 2010 at 8:48pm
Just a quick note, I do a lot of this from my phone therefore I'm limited to what I can do. So if you would like updates on my story please feel free to add me as a friend and I will accept via email, me trying to add you is one thing I cannot do through my phone. So please add me to stay updated! Thank you so much for reading! --Cherie--
Permalink Reply by Waiting-For-The-Dream on October 6, 2010 at 8:55pm
OMG!!!!! edward go get her!!!
love it update ASAP
Permalink Reply by Cherie Cullen on October 9, 2010 at 1:20am
I just wanted to say thank you very much to all of my readers! I hope to have the next chapter up asap, however, I'm in the middle of moving right now so if I can't update next week I'll try my hardest to get it out the week after. Again, thanks so much for sticking by and continuing to read. Please continue to leave me comments letting me know what you think....--Much love, Cherie--
Permalink Reply by Izzy-Marie @LoL Cullen.com :D on October 10, 2010 at 6:52pm
lots of love kay keep writing cherie
Permalink Reply by Nina Pattinson on October 10, 2010 at 11:54am
MORE! update me :P

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