The Twilight Saga

This story takes place after Breaking Dawn: It's called Sunrise Tide, and is my fanfiction.

Chapter One-Bella's POV
I stared out the window in the bedroom of our cottage. Peering far out into the forest, I spotted them, using their laughter as a map. They were running, her on his furry back, almost home. It was raining out, but not too breezy. I sighed. I watched as Jake shifted back to human, his hair and bare chest dripping wet. Nessie was close behind, a big smile on her face. Only five years after her birth, yet she looked and acted the equivalence of a girl around the age of thirteen or fourteen. Yet she was far too advanced in her knowledge to be so young.
“We’re home!”, Jacob shouted, shaking his head furiously in an attempt to dry it.
I wrinkled my nose and gave him a small grin.
“Ugh, wet dog”, I noted.
He gave a small laugh, and just as abruptly, his smile turned into a frown and he rolled his eyes.
“Gotta go”, he said.
Nessie placed her palm on his neck, her expression pleading.
“Don’t go”, she whispered.
“I have to, honey”, he whispered back, leaning in closer.
I huffed, and he quickly turned around, a sheepish look on his face.
“See ya, Nessie”, he called, dashing into the forest.
Renesmee waved back, standing in the doorway and watching even after he was clearly out of sight.
“Nessie”, I said softly.
She turned, her quick movements graceful, and slammed the door shut.
‘Where’s Daddy?”, she asked, shaking her wet curls out the same way Jacob did.
“He went into town to pick up a present for Grandpa”, I said, running a finger through my daughter’s beautiful bronze curls. She was wearing a pale green silk dress, and matching flats. “Is that a new outfit?”, I noted, trying to make conversation.
She nodded, a grin filling her face.
“Aunt Alice got it for me yesterday. It’s for Grandpa Charlie’s party later.”
I sighed. Of course, she had to put it on two hours early to impress Jacob.
The thought made me shudder, which is odd, if you’re a vampire, like me. We’re never cold.
Nessie noticed, her chocolate brown eyes hinted me. But I pretended not to see it.
Renesmee looked as unbelievably beautiful as the first time I had held her, as a baby, if not more, but expressed it in a less childlike form now. Seeing her in “adult clothing”, the silk wrapped around her perfect, extra slender frame in a stylish way, made me a little nervous. She was almost fully matured, not only mentally, but physically. And it was hard to be prepared for all the things that would come with that new age. I’d only had five years to prepare. And though I didn’t sleep nights, it still came as a shock to me when Jacob displayed little tidbits of affection for my daughter. It was so weird to remember my blurry human days, when Jacob had done those things for me.
Just then, Edward came through the door, fashioning a jacket so he wouldn’t look too out of place in the town. In his hands were a giant box, wrapped up in silver wrapping paper and topped with a bow.
He gave me my favorite smile, and I dashed toward him like two magnets attracting. We kissed quickly, the big box in the way. He placed it on the floor gently, and sweeped me into his arms, then the same for Nessie.
He eyed her clothing.
“Alice”, he said, giving a velvety chuckle.
“Do you like my dress?”, she asked him.
“Of course. It’s beautiful.”
“What’s in the box?”, she said.
“Your grandfather’s new HD TV”, he answered.
“He’s never going to leave that old couch of his now”, I joked.
“Good thing Carlisle and Esme got him a new one”, Edward noted, smiling.
I smiled back, shaking my head.
We decided to go out and hunt for an hour, and then head over to the Cullen’s house to set up for the party. Little did I know of Alice’s upcoming vision……

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This is Chapter 20-2. It's really pretty short, but while I'm working on the rest if it, i thought you might like something more to read. So, there will be a 20-3, which I am still working on, hopefull longer than this.
Chapter 20-2
Renesmee's POV-

Jake’s favorite color on me was lavender. I searched quickly around a rack in the Designer store we shopped in, until I found something practical, yet still classy.

It made me even more eager to see him.
We sprang from store to store, in search of the perfect, “Alice approved” clothing.
I was glad I had spent my day in a more productive manner, but it didn’t change things. I had to face the obvious. Jacob would always be instilled in my heart. It didn’t matter how much I tried to avoid my feelings.
Back in Volterra, the hollow halls echoed with emptiness. Only my grandparents were home, there rest were hunting, as usual.
A shrill, electronic bell-like sound rang from my pocket. I shakily reached for my phone, afraid to look at the Caller ID.
“Hi”, Jake answered, loud chewing mashing up his words.
“Called me during your lunch break?”, I laughed, my heart fluttered spasmodically.
He laughed too, uniquely and utterly Jacob.
“I love you, honey”, he said softly.
“I love you too. So much.”
I had the sudden urge to place my hand on his neck, to show him how I felt at this very moment, hearing the voice I’d been obsessing over since he had left.
He took a breath.
“I’m so sorry. I should never have- I mean- it wasn’t anywhere near easy to-“
I interrupted him with a sigh.
“Jake, it’s okay. I don’t really care. Just the fact that you called…”
We spent the next two minutes in silence.
“I really wish you were-“, I started, but something caught my attention. A loud echo, a beating heart that definitely wasn’t my own.
I quickly turned around, and gasped.
There at my doorway stood Jacob, his phone held up to his ear.
Awwwww!! What happens next!! this is torture!! :P
aaaawwww YAY!!! thats totally awsome glad he came back!!! i got goose bumps.. as usual!!! wonderful job
awwww so sweet, totally unexpected, yet brilliant. keep it up your doing great :)
ohh my goshhh gurlllll... ur such an awsome writer.... i could totally picture jake doing something like that... im soooo excited .. i cant wait for ur future chapters.. keep up the gud work.. :)
AWWWWW HOW CUTE!!!!!!!!! This is how far love can travel!!!! TO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What a great couple!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
continue f u pllllllllllllllllz , this is really sweet of him he couldn`t wait to see her this is so romantic
plizzzz plizzzzzzzzz write what happens nxt it is a troture
omg ur writing is awesome i love this story
that was cute
OMG!!!!!1 aaaawww moremoremoremore!!!!!!!!!!11
awwwww. how sweet he came back...


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