The Twilight Saga

This story takes place after Breaking Dawn: It's called Sunrise Tide, and is my fanfiction.


Chapter One-Bella's POV
I stared out the window in the bedroom of our cottage. Peering far out into the forest, I spotted them, using their laughter as a map. They were running, her on his furry back, almost home. It was raining out, but not too breezy. I sighed. I watched as Jake shifted back to human, his hair and bare chest dripping wet. Nessie was close behind, a big smile on her face. Only five years after her birth, yet she looked and acted the equivalence of a girl around the age of thirteen or fourteen. Yet she was far too advanced in her knowledge to be so young.
“We’re home!”, Jacob shouted, shaking his head furiously in an attempt to dry it.
I wrinkled my nose and gave him a small grin.
“Ugh, wet dog”, I noted.
He gave a small laugh, and just as abruptly, his smile turned into a frown and he rolled his eyes.
“Gotta go”, he said.
Nessie placed her palm on his neck, her expression pleading.
“Don’t go”, she whispered.
“I have to, honey”, he whispered back, leaning in closer.
I huffed, and he quickly turned around, a sheepish look on his face.
“See ya, Nessie”, he called, dashing into the forest.
Renesmee waved back, standing in the doorway and watching even after he was clearly out of sight.
“Nessie”, I said softly.
She turned, her quick movements graceful, and slammed the door shut.
‘Where’s Daddy?”, she asked, shaking her wet curls out the same way Jacob did.
“He went into town to pick up a present for Grandpa”, I said, running a finger through my daughter’s beautiful bronze curls. She was wearing a pale green silk dress, and matching flats. “Is that a new outfit?”, I noted, trying to make conversation.
She nodded, a grin filling her face.
“Aunt Alice got it for me yesterday. It’s for Grandpa Charlie’s party later.”
I sighed. Of course, she had to put it on two hours early to impress Jacob.
The thought made me shudder, which is odd, if you’re a vampire, like me. We’re never cold.
Nessie noticed, her chocolate brown eyes hinted me. But I pretended not to see it.
Renesmee looked as unbelievably beautiful as the first time I had held her, as a baby, if not more, but expressed it in a less childlike form now. Seeing her in “adult clothing”, the silk wrapped around her perfect, extra slender frame in a stylish way, made me a little nervous. She was almost fully matured, not only mentally, but physically. And it was hard to be prepared for all the things that would come with that new age. I’d only had five years to prepare. And though I didn’t sleep nights, it still came as a shock to me when Jacob displayed little tidbits of affection for my daughter. It was so weird to remember my blurry human days, when Jacob had done those things for me.
Just then, Edward came through the door, fashioning a jacket so he wouldn’t look too out of place in the town. In his hands were a giant box, wrapped up in silver wrapping paper and topped with a bow.
He gave me my favorite smile, and I dashed toward him like two magnets attracting. We kissed quickly, the big box in the way. He placed it on the floor gently, and sweeped me into his arms, then the same for Nessie.
He eyed her clothing.
“Alice”, he said, giving a velvety chuckle.
“Do you like my dress?”, she asked him.
“Of course. It’s beautiful.”
“What’s in the box?”, she said.
“Your grandfather’s new HD TV”, he answered.
“He’s never going to leave that old couch of his now”, I joked.
“Good thing Carlisle and Esme got him a new one”, Edward noted, smiling.
I smiled back, shaking my head.
We decided to go out and hunt for an hour, and then head over to the Cullen’s house to set up for the party. Little did I know of Alice’s upcoming vision……

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Beautiful story!! It gives an interesting perspective to where Stephenie Meyer left off. I hope you continue writing, it's truly amazing I can't wait to read more!!!
you are sooo COOL and TALENTED DANIELLE :D
PLS. continue writing some more thanks!!
Oh yes, and please write about Taxi, right, Faith? :))
I was just joking...peace.:))
You are amazing!! Please write more!! ....................fast!
Hey Daniel r u on Facebook??
I think you should write a novel.
i agree too.. u should foshoo write a novel!!! ur doing an awsome job.. we talk about u in our twilight saga discussion..lol i have alot of poeple who cant wait to finish reading breaking dawn n get to ur sunrise tide!!!! great job hun.......
love it.....
tht wuz great please please please post more i would love to read more
Here's Chapter 18-Renesmee's POV. Sorry about no chapters posted Sat. and Sun.Promise there will be more soon!-
Chapter 18
I listened intently to the little droplets of rain bounce of the ceiling of my temporary home. My whole day was spent sitting on Aro’s “throne”. My finger lightly traced the elaborate design of the armrest carved in gold and opal.
Mama entered then, the Volturi’s dark red robe surrounding her frame.
I kept my head down, draping the giant hood of my own robe over my face.
“Renesmee, would you like to come hunting with us?” she asked.
I sighed. Hunting made me think of Jacob. Everything made me think of Jacob.
But my mouth felt dangerously dry. And that didn’t add to my lifeless disposition.
“Sure”, I said quietly, standing up and removing my robe, revealing my black cotton dress underneath.
Mama put her arm around me, and we joined Daddy, Aunt Alice, and Uncle Jasper. The rest of my family had gone hunting earlier, searching for a blunt forest safe enough for us not to be seen.
Aunt Alice gave me a disapproving look.
“Black? Where’s the bright colorful Nessie I know?”, she asked, fluffing out my curls for me.
I shrugged.
Uncle Jasper snuck up behind me, suddenly lifting me into the air and onto his strong shoulders.
“Ready to hunt?”, he teased.
We made our way out of Volterra. It was gloomy and dark outside as well.
Jasper set me down, and Daddy came to my side to hold my hand, Mama in his other.
We drove in my Aunt’s Porche until we reached a damp wooded area. As we dashed through the forest, Daddy lifted my onto his back.
“Whoo!”, I shouted, my high pitched yell sounding more animal than anything.
We all laughed, the sound creating a perfectly harmonious orchestra.
Hunting was actually more fun than I’d expected it to be. I slowly stalked an antelope until it sensed my presence and began to rush. I somersaulted through the air, and landed directly in front of it. Grabbing an antler, I easily sunk my razor sharp teeth through its neck.
Mama stood beside me, smiling.
“Nice moves”, she commented.
I jumped into her arms, reaching to touch my hand to her neck.
She suddenly rolled her eyes, wiping the bright red blood from across her cheek.
“Five years and I still can’t get it right”, she muttered.
“Don’t worry Mama, you’re not alone”, I assured her.
Daddy was suddenly at our side. He sighed, putting an arm around each of us.
“What would I do without you two?”, he murmured, kissing my head. He turned to Mama, and bent down, forcing her to follow. They shared a long, passionate kiss, until I sniffed, and they both suddenly looked up.
“Renesmee, what’s wrong?” Mama asked, startled.
I lifted my hand up to wipe the single tear that rolled slowly down my cheek, but Mama caught it first.
Daddy’s face already lit up with understanding.
“Jacob”, he said quietly, knowing I didn’t really want to talk at the moment.
“Why don’t you call him tonight?” she suggested.
“It’s not the same.”
CooL woman! Awesome!
wow. awesome. i feel bad for nessie ):
post more soon!!!

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