The Twilight Saga

This story takes place after Breaking Dawn: It's called Sunrise Tide, and is my fanfiction.


Chapter One-Bella's POV
I stared out the window in the bedroom of our cottage. Peering far out into the forest, I spotted them, using their laughter as a map. They were running, her on his furry back, almost home. It was raining out, but not too breezy. I sighed. I watched as Jake shifted back to human, his hair and bare chest dripping wet. Nessie was close behind, a big smile on her face. Only five years after her birth, yet she looked and acted the equivalence of a girl around the age of thirteen or fourteen. Yet she was far too advanced in her knowledge to be so young.
“We’re home!”, Jacob shouted, shaking his head furiously in an attempt to dry it.
I wrinkled my nose and gave him a small grin.
“Ugh, wet dog”, I noted.
He gave a small laugh, and just as abruptly, his smile turned into a frown and he rolled his eyes.
“Gotta go”, he said.
Nessie placed her palm on his neck, her expression pleading.
“Don’t go”, she whispered.
“I have to, honey”, he whispered back, leaning in closer.
I huffed, and he quickly turned around, a sheepish look on his face.
“See ya, Nessie”, he called, dashing into the forest.
Renesmee waved back, standing in the doorway and watching even after he was clearly out of sight.
“Nessie”, I said softly.
She turned, her quick movements graceful, and slammed the door shut.
‘Where’s Daddy?”, she asked, shaking her wet curls out the same way Jacob did.
“He went into town to pick up a present for Grandpa”, I said, running a finger through my daughter’s beautiful bronze curls. She was wearing a pale green silk dress, and matching flats. “Is that a new outfit?”, I noted, trying to make conversation.
She nodded, a grin filling her face.
“Aunt Alice got it for me yesterday. It’s for Grandpa Charlie’s party later.”
I sighed. Of course, she had to put it on two hours early to impress Jacob.
The thought made me shudder, which is odd, if you’re a vampire, like me. We’re never cold.
Nessie noticed, her chocolate brown eyes hinted me. But I pretended not to see it.
Renesmee looked as unbelievably beautiful as the first time I had held her, as a baby, if not more, but expressed it in a less childlike form now. Seeing her in “adult clothing”, the silk wrapped around her perfect, extra slender frame in a stylish way, made me a little nervous. She was almost fully matured, not only mentally, but physically. And it was hard to be prepared for all the things that would come with that new age. I’d only had five years to prepare. And though I didn’t sleep nights, it still came as a shock to me when Jacob displayed little tidbits of affection for my daughter. It was so weird to remember my blurry human days, when Jacob had done those things for me.
Just then, Edward came through the door, fashioning a jacket so he wouldn’t look too out of place in the town. In his hands were a giant box, wrapped up in silver wrapping paper and topped with a bow.
He gave me my favorite smile, and I dashed toward him like two magnets attracting. We kissed quickly, the big box in the way. He placed it on the floor gently, and sweeped me into his arms, then the same for Nessie.
He eyed her clothing.
“Alice”, he said, giving a velvety chuckle.
“Do you like my dress?”, she asked him.
“Of course. It’s beautiful.”
“What’s in the box?”, she said.
“Your grandfather’s new HD TV”, he answered.
“He’s never going to leave that old couch of his now”, I joked.
“Good thing Carlisle and Esme got him a new one”, Edward noted, smiling.
I smiled back, shaking my head.
We decided to go out and hunt for an hour, and then head over to the Cullen’s house to set up for the party. Little did I know of Alice’s upcoming vision……

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great.great.great.as usual.2 thumbs up...i'm a fan of yours now.haha
i love this stuff keep it up
wow...
Jacob needs to return - don't like her being sad! Fab as ever!!
I am really enjoying this... It's a great follow on from the story. You have to keep going! :o)
Chapter 19-Renesmee's POV-
Chapter 19

“Nessie!”, he blurted.
I smiled. His deep, unforgettable voice rang in my head over and over again until I remembered how to answer back.
“I’ve missed you”, I managed, my voice half choked up but strangely still sounding perfectly clear.
He embraced me in a tight hug, his long, warm arms overlapping.
I leaned in for a kiss. But where our lips should have touched, it felt empty.
I stared up, confused.
He put a finger to my partly opened mouth.
“Sorry Nessie, that’s not going to work here.”
“What does that mean?”, I asked, looking around me.
We were in the forest, right near my family’s cottage in Forks.
“How did we get here? Did I sleep through the whole plane trip?”
He continued to talk, as if I hadn’t spoken.
“I was thinking today I could run you up to La Push and we could hang out at my place”, he suggested.
“What are you waiting for?”, I asked, climbing onto his back. He quickly phased, metamorphosing into the giant russet wolf.
Excitement held to my face as I clutched tightly to his blowing fur. My curls, sprung up by the wind, bounced forward into my face. I laughed, putting my cheek down against Jacob.
As we neared La Push, suddenly everything started to turn to fog, the greens and the reds of the forest became a thick mist, and started to evaporate.
I clutched Jake even tighter, afraid. But there was no fur under my palm. Just air. I looked down, startled. Jake had disappeared. I stood alone in the center of this melting world, until at last I felt something very real, a comfortable but icy, very familiar feeling brush my arm.
My eyes opened wide, body trembling.
Mama sat at the edge of my bed. The vivid green of Forks had disappeared with my dream. Eerily dark, gloomy and gray took its place.
“Mama!”, I cried, rushing into her arms, sobbing.
At the sound of my yell, my whole family came into my room, which looked more like a stone prison with a bed stuck by the side.
Everyone crowded around me, comforting me with a hug.
My face flushed, embarrassed.
“What’s wrong?’, Mama asked, alarmed.
“I-I had a dream about Jacob. It was so real…and then I woke up”, I said sheepishly.
Daddy came to sit beside me.
“We all hate to see you so upset, Renesmee. Perhaps we can reason with Sam, persuade him to let Jacob come back”, he suggested.
I sighed. The more involved Jake and I were, the more longing we felt when we were away from one another.
“I’m so sorry I startled everyone over a stupid dream”, I said quietly.
“Don’t blame yourself Nessie. It’s hard to be away from the one you love”, Mama said soothingly.
Daddy became stiff at my side, his face slightly pained.
I knew all too well of my parents’ own love story. How difficult it had once been, one a vampire, the other a human. Yet here we all were, sitting side by side, fussing over my dream.
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