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Permalink Reply by Jessica M. on August 2, 2011 at 4:54pm

that would b a cool book, i wish stephenie meyer would write another book too

Permalink Reply by Guy Douglas Ogan on August 2, 2011 at 5:37pm

I totally agree that the Volturi are the reason SM should write "the rest of the story!" Unfortunately, I think she'll never do so. That is why my book, "Immortal Relations" mentions them. So as not to infringe on SM's work, I call them "the Tuscan Scum" in my story, and that they'll need to be "dealt with." I explain that while they demand other vampires maintain a "low profile," they entice large numbers of tourists into their lair to be slaughtered, without any thought to the retribution they could bring down on all vampires! Clearly, they only care about their power, not the "justice" they claim to care about! I really wish SM would do it but maybe there are other writers, beside myself, who will also deal with the topic. If I were SM, I'd use the developing powers of Renesmee as a major weapon (the Volturi wouldn't know to what extent this young lady's powers had developed). I'd write it so her powers neutralize those of Jane and the others. Turn it into a fair fight (something that BD said wasn't anything the Volturi had faced in a very long time)! I'd love to read about Demetri getting his a-- kicked by Emmett, Jasper or Jacob (or all three ripping him to pieces and setting him on fire)! :-)

Permalink Reply by Megan Nicole Juiliano on August 2, 2011 at 7:05pm

Thanks 4 commenting So here is the other part.

When Jake heard about this he gave Bella Nessie and took off in 2 the woods (in wolf form). Bella, Edward, and Nessie All were shocked at what he did and went in2 the cottage. They told every1 and they started out but, Esme and Rosalie  because they stayed with Nessie. Carlisle, Jasper, Alice, Bella, and Edward looked every where but no Emmet or Jacob. Bella was starting 2 freak out but of corse Edward calmed her down. Then they hear a low whimper coming from behind. They turned around and saw Seth limping slowly in their direction. Bella ran other 2 help but, Edward was frozen in fear. Seth told them that Demerti had Emmet and Jake and that the pack was willing 2 help. (of corse) Then Bellas eyes turned black, then she asked Seth where were they. Seth took a look at every1 and the told Bella.

"They r in the meadow"

Then Bella was gone.

                                           Again please comment

                                                           Megan

Permalink Reply by Guy Douglas Ogan on August 3, 2011 at 12:09am

Are your saying that Demetri overpowered Jake, Emmett and Seth all at one time (any two of which would be more than a match for Demetri without Jane being involved IMHO). Perhaps, Demetri caught Jake in human form before he could change and knocked him out, then hit Emmett over the head from behind. I might believe that Demetri could then hurt Seth (as he "was limping slowly"), but almost any other senerio would be more than questionable, again, IMHO. 

Permalink Reply by camille victoria s. aquino on August 3, 2011 at 5:16am

wow...very nice....i think its very good if stephenie meyer would write a new book...haha...i love it...wats next????about emmet...

Permalink Reply by Megan Nicole Juiliano on August 3, 2011 at 4:57pm

Thanks 4 commenting again
So when Bella took off no1 knew what 2 do so they just followed quietly. When bella got 2 the meadow she saw Jake and Emmet pinned on the ground by Demetri and Jane. (i dont know how jane got there) They both looked in pain. Then Bella pushed her shield out 2 Emmet and Jake. When the shield hit them, the others rushed over 2 help. While this was happening Edward and Jasper took care of Jane and Demetri....... When they got back 2 the cottage Nessie was so happy 2 c Jacob she jumped up in2 his arms.
Well that was the end of my dream so lets hope ill have more.
Thanks 4 reading!
Megan

Permalink Reply by camille victoria s. aquino on August 5, 2011 at 6:08am

oh...its very...nice i think its very good,,if there's more,,,wish i dream like that...haha!!!!!!!

Permalink Reply by ☠ Vampirella ☠ on August 4, 2011 at 7:41pm

COULDN'T FIND EMMETT!! :O

 

Lol, I'm an Emmett fan.

Permalink Reply by Taylor Storm Porter on August 7, 2011 at 10:52pm

The volturi should come back when Renesmee's old enough to fight, then the volturi shold get their buts kicked. lol.

Permalink Reply by Guy Douglas Ogan on August 7, 2011 at 11:01pm

I agree totally, as I wrote on here this last Tuesday, SM should use the extraordinary powers that Nenesmee will have developed by the time those "Tuscan Scum" figure out some excuse to return, to kick their posterioris!

Permalink Reply by Marissa Tuxhorn on August 28, 2011 at 5:02pm

You should totally wright more. I wonder what would happen with Jacob and Renessmee. When Renessmee grows up does jacob propose to her or do they just stay solemates.