The Twilight Saga

This story takes place after Breaking Dawn: It's called Sunrise Tide, and is my fanfiction.


Chapter One-Bella's POV
I stared out the window in the bedroom of our cottage. Peering far out into the forest, I spotted them, using their laughter as a map. They were running, her on his furry back, almost home. It was raining out, but not too breezy. I sighed. I watched as Jake shifted back to human, his hair and bare chest dripping wet. Nessie was close behind, a big smile on her face. Only five years after her birth, yet she looked and acted the equivalence of a girl around the age of thirteen or fourteen. Yet she was far too advanced in her knowledge to be so young.
“We’re home!”, Jacob shouted, shaking his head furiously in an attempt to dry it.
I wrinkled my nose and gave him a small grin.
“Ugh, wet dog”, I noted.
He gave a small laugh, and just as abruptly, his smile turned into a frown and he rolled his eyes.
“Gotta go”, he said.
Nessie placed her palm on his neck, her expression pleading.
“Don’t go”, she whispered.
“I have to, honey”, he whispered back, leaning in closer.
I huffed, and he quickly turned around, a sheepish look on his face.
“See ya, Nessie”, he called, dashing into the forest.
Renesmee waved back, standing in the doorway and watching even after he was clearly out of sight.
“Nessie”, I said softly.
She turned, her quick movements graceful, and slammed the door shut.
‘Where’s Daddy?”, she asked, shaking her wet curls out the same way Jacob did.
“He went into town to pick up a present for Grandpa”, I said, running a finger through my daughter’s beautiful bronze curls. She was wearing a pale green silk dress, and matching flats. “Is that a new outfit?”, I noted, trying to make conversation.
She nodded, a grin filling her face.
“Aunt Alice got it for me yesterday. It’s for Grandpa Charlie’s party later.”
I sighed. Of course, she had to put it on two hours early to impress Jacob.
The thought made me shudder, which is odd, if you’re a vampire, like me. We’re never cold.
Nessie noticed, her chocolate brown eyes hinted me. But I pretended not to see it.
Renesmee looked as unbelievably beautiful as the first time I had held her, as a baby, if not more, but expressed it in a less childlike form now. Seeing her in “adult clothing”, the silk wrapped around her perfect, extra slender frame in a stylish way, made me a little nervous. She was almost fully matured, not only mentally, but physically. And it was hard to be prepared for all the things that would come with that new age. I’d only had five years to prepare. And though I didn’t sleep nights, it still came as a shock to me when Jacob displayed little tidbits of affection for my daughter. It was so weird to remember my blurry human days, when Jacob had done those things for me.
Just then, Edward came through the door, fashioning a jacket so he wouldn’t look too out of place in the town. In his hands were a giant box, wrapped up in silver wrapping paper and topped with a bow.
He gave me my favorite smile, and I dashed toward him like two magnets attracting. We kissed quickly, the big box in the way. He placed it on the floor gently, and sweeped me into his arms, then the same for Nessie.
He eyed her clothing.
“Alice”, he said, giving a velvety chuckle.
“Do you like my dress?”, she asked him.
“Of course. It’s beautiful.”
“What’s in the box?”, she said.
“Your grandfather’s new HD TV”, he answered.
“He’s never going to leave that old couch of his now”, I joked.
“Good thing Carlisle and Esme got him a new one”, Edward noted, smiling.
I smiled back, shaking my head.
We decided to go out and hunt for an hour, and then head over to the Cullen’s house to set up for the party. Little did I know of Alice’s upcoming vision……

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Chapter 15-2 and possibly Chapter 16 will be out either by tonight or tomorrow. Sorry for the wait!
Can't wait. You've got a lot of us loyal followers. Hope we're not making you work too hard.
OK...I hope you'll be able to HURRY!!!! PLEASE!!!
Hahhahahaha take your time ok Danielle...







*whispers....HURRY!*
Good writting but i would love to hear Jacobs POV his very funny expecially the way he views the vampire life... just a though

keep up the good worl
thembelihle i tot agree jacobs very funny
Danielle I was wondering how old you are? Also I love this story and cant wait fore more
Post more!
I was good. Keep going
I have no words to describe how great your story is!! Keep writing, you're doing a terrific job!!! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
i love it i want to raed more !!!!!!!!
honestly it was pretty good!!!!!
Here is Chapter 15-2, Bella's POV. I will try to get Chapter 16 out as soon as possible.-
Chapter 15-2-
My eyes stopped suddenly in the corner of the huge ballroom. Behind the thick, muscular folded arms of Demitri, glaring around the room with bright red eyes, was Aro. He had a wide smile spread across his translucent face. His milky red eyes sparkled with excitement.
He met my gaze and his smile stretched even wider, a sudden curiosity lighting his face.
I heard him whisper directions to Demitri, and then watched as the enormous vampire stepped aside to let Aro through. Gazing up at Demitri as he waited for his master to come back, and then spotting Emmett on the dance floor, I couldn’t help but wonder which one of the thick muscled vampires would win in a fight.
“The Cullens have arrived!” Aro breathed.
I gave him a wry smile, trying to avoid eye contact.
“It’s nice to see you Aro”, Carlisle lied politely.
Aro’s overly excited expression did not change.
He reached out for my hand. I heard Edward’s teeth grind together as he stood silently next to me.
Aro raised his free hand high in the air, and gave a small wave. Instantly, Caius and Marcus were at his side.
“Brothers! Look who has shown up to our gathering!”, Aro exclaimed.
Caius’ natural glaring expression did not change. Marcus nodded bluntly to us.
“What’s going on?”, Jake asked, rushing to my side with Nessie in his arms. Seth and Leah weren’t far behind. Emmett and Rosalie looked our way, and made their way to the little corner in which we all stood, a few inches away from the crowded dance floor.
Aro’s eyes grew wide as he took in the scene.
“Oh my, what luck we have today, brothers!”
He turned to Jake, slightly sniffing the air, then back to us.
“I see you have brought some of your shape shifting wolves with you”, Marcus noted.
“We’re nobody’s property, bloodsucker!”, Leah spat.
The Volturi looked startled. Seth put an arm on Leah’s slightly vibrating body, trying to clam her down.
“I see. My sincerest apologies”, Aro said.
Leah fixed her glare on Aro.
“Why don’t we continue our talk somewhere more private?”, he said. There was a strange eagerness clinging to his voice.
Jacob rolled his eyes, holding Nessie closer to his bare chest. She clung tightly back, afraid.
We all unwillingly followed the three red cloaks, until the noise of their party had disappeared, and we stared at each other in total darkness. I could feel something coming on. That, and Edward clutched me tighter, his face stone cold.

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