The Twilight Saga

This story takes place after Breaking Dawn: It's called Sunrise Tide, and is my fanfiction.

Chapter One-Bella's POV
I stared out the window in the bedroom of our cottage. Peering far out into the forest, I spotted them, using their laughter as a map. They were running, her on his furry back, almost home. It was raining out, but not too breezy. I sighed. I watched as Jake shifted back to human, his hair and bare chest dripping wet. Nessie was close behind, a big smile on her face. Only five years after her birth, yet she looked and acted the equivalence of a girl around the age of thirteen or fourteen. Yet she was far too advanced in her knowledge to be so young.
“We’re home!”, Jacob shouted, shaking his head furiously in an attempt to dry it.
I wrinkled my nose and gave him a small grin.
“Ugh, wet dog”, I noted.
He gave a small laugh, and just as abruptly, his smile turned into a frown and he rolled his eyes.
“Gotta go”, he said.
Nessie placed her palm on his neck, her expression pleading.
“Don’t go”, she whispered.
“I have to, honey”, he whispered back, leaning in closer.
I huffed, and he quickly turned around, a sheepish look on his face.
“See ya, Nessie”, he called, dashing into the forest.
Renesmee waved back, standing in the doorway and watching even after he was clearly out of sight.
“Nessie”, I said softly.
She turned, her quick movements graceful, and slammed the door shut.
‘Where’s Daddy?”, she asked, shaking her wet curls out the same way Jacob did.
“He went into town to pick up a present for Grandpa”, I said, running a finger through my daughter’s beautiful bronze curls. She was wearing a pale green silk dress, and matching flats. “Is that a new outfit?”, I noted, trying to make conversation.
She nodded, a grin filling her face.
“Aunt Alice got it for me yesterday. It’s for Grandpa Charlie’s party later.”
I sighed. Of course, she had to put it on two hours early to impress Jacob.
The thought made me shudder, which is odd, if you’re a vampire, like me. We’re never cold.
Nessie noticed, her chocolate brown eyes hinted me. But I pretended not to see it.
Renesmee looked as unbelievably beautiful as the first time I had held her, as a baby, if not more, but expressed it in a less childlike form now. Seeing her in “adult clothing”, the silk wrapped around her perfect, extra slender frame in a stylish way, made me a little nervous. She was almost fully matured, not only mentally, but physically. And it was hard to be prepared for all the things that would come with that new age. I’d only had five years to prepare. And though I didn’t sleep nights, it still came as a shock to me when Jacob displayed little tidbits of affection for my daughter. It was so weird to remember my blurry human days, when Jacob had done those things for me.
Just then, Edward came through the door, fashioning a jacket so he wouldn’t look too out of place in the town. In his hands were a giant box, wrapped up in silver wrapping paper and topped with a bow.
He gave me my favorite smile, and I dashed toward him like two magnets attracting. We kissed quickly, the big box in the way. He placed it on the floor gently, and sweeped me into his arms, then the same for Nessie.
He eyed her clothing.
“Alice”, he said, giving a velvety chuckle.
“Do you like my dress?”, she asked him.
“Of course. It’s beautiful.”
“What’s in the box?”, she said.
“Your grandfather’s new HD TV”, he answered.
“He’s never going to leave that old couch of his now”, I joked.
“Good thing Carlisle and Esme got him a new one”, Edward noted, smiling.
I smiled back, shaking my head.
We decided to go out and hunt for an hour, and then head over to the Cullen’s house to set up for the party. Little did I know of Alice’s upcoming vision……

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im sorry to say it but bella need to back off before she pushes renesmee to do something that they will all regret later.....
Okay that's so not fair! You seriously need to write this into a book, so we can get it all in one piece!
You're killing us here!!
post more please. :)) it's really good.
you should really publish this, Danielle. this is great! heard you're only 15, which makes it greater!!! you have a talent, expose it. :D
Chapter 21-2
Bella's POV-
“What’s wrong?”, we asked together.
Nessie put a hand on each of our necks.
I saw first her love for her family, moments from dispersed points in her young life that she truly cherished. Me, a mere human, holding her moments after her birth. Edward, as he softly told her the many stories she had not been around to witness. And then I saw Jacob. How he truly cared for her. Then from her mind she shared an unearthed moment, something from back in her early toddler days. She sat upon Jake, a huge russet wolf. They ran through the forest, enjoying the effortless, easy flow of their blooming friendship. Through her eyes the image became blurry, as little Nessie started to fall asleep. Jacob stopped near a thick, old tree, shady with leaves, and phased to his human form, cradling her in his long arms. He hummed a little tune to her, it sounded vaguely familiar. An old Quileute song I had heard when I was still human, listening to legendary stories lit to life by the blazing campfire.
Just as Renesmee’s memory began to drift off with her sleep, Jacob kissed her gently on the cheek.
I glanced up towards Jacob. He stared past me, into Renesmee’s vivid light brown eyes.
She still held her grip on both of our necks, showing us one last image.
I smiled, remembering it most fondly. In the field we all stood, joyously celebrating our victory as the Volturi fled, defeated. I sighed as my lips rammed into Edward’s, watching it from Nessie’s eyes as she dragged Jacob along with us. It was one of the happiest moments of my life, though I had many.
I found myself smiling, getting caught up in the memory. All Renesmee wanted was for us all to get along, as a family.
absolutly brilliant as i have said from the beggining, dont rush for anyone and keep it going enjoy your new year and cant wait for more. also you should email your story to someone to publish and many people would buy it as you have created such a popular status on here alone, just think how far that could get you. take care and dont over do it
Your really good at this !!!
I have just meet again my imposible love and I felt exactly like bella:lost in his sweet sloly
Thank you all so much! 21-3 is nearly done.
Chapter 21-3
Bella's POV-
I found myself smiling, getting caught up in the memory. All Renesmee wanted was for us all to get along, as a family.
Jake was smiling too. I reluctantly set Nessie down, no time to contemplate my next decision. I glanced at the ring on my daughter’s finger. Then to Jacob. He still stared at Nessie like a blind man seeing the sun for the very first time. She was a wonder, an amazement.
I took a deep breath, and put a hand on the door.
“Could I speak to Jacob alone for just a minute?”, I asked.
Renesmee nodded, anticipation clearly on her face. I slowly shut the door.
I knew she was still listening, so I had to do this more discreetly than I’d planned.
I grabbed Jake’s magazine from off his bed, and grabbed a pen from the office desk on the other side of the room.
“Mind if I write on this?”, I asked him.
“Go ahead.”
He gave me a strange look, obviously confused by my ethics.
I skimmed through the magazine until I found a re-order card, and held my pen to the blank side.
I hated to let Jacob win this battle, but I thought I knew what he really wanted.
In less than three seconds I scribbled the message across the paper in my moderately neat print.
He reached his hand out for it, but I slipped it back into the magazine, then placed it gently into his hand.
I felt my eyes prick as I slipped out the door and back to my room. On my way, I passed by Renesmee. She sat on her bed, looking through her suitcase.
“Put on something nice”, I hinted with a whisper.
I saw her look up, but I vanished through my bedroom door.
Edward was still there, waiting for me to return. By now Jacob was reading the note, and Edward was reflecting it back into his own mind.
I remembered the exact words I had just written down as I leaned on Edward for support.
Sorry about calling you selfish. Hopefully you can understand why I was so angry at you. But I just want Renesmee to be happy. You too. I’ve discussed this with Edward already. I’m giving you our permission and our blessings to marry Nessie. I really did want you to wait, but I can see how difficult this is getting. So, good luck.
Love, Bella
this... is awesome!!! good job


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