Moonless Night- what happens after breaking dawn
I was so intrigued by the twilight books that i decided to write my own book about what happens after breaking dawn. Please let me know what you think about it.
Chapter 1- Bella
I often wondered what my life would be like had I stayed human. But the more I think about it the happier I am with the way things are. I am especially happy with
my family new and old. Carlisle and Esme have
felt like my parents since Edward I were dating. Rosalie’s definitely an older
sister. Shes the one you love to hate but love always wins. Emmett is the
brother who likes to rough house that is until he loses and you bruise his ego.
Jasper is the quiet one. Alice
is the fashion diva of the family. No one is allowed to wear the same thing
twice. Renesme is my world and everything in it. She has been since she was
just a bump in my tummy. Edward is my life and without him I wouldn’t have
anything else. My parents are still around. We see Charlie a lot, though not as
much as he would like, but enough to keep him safe. Renee is still clueless
about everything. She is more out of the loop than Charlie is. However, life is
great and I wouldn’t have it any other way.
“Bella” I heard coming from the kitchen of our cottage. As I put my diary away I got up off the bed and headed in that direction. I was cut off halfway around the
corner. Edward caught me in mid air and pulled me as close to him as possible.
Of course we tumbled to the floor and I could hear some plates that weren’t
that far behind us in hitting the floor. “Damn it” I said as I tried to get up.
Edward pulled me back down and said “ill get it in a min, right now I just want
you,” he moved forward and locked our faces together in a passionate kiss. We
were interrupted by a knock on the front door. “Edward I have to get the door.”
“He can wait, its not an emergency. Its only Jacob looking for Nessie.” I paused for a moment as I thought about what to do next. I kissed him lightly and whispered in his ear, “We will have plenty of time for this
later.” And with that I got up and went to get the door. As Edward had said
Jacob stood at the door when I finally opened it. “Hey Jacob come on in.” He
walked in and started to say something then rethought it before he spoke. “Did
I interrupt something?” “No, Edward was just making breakfast for Nessie, where
is she?” I asked as I looked in Edwards directions. “I haven’t seen her since
she left this morning to your dad’s house.” He said as he put a plate of food
on the table in front of Jacob. “What did she go to Charlie’s for? And why this
early?” I noticed Jacob gave Edward a smug little smile. “ok what’s going on?
What do you two know that your not telling me?” Edward looked at me with my
favorite smile and laughed as he said “ I told her I wouldn’t tell you” Jacob
looked up and said “Nope I was told not to tell either.” “Fine then I go and ask someone who will tell
me.” With that I walked out of the room and went for my cell phone. I called
Charlie’s house and Sue answered. “Hello,”
“Sue its Bella, is Nessie over there?”
“Yes, but I was told not to tell you why. Do you need her home?”
“No I was just wondering where she was. Can you get Charlie please.”
“Sure but he wont tell you anything either.”
She set the phone down on the counter and I could hear her walk into the living room where Charlie and Nessie were talking about something. I couldn’t hear all of what they were saying because as soon as Sue
said my Name they shut up. I hear Nessie tell Charlie, “don’t say anything it’s
a surprise,” “I remember Nessie.” He walked into the kitchen and picked up the
phone. “Hey Bells what’s going on?”
“Oh nothing just wondering why my daughter is over there this early and why I wasn’t told anything.”
“She’s fine Bells. Don’t worry, she’ll be home soon.” Then he hung up.
I walked back into the kitchen of the cottage and I heard faint laughing under Jacob’s breath. “What are you laughing at dog?” He stopped laughing and gave me a dirty scowl. “Just wait till she comes home and she can
tell you what going on.” I looked at Edward and gave him a frown of my own.
Then I walked over to the table, pulled out a chair and sat down with a sour
look on my face. Edward came to stand behind me, kissed my neck and whispered
“Its nothing bad so stop worrying.” I looked up at him and glared. “You look so
tempting when you look at me like that.” I looked at Jacob, he was finishing
his food. Then got up and put his dishes in the sink for me to do later.
“Jacob, what time are you going over there to get her? Since I take it you took
her over there in the first place.” He looked at me with a guilty look on his
face and said “in a few hours, she wants time with Charlie so that…” Edward
glared at him from across the kitchen. “Oh right I almost forgot.” “Never mind
I need to hunt anyways.”
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awesome but what is the surprise please write more (sad vamp face):(
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Jacob went and sat on the couch with his arm draped over the back. Nessie sat next to him and Jacob’s arm fell over her shoulder. I suddenly spaced out and my body started to tense. I know Edward noticed because he lifted his head off my shoulder and stood so he was still holding me but was able to look at my face now. I could tell everyone else caught on because I was getting curious and intrigued glances from everyone in the room. “What is it Bella? What’s wrong?” Carlisle asked as he stared at my face. Jacob knew that I saw and moved his arm to the back of the couch. I looked up and started to ease my own tension a bit as I spoke. “I was thinking, what if the Volturi are coming here because of that.” I pointed to Nessie and Jacob on the couch. “I don’t understand.” Edward said as he was looking at Carlisle as if he did understand. I finished, “what if they are coming because of the bond that Nessie has with Jacob…” “you think they may see it as a threat.” Carlisle said “But why would they see them as a threat nothing has changed since the last time they were here.” Rose said from the doorway. “Actually it has, Nessie is almost reached full maturity and because of the imprinting she has a bond with Jacob that the Volturi can do nothing about. I think they may see it as a threat because of that, because Jacob is now linked to us as a coven and with that the wolves.” I said. Carlisle thought about it for a second then joined in the conversation. “I see what you’re saying, because Nessie and Jacob are together and will be forever Jacob is linked to us as a family. However, he is still a wolf and is still linked to the pack, which means that we as a family are linked to the pack. The Volturi seemed all to intrigued last time they were here when they say the pack on our side and not against us.” Rose interrupted, “So why would they see that as a threat?” “If we are linked to the pack they may be afraid that we will try to overthrow them.” Edward answered. Carlisle looked up, “they may think that we will use the pack to best of our abilities while we can and they feel that is the biggest threat of all.” Jacob chimed in a little annoyed, “Use us to the best of your abilities, we are not your guard dogs but if they wanna pick a fight over I would be glad to tear their throats out.” I glared at him. “That’s not what Carlisle is saying, we would never use the pack for our own advantages.” Edward finished for me. “The Volturi may not see it that way though. They are very powerful and anything that could destroy that power or even pose a threat to it they wont think twice about finding a reason to kill us all,” he paused for a second and look towards the back door, “Alice is home.” A second later Alice was standing in front of the piano with Jasper at her side. Jasper was looking at me with focused eyes and Edward was focused on Jasper. “No Jasper nothing is wrong.” “What’s going on?” “Alice asked as she looked from me and Edward to Carlisle. Carlisle was the one to answer her. “Bella has a theory about your vision this morning.” “Ok, lets hear it.” “Well she thinks they might be here because of the bond the Nessie has with Jacob. That because we are now linked to the pack through Jacob that we may pose a threat.” “Oh I see. That would make sense.” She said. I eased my tension so Jasper would stop with the mood control, and so he wouldn’t drive himself insane trying to control himself. “Alice,” “Yes Bella” “Carlisle said that you left this morning because your vision didn’t feel the same as the one you had about Nahuel, why?” She looked at me intrigued but then looked at Edward, who didn’t say anything. “Well I was monitoring the Volturi, but I wasn’t monitoring Nahuel. I guess the best way to describe is it like this, when Nessie was a baby and she would touch your face to communicate with you,” “Yes” I said “well that jolt you felt, that was how it felt with my vision of Nahuel. I wasn’t looking for him he just appeared. It didn’t feel right because it felt like an old memory or something not a vision. We all sat there in silence as we considered what this might be or what might have happened to make Alice feel that way.
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Permalink Reply by Michelle Fasking on -
your writing is good can't wait till the next part.
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Permalink Reply by Kat on -
lov it,but Alice should not be able to see Nahul,because he is a half vampire and half human,that one mistake but it still really good!
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Permalink Reply by DarkAngel on -
weee... hmm end the story hahahaha.. hmmm what is the surprise it was like the real next season of the book your really good hahahaha... why dont you try to go in to the path that writing is your specialty jaajaja please end the story<3
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Permalink Reply by ♥♥♥Cortney♥♥♥ on -
I love this! Can`t wait to read more
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Still feeling a little uneasy, Jake straightened up and leaned forward on the couch so his arms were resting on his knees. He looked up and said, “well I better get going so I can let Sam know whats going on.” He looked to Carlisle for approval I guess. Carlisle looked at him cautiously and said “just tell Sam the basics we don’t want to start telling our theories when we don’t know for sure if they are true or not. Nothing about Nahuel or Alice, just that the Volturi are in the country and are watching us. Thank you Jacob.” With that Jake kissed Nessie on the cheek and headed for the front door. He waited till he was outside before he phased. Edward laughed a little and I asked him, “what is so funny?” He looked at me and smiled, then he looked at Rose and said, “Rose, Jake said, ‘are you happy I waited till I got outside so you didn’t have to smell how horrible I was when I phased.” Rose just glared at Edward, “you tell that mutt that he doesn’t have to do anything for me, I’ll deal with the cards I’m dealt thank you.” “Don’t shoot the messenger Rose.” Edward lowered his head and continued to giggle and laugh under his breath. I elbowed him and he gave me my favorite smile.
After a few hours Jake came back with a message from Sam, “Sam would like to meet in the clearing to discuss the issues at hand. He would like to hear what you have to say about it.” Carlisle came downstairs as he heard Jake speaking. Edward looked at him as he stood at the foot of the stairs. “That would be fine, what time did he want to meet?” “As soon as possible, so like now.” “Give us a few minutes and he will be there.” Carlisle said. Jake took Nessie’s hand and headed for the door. They were gone before any of us moved. Carlisle spoke to all of us as a family not a coven. “We need to be careful what we tell Sam and the pack. While I do appreciate their help the more they know the more trouble it will cause for them later. -
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Chapter 2
We ran for the clearing to meet up with Sam and the rest of the pack to discuss the situation at hand. When we got there Sam was in human form, as were Jared, Seth, Embry and Jake. Everyone else was in wolf form. Edward stepped beside Carlisle to translate if they needed it. Sam walked forward to meet with Carlisle, they shook hands and Carlisle said “thank you for coming Sam. I hope you understand when I tell you that we can not share every detail with you because the fact that our families are as close as they are puts you in more trouble than you realize. I hope you understand.”
“Yes I do and I take no offense to it because of what we have already been through together I know that you mean us no harm and wish to protect both our families. So please begin as to what you wanted us to know so that we may help if we can.”
“Well for starters Alice had a vision of the Volturi coming to watch us.”
“Coming to Forks or Washington?”
“Neither, they are in the Country but for now they had decided to stay towards the east coast.”
“What are they here for then?”
“Well they are here to watch us. All of us not just our families but all the other vampires that live in the country.”
“Why, did something happen to make them come?”
“They have not all come, just the guard. We don’t know why they are here for sure, we only have a few theories.”
“Well that’s good and bad news.”
“How so?”
“Well its good that they are not coming here. Its bad that they have decided to watch us. What are your theories Carlisle?”
“Bella said that she thinks they may be here because of the bond that Jacob has with Renesmme. However we are not entirely sure about that.”
“If that were the case why would that be a problem, it wouldn’t concern them, would it?”
“It would in fact, because Nessie is half vampire, half human it does concern them. We think it would be a problem because of the imprinting. Nessie is tied to us and Jacob is tied to you. They are also tied together and we feel that the Volturi may see us as a growing power and they may feel threatened. If they do feel that a threat has risen then they will do everything in their power to stop us.”
“Then we stand beside you and fight.”
“Well we were hoping that it wouldn’t come to that. We are not taking action right now. We are going to wait and see what it is they are truly here for before we make any decisions about what to do. I wanted you to be informed so that if something did happen you would know what was going on and why you would be fighting.”
“Well thank you, it is always nice to know what your fighting for. Please keep us informed and of there is anything we can do please let us know.”
“Thank you Sam. When we know for sure you will know for sure.”
Sam and Carlisle shook hands and turned to walk away from each other. The wolves backed out of the clearing and we did the same. We all headed back to the house, except for Jake and Nessie, they headed to La Push with the rest of the pack.
We got back to the house and parted ways. Alice and Jasper went on a hike to Canada. Rosalie and Emmett went upstairs. Esme went to decorate some part of the house. Carlisle went to his office to do some research. Edward sat down at the piano and started to play, I went a took a seat next to him. I had so many things running through my mind at once. I still hadn’t gotten use to the fact that I had so much more room in my head now than when I was human. There’s not much I still remember from when I was human. I try as often as I can to think about the times I spent with Edward before he changed me. Not only was I thinking about me and Edward, I was also thinking about Renesmme, Jacob, the pack, and my family. The main thing I was thinking about was the Volturi and how much chaos they have caused us over the last few years. First it was the fact that I was a human who knew way too much about vampires. Then it was the fact that Alice hadn’t changed me after our initial meeting with the Volturi. The last straw was when they thought that Edward had created an immortal child, which was completely ridiculous since that was why he changed me. He stuck a needle directly into my heart containing his venom. Then he proceeded to bite me all over to distribute the venom faster. After I was turned the Volturi thought that I had turned Nessie and that Edward had failed to control me during my first day of being a vampire. I was called back to reality when I heard the music stop playing and Edward grabbed my hand. “What are you thinking about?” “You, me, and everything in between.” He raised an eyebrow to that last statement. “Are you thinking of spending some time alone?” I looked at him with a confused look on my face. “Clearly your not thinking of spending time alone, so what are you thinking?” He said. “I was thinking of when we met, of our family, and all that has happened to us since then.” I paused for a second and moved to sit on his lap. “Although some alone time would be nice. You never know this may be our last night together we could die tomorrow for all we know.” I smiled. He looked at me and laughed, apparently he got the joke. “Well Mrs. Cullen may I escort you to our cottage.” I got up off his lap and laughed, “You may Mr. Cullen.” He grabbed my hand and we walked out into the forest. When we hit the forest we started running and it only took us a few seconds to reach the point where we could see the cottage. We slowed down and walked to the front door. -
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it's great keeep going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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