Thats actually great! Well done!
Why don't you post this story as a discussion in the group Fanfiction on this site? I am sure peple will very soon start following your story.
OMG!!! i love it!!! I really like how you added the part with Emmet, It was very cute.
P.S. Thxs alot!!!
BTW why don't you pick out your fav parts of the movies or books and make a fanfiction about them? I bet we would all love to hear more.
Loved it! PLEASE write more!