The Twilight Saga

This story takes place after Breaking Dawn: It's called Sunrise Tide, and is my fanfiction.

Chapter One-Bella's POV
I stared out the window in the bedroom of our cottage. Peering far out into the forest, I spotted them, using their laughter as a map. They were running, her on his furry back, almost home. It was raining out, but not too breezy. I sighed. I watched as Jake shifted back to human, his hair and bare chest dripping wet. Nessie was close behind, a big smile on her face. Only five years after her birth, yet she looked and acted the equivalence of a girl around the age of thirteen or fourteen. Yet she was far too advanced in her knowledge to be so young.
“We’re home!”, Jacob shouted, shaking his head furiously in an attempt to dry it.
I wrinkled my nose and gave him a small grin.
“Ugh, wet dog”, I noted.
He gave a small laugh, and just as abruptly, his smile turned into a frown and he rolled his eyes.
“Gotta go”, he said.
Nessie placed her palm on his neck, her expression pleading.
“Don’t go”, she whispered.
“I have to, honey”, he whispered back, leaning in closer.
I huffed, and he quickly turned around, a sheepish look on his face.
“See ya, Nessie”, he called, dashing into the forest.
Renesmee waved back, standing in the doorway and watching even after he was clearly out of sight.
“Nessie”, I said softly.
She turned, her quick movements graceful, and slammed the door shut.
‘Where’s Daddy?”, she asked, shaking her wet curls out the same way Jacob did.
“He went into town to pick up a present for Grandpa”, I said, running a finger through my daughter’s beautiful bronze curls. She was wearing a pale green silk dress, and matching flats. “Is that a new outfit?”, I noted, trying to make conversation.
She nodded, a grin filling her face.
“Aunt Alice got it for me yesterday. It’s for Grandpa Charlie’s party later.”
I sighed. Of course, she had to put it on two hours early to impress Jacob.
The thought made me shudder, which is odd, if you’re a vampire, like me. We’re never cold.
Nessie noticed, her chocolate brown eyes hinted me. But I pretended not to see it.
Renesmee looked as unbelievably beautiful as the first time I had held her, as a baby, if not more, but expressed it in a less childlike form now. Seeing her in “adult clothing”, the silk wrapped around her perfect, extra slender frame in a stylish way, made me a little nervous. She was almost fully matured, not only mentally, but physically. And it was hard to be prepared for all the things that would come with that new age. I’d only had five years to prepare. And though I didn’t sleep nights, it still came as a shock to me when Jacob displayed little tidbits of affection for my daughter. It was so weird to remember my blurry human days, when Jacob had done those things for me.
Just then, Edward came through the door, fashioning a jacket so he wouldn’t look too out of place in the town. In his hands were a giant box, wrapped up in silver wrapping paper and topped with a bow.
He gave me my favorite smile, and I dashed toward him like two magnets attracting. We kissed quickly, the big box in the way. He placed it on the floor gently, and sweeped me into his arms, then the same for Nessie.
He eyed her clothing.
“Alice”, he said, giving a velvety chuckle.
“Do you like my dress?”, she asked him.
“Of course. It’s beautiful.”
“What’s in the box?”, she said.
“Your grandfather’s new HD TV”, he answered.
“He’s never going to leave that old couch of his now”, I joked.
“Good thing Carlisle and Esme got him a new one”, Edward noted, smiling.
I smiled back, shaking my head.
We decided to go out and hunt for an hour, and then head over to the Cullen’s house to set up for the party. Little did I know of Alice’s upcoming vision……

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OMG. This is just awesome and cool... Could you pls write some more??? Pls... It just to interesting can't wait....:) Excellent Job....
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Very good
This is perfect......i luv it at first i thought that you stephenie meyer...for eal...please post more.....pleassseeee!!!!
Really enjoyed sitting reading through the chapters. You are a gifted writer. I'll keep checking in for the next installment... :o)
I seriously almost screamed when i saw chapter 16 was ready!
OMG I love it! It's pretty almosta s good as the Twilight Saga.
Chapter 17-This is in Renesmee's POV-
Chapter 17
Renesmee’s POV
“Nessie, can I talk to you alone?”, Jake asked. He looked upset, sort of depressed.
I nodded, following him into another room in the stone city we were condemned to live in until the Volturi came out of hiding.
He leaned down to me, and pressed his lips to mine softly. They were so soft, so warm.
But I pulled myself away suddenly.
“Jake, what do you want to talk about?”, I asked, suspicious.
He stood back, up, and looked down at my hand.
“I can’t stay here, Nessie”, he whispered, playing with the engagement ring on my finger.
“I put my hand on his chest, and he lifted me up into his arms. Jacob had hardly let me down since we’d gotten to Volterra. I didn’t mind; I was used to my overprotective boyfriend.
I ran my hand down his cheek, all the way to the waistline of his worn, ripped jeans.
He grabbed my wrist, and placed my palm on his neck.
Come on, Jake. You know you don’t want to go.
He sighed, nestling his face in my curls.
“I’m gonna miss you”, he said.
I shook my head.
Please, don’t do this. Don’t leave again.
He winced, giving an involuntary shudder.
“It won’t be for that long. Sam needs us back. Besides, you know how Leah feels about working for the vampires.”, he said, giving me a small smile.
I tried to smile back, but my lips were plastered in the shape of a frown.
“Don’t cry”, he said, a tear trickling down his cheek.
I wiped it away with my finger. He did the same to me.
“Let’s be tough about this Nessie. Your dad told me something before we came here. He said the three red cloaked vamps were very interested in having the shape shifters come here. They never gave up on their idea to use us as guards.”
“I don’t want to be tough about this, Jake. But-it’s the best thing for you to do. I just-”
I sighed, resting my head on his shoulder.
We slowly pulled away from each other, and said goodbye. I thanked my family for letting us have a moment alone.
“I’d better go. I think I’d lose it if I saw you in one of those red cloaks, as one of them”, he said.
I turned around, and walked out with him. Seth and Leah already had their bags packed and by their side.
“Are you ready Jake? Our plane leaves in two hours!”, Leah exclaimed. She was obviously excited to be leaving.
He nodded.
“Bye Jake”, I whispered.
“My heart is always with you”, he said tenderly.
I turned around as he made his way through the tunnel.
I couldn’t watch. It was too painful.
brilliant as always love it
You are doing very good at this like always!
Love it!!!! :)
i love it:X:X:X keep doing it because it is the best...i love it as much as i love braking down


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