The Twilight Saga

This story takes place after Breaking Dawn: It's called Sunrise Tide, and is my fanfiction.

Chapter One-Bella's POV
I stared out the window in the bedroom of our cottage. Peering far out into the forest, I spotted them, using their laughter as a map. They were running, her on his furry back, almost home. It was raining out, but not too breezy. I sighed. I watched as Jake shifted back to human, his hair and bare chest dripping wet. Nessie was close behind, a big smile on her face. Only five years after her birth, yet she looked and acted the equivalence of a girl around the age of thirteen or fourteen. Yet she was far too advanced in her knowledge to be so young.
“We’re home!”, Jacob shouted, shaking his head furiously in an attempt to dry it.
I wrinkled my nose and gave him a small grin.
“Ugh, wet dog”, I noted.
He gave a small laugh, and just as abruptly, his smile turned into a frown and he rolled his eyes.
“Gotta go”, he said.
Nessie placed her palm on his neck, her expression pleading.
“Don’t go”, she whispered.
“I have to, honey”, he whispered back, leaning in closer.
I huffed, and he quickly turned around, a sheepish look on his face.
“See ya, Nessie”, he called, dashing into the forest.
Renesmee waved back, standing in the doorway and watching even after he was clearly out of sight.
“Nessie”, I said softly.
She turned, her quick movements graceful, and slammed the door shut.
‘Where’s Daddy?”, she asked, shaking her wet curls out the same way Jacob did.
“He went into town to pick up a present for Grandpa”, I said, running a finger through my daughter’s beautiful bronze curls. She was wearing a pale green silk dress, and matching flats. “Is that a new outfit?”, I noted, trying to make conversation.
She nodded, a grin filling her face.
“Aunt Alice got it for me yesterday. It’s for Grandpa Charlie’s party later.”
I sighed. Of course, she had to put it on two hours early to impress Jacob.
The thought made me shudder, which is odd, if you’re a vampire, like me. We’re never cold.
Nessie noticed, her chocolate brown eyes hinted me. But I pretended not to see it.
Renesmee looked as unbelievably beautiful as the first time I had held her, as a baby, if not more, but expressed it in a less childlike form now. Seeing her in “adult clothing”, the silk wrapped around her perfect, extra slender frame in a stylish way, made me a little nervous. She was almost fully matured, not only mentally, but physically. And it was hard to be prepared for all the things that would come with that new age. I’d only had five years to prepare. And though I didn’t sleep nights, it still came as a shock to me when Jacob displayed little tidbits of affection for my daughter. It was so weird to remember my blurry human days, when Jacob had done those things for me.
Just then, Edward came through the door, fashioning a jacket so he wouldn’t look too out of place in the town. In his hands were a giant box, wrapped up in silver wrapping paper and topped with a bow.
He gave me my favorite smile, and I dashed toward him like two magnets attracting. We kissed quickly, the big box in the way. He placed it on the floor gently, and sweeped me into his arms, then the same for Nessie.
He eyed her clothing.
“Alice”, he said, giving a velvety chuckle.
“Do you like my dress?”, she asked him.
“Of course. It’s beautiful.”
“What’s in the box?”, she said.
“Your grandfather’s new HD TV”, he answered.
“He’s never going to leave that old couch of his now”, I joked.
“Good thing Carlisle and Esme got him a new one”, Edward noted, smiling.
I smiled back, shaking my head.
We decided to go out and hunt for an hour, and then head over to the Cullen’s house to set up for the party. Little did I know of Alice’s upcoming vision……

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I feel like there's a lot of sadness it makes me sad.And what does Jacob have to do?Why does he have to go away?I'll love more romance in it,even thought you are doing great and i love it! I know ppl tell you to come up with the next chapter fast.......but i would really like it if you took your time,it gives you more time to think and imagine,You know?You'll do better with time,just don't feel like you have to hurry. I'm not telling you to hurry just that you are great at this and I'm really exited for the next chapter!!:)
love it love it love it
aaaawwww!!!!! that's sssssooooo sweat!!!
W-o-w... You are a very talented writer, have you ever thought of going to #1 ranked Emerson--for creative writing degrees-- or #7 ranked Cardinal Stritch--in my home town-- for college?
Hmm, I have been looking around. I'll have to look it up sounds like a good place:)
man this sucks now im crying.....
It's getting so exciting!! Well done... cannot wait again till the next chapter!
wow, its such a great story
cant wait for the next few chapters
Team edward !!
Just read through all of your chapters and it is a great attention getter and story. You are very talented, keep up the good work; can't wait to read more
You have an amazing imagination...and a great gift. Keep up the excellent work!! Can't wait for more ;)
Loved it :)
OMG this is great... 15 years old n writting like ur stephenie herself... i hope she comes writes a book about the aftermath of breaking down as well... but until then this is wonderful!! its nice to read this... u prolly can't wirte bout the twilight saga n get it published but u should deff do ur own work... i know i'd buy it along with a lot of people in here!! u've got a great imagination for such a young age!!! good luck hope u make something outta ur talent!!!


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