ok, i had this dream.
Bella (vampire) :Edward!
Edward darts to Bella quickly. "What? What's wrong?"
Edward looks around and listens hard for Renesmme's thoughts. By his expression, he doesn't hear her. "Jacob!" he roars.
Jacob lopes in, on all fours, and whines. "What is it now?" Jacob thinks.
"We can't find Renesmme! Have you seen her?"
Jacob's eyes get wide and he shakes his head frantically.
Bella breaks down, Edward tries to calm her. "Jacob! Go look for her!"
Jacob darts out the door.
The Volturi have returned. Caius has one arm behind his back, like he's hiding something...
"Caius!" Aro exclaimes angrily when he walks forward to meet him.
Caius thrusts his arm out and Renesmee stumbles and falls. She hisses at Cauis and rises to her feet. Her eyes are outlined in dark purple, she is very thirsty.
(The scene completely changes.)
Back at the Cullens.
Edward and Bella are laying in bed, Renesmee is sitting down watching TV.
She's explaining everything to them while her eyes don't leave the screen, and her words are too faint for me to hear them.
Then I wake up.
What the freak? I've had that same dream every night for a week now! What the freak is going on here? Plz tell me wut you think!
To publish you can change the names, I don't use "Volturi", but refer to them as the Tuscan Scum or Bullies, explaining that they demand others keep a low profile, while they entice large numbers of tourists and their children into their lair to be slaughtered, without reguard to the retribution their actions could bring down on us all. In my second book, now in work, when a primary character discusses meeting the Cullens, they are called the Olympic Coven. Renesmee and her parents are identifed by what they are, "The abilities of one of the Olymic Coven's families should be sufficient to reduce the Tuscan Bullies to the cowards they truly are. The youngest can neutralize the Tuscan's powers, forcing them into a fair fight for the first time. Her mother, developed her own powers, previously protecting against mental attacks, into one that protects against physical blows, Her father's mind reading abilities, can alert these two amazing women to an enemies' plan of attack and one of her 'aunts' can see future events before they happen." If you feel the need to use names, just say the child has a difficult name, but that you heard her called "Nessi," (Note the difference in spelling). Don't listen to "Nay Sayers", write it, then rewrite it several times, use spell checker (I'd use it on this if it were available)!