The Twilight Saga

This story takes place after Breaking Dawn: It's called Sunrise Tide, and is my fanfiction.

Chapter One-Bella's POV
I stared out the window in the bedroom of our cottage. Peering far out into the forest, I spotted them, using their laughter as a map. They were running, her on his furry back, almost home. It was raining out, but not too breezy. I sighed. I watched as Jake shifted back to human, his hair and bare chest dripping wet. Nessie was close behind, a big smile on her face. Only five years after her birth, yet she looked and acted the equivalence of a girl around the age of thirteen or fourteen. Yet she was far too advanced in her knowledge to be so young.
“We’re home!”, Jacob shouted, shaking his head furiously in an attempt to dry it.
I wrinkled my nose and gave him a small grin.
“Ugh, wet dog”, I noted.
He gave a small laugh, and just as abruptly, his smile turned into a frown and he rolled his eyes.
“Gotta go”, he said.
Nessie placed her palm on his neck, her expression pleading.
“Don’t go”, she whispered.
“I have to, honey”, he whispered back, leaning in closer.
I huffed, and he quickly turned around, a sheepish look on his face.
“See ya, Nessie”, he called, dashing into the forest.
Renesmee waved back, standing in the doorway and watching even after he was clearly out of sight.
“Nessie”, I said softly.
She turned, her quick movements graceful, and slammed the door shut.
‘Where’s Daddy?”, she asked, shaking her wet curls out the same way Jacob did.
“He went into town to pick up a present for Grandpa”, I said, running a finger through my daughter’s beautiful bronze curls. She was wearing a pale green silk dress, and matching flats. “Is that a new outfit?”, I noted, trying to make conversation.
She nodded, a grin filling her face.
“Aunt Alice got it for me yesterday. It’s for Grandpa Charlie’s party later.”
I sighed. Of course, she had to put it on two hours early to impress Jacob.
The thought made me shudder, which is odd, if you’re a vampire, like me. We’re never cold.
Nessie noticed, her chocolate brown eyes hinted me. But I pretended not to see it.
Renesmee looked as unbelievably beautiful as the first time I had held her, as a baby, if not more, but expressed it in a less childlike form now. Seeing her in “adult clothing”, the silk wrapped around her perfect, extra slender frame in a stylish way, made me a little nervous. She was almost fully matured, not only mentally, but physically. And it was hard to be prepared for all the things that would come with that new age. I’d only had five years to prepare. And though I didn’t sleep nights, it still came as a shock to me when Jacob displayed little tidbits of affection for my daughter. It was so weird to remember my blurry human days, when Jacob had done those things for me.
Just then, Edward came through the door, fashioning a jacket so he wouldn’t look too out of place in the town. In his hands were a giant box, wrapped up in silver wrapping paper and topped with a bow.
He gave me my favorite smile, and I dashed toward him like two magnets attracting. We kissed quickly, the big box in the way. He placed it on the floor gently, and sweeped me into his arms, then the same for Nessie.
He eyed her clothing.
“Alice”, he said, giving a velvety chuckle.
“Do you like my dress?”, she asked him.
“Of course. It’s beautiful.”
“What’s in the box?”, she said.
“Your grandfather’s new HD TV”, he answered.
“He’s never going to leave that old couch of his now”, I joked.
“Good thing Carlisle and Esme got him a new one”, Edward noted, smiling.
I smiled back, shaking my head.
We decided to go out and hunt for an hour, and then head over to the Cullen’s house to set up for the party. Little did I know of Alice’s upcoming vision……

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AWWWWWWW!!!!! That is sooo nice! I love it!
it´s niceeeeeeeee i love it
its realllyy goodd, keep writingg!
you are an awesome def. need to send this to a publisher when you are done!!!! keep up the good work !!!!!!!:)
Here is Chapter 20-3-Renesmee's POV-
I quickly turned around, and gasped.
There at my doorway stood Jacob, his phone held up to his ear.

I could hardly enable the fact that he stood only a few feet away from me, towering under the door.
There was an unexplainable, strange passion in those first moments. As if the sun had been lowered into Volterra, and back into me. A ball of light so fierce, so extraordinary I couldn’t handle it.
My emotions exploded together in those moments, laughter and sadness, shock, longing, and most importantly, pure, true love.
I charged toward Jacob so intensely that when I finally landed in his arms, I felt like I was crashing into a brick wall. But it definitely didn’t hurt. Instead it felt refreshing. Replenishing. I was alive again.
He intertwined his hands into my hair as I ran mine to his face.
The exact moment our lips touched, Jake’s knees gave out and we landed on the floor, him on his back, me on his chest.
I drew my hands up his light t-shirt, my fingers caressing his muscular chest softly.
“You have no idea how much I have missed you”, I mumbled, my lips now in his hair.
“Mmmhm”, he murmured back, holding me tighter against him.
I suddenly pulled myself back, gasping for air, a little dizzy. Jake was panting too.
“I don’t hear anyone.”, I whispered.
“Your grandparents left when I came. I asked them if I could have some alone time with you”, he said.
I stood up, and went to sit on my bed. Jacob sat beside me, his arm around my back.
“Could you do me a favor?”, he asked.
I looked up at him.
“Would you mind…taking off the red robe? I don’t like you associating with them.”
I eagerly obeyed his command, sharing the same point as he did.
Underneath I wore something a little brighter than the day before, the dress with the amber crystals my aunt had given me back at home.
“Much better.”
I wrapped my arms around him tight, one hand on his face.
Don’t ever leave me again, I pleaded, showing him how I had been functioning without him.
He suddenly smiled.
“You are the best thing to ever happen to me”, he said.
I sighed with happiness.
“Nessie, there is something still wrong.”
His head was down, as if it pained him to bring it up.
“Well, in two years-”
“-I will be fully matured”, I interrupted.
He nodded slowly.
“You won’t be able to-”
My door suddenly swung open, Mama staring coldly at Jake.
“What are you doing?”, she asked.
I glanced at him. His face held a slightly guilty expression.
“It’s alright. We got here just in time”, Daddy said from behind her.
“What’s wrong?”, I asked curiously.
“Nothing”, Jake answered quickly, hopping up from the bed. He pushed past my parents, standing in the doorway.
“I’ll be in my room if you need me, Nessie”, he muttered, disappearing out the door.
“What’s going on?”.
Mama forced a smile.
“Everything’s fine, for now”, she said, coming over to kiss me on the head. Then her and Daddy flew out, to discuss the almost-problem.
I was left alone in my room, confused.
Oh you cant leave me hanging like this YOUR KILLING ME
OHHHHH MY GOSHHHHH. lol i cant believe it.... i love it.. this isss soooo romantic.. i cant wait for more.. i guess i just "opened my first christmas present !!!" lol thank you soo much danielle... MERRY CHRISTMAS........!!!!
what's going to happen???????ur killing me with the suspense!!!
merry christms!!! thanks for the christmas preasent i was waiting was the best!!!
still brilliant, hope you enjoyed your christmas and have a happy new year.
come on i need more!!!!!!!!!!!!
what!!!! you cant jst stop like that.....


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