The Twilight Saga

This story takes place after Breaking Dawn: It's called Sunrise Tide, and is my fanfiction.


Chapter One-Bella's POV
I stared out the window in the bedroom of our cottage. Peering far out into the forest, I spotted them, using their laughter as a map. They were running, her on his furry back, almost home. It was raining out, but not too breezy. I sighed. I watched as Jake shifted back to human, his hair and bare chest dripping wet. Nessie was close behind, a big smile on her face. Only five years after her birth, yet she looked and acted the equivalence of a girl around the age of thirteen or fourteen. Yet she was far too advanced in her knowledge to be so young.
“We’re home!”, Jacob shouted, shaking his head furiously in an attempt to dry it.
I wrinkled my nose and gave him a small grin.
“Ugh, wet dog”, I noted.
He gave a small laugh, and just as abruptly, his smile turned into a frown and he rolled his eyes.
“Gotta go”, he said.
Nessie placed her palm on his neck, her expression pleading.
“Don’t go”, she whispered.
“I have to, honey”, he whispered back, leaning in closer.
I huffed, and he quickly turned around, a sheepish look on his face.
“See ya, Nessie”, he called, dashing into the forest.
Renesmee waved back, standing in the doorway and watching even after he was clearly out of sight.
“Nessie”, I said softly.
She turned, her quick movements graceful, and slammed the door shut.
‘Where’s Daddy?”, she asked, shaking her wet curls out the same way Jacob did.
“He went into town to pick up a present for Grandpa”, I said, running a finger through my daughter’s beautiful bronze curls. She was wearing a pale green silk dress, and matching flats. “Is that a new outfit?”, I noted, trying to make conversation.
She nodded, a grin filling her face.
“Aunt Alice got it for me yesterday. It’s for Grandpa Charlie’s party later.”
I sighed. Of course, she had to put it on two hours early to impress Jacob.
The thought made me shudder, which is odd, if you’re a vampire, like me. We’re never cold.
Nessie noticed, her chocolate brown eyes hinted me. But I pretended not to see it.
Renesmee looked as unbelievably beautiful as the first time I had held her, as a baby, if not more, but expressed it in a less childlike form now. Seeing her in “adult clothing”, the silk wrapped around her perfect, extra slender frame in a stylish way, made me a little nervous. She was almost fully matured, not only mentally, but physically. And it was hard to be prepared for all the things that would come with that new age. I’d only had five years to prepare. And though I didn’t sleep nights, it still came as a shock to me when Jacob displayed little tidbits of affection for my daughter. It was so weird to remember my blurry human days, when Jacob had done those things for me.
Just then, Edward came through the door, fashioning a jacket so he wouldn’t look too out of place in the town. In his hands were a giant box, wrapped up in silver wrapping paper and topped with a bow.
He gave me my favorite smile, and I dashed toward him like two magnets attracting. We kissed quickly, the big box in the way. He placed it on the floor gently, and sweeped me into his arms, then the same for Nessie.
He eyed her clothing.
“Alice”, he said, giving a velvety chuckle.
“Do you like my dress?”, she asked him.
“Of course. It’s beautiful.”
“What’s in the box?”, she said.
“Your grandfather’s new HD TV”, he answered.
“He’s never going to leave that old couch of his now”, I joked.
“Good thing Carlisle and Esme got him a new one”, Edward noted, smiling.
I smiled back, shaking my head.
We decided to go out and hunt for an hour, and then head over to the Cullen’s house to set up for the party. Little did I know of Alice’s upcoming vision……

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Chapter 24 is here, still in Bella's POV-
Chapter 24

We didn’t bother wait for the Volturi to return. Instead, Edward had written a short note explaining our current situation briefly. We were on the plane, traveling towards Jacksonville in our haste to rearrange my mother’s future.
Everyone was silent, Alice contemplating further events, Jasper releasing a low calming effect over me. Emmett and Rosalie stared vaguely into space, Carlisle and Esme’s hands interlocked. I glanced over to my daughter. She was asleep next to me. So was Jacob, his head leaning towards hers. I quietly lifted her hand up, placing it gently against my cheek. It was warm, but the temperature had decreased since her birth. I concentrated on her dreams, a violation I desperately needed at the moment. I would take anything to whisk my mind away from reality.
My mind was suddenly in Forks, the scenery pure white all around and breathtakingly beautiful. Viewing the fantasy through Renesmee’s eyes, I suddenly felt nervous, afraid. She was in a white gown, a wedding gown. But I could sense her uneasiness. I slowly replaced her hand in her lap as images of Jacob floated blindly around in her head.
Edward put his arm around me, and brushed his lips across my neck.
“Thanks. I needed that”, I sighed, worry still clearly dissolving into my composure.
“My pleasure”, he murmured, his lips moving up to my jaw.
My eyes rolled back a little as I struggled to keep my cool.
“Renesmee isn’t happy”, I pointed out, my worries escaping.
“She’s just a little startled over the rapid progression of her and Jacob’s relationship”, he explained.
By the flawless symphony of Edward’s voice, I could tell he predicted everything would turn out fine.
And why shouldn’t it? Through all the chaos we’d survived in the past, how could I not look forward to a happy ending? It was almost predictable. So why couldn’t I force myself to believe it?
nyc...i'll tell every other twilight fan I know about this....ur so great pls.continue but don't pressure urself...
good job!!!!!!!
because you worry to much.....still love it.....
I am curretly working on a website for me to put Sunrise Tide on. It will make it much easier to read. I'll let you know when I finish!
excited to find out! AMAZING!
thats a good idea!!! if u do do this, i bet tons of people will look at it and love it!! also, good job on chapter 24, like all the rest! of course, it was AMAZING!!!! fantastic job!!!!!
that's areally good idea!!!=D
i agree with every one who says its a good idea
Chapter 24-2-Bella's POV-
We arrived in Jacksonville late the next day. People curiously turned their heads to see the only eight residents of Florida dressed up in scarves, gloves, long sleeves and thick glasses. Jake in jean shorts and Nessie in a pastel sundress walked beside us, arm in arm, as we made our way to the hotel.
“C’mon Ness, stay with me. I’ll spare you the embarrassment”, Jake joked.
I normally would have rolled my eyes at his silly little comments, but I just wasn’t in the mood.
“Did you catch a glimpse of Renee while we were on the plane?”, I asked Alice while handing my credit card over to the concierge.
“Thankfully, none of her plans for today include swimming, so we should be fine for now”.
“Mama, what will we tell Grandma Renee about me?’, she asked.
That was another problem. My mother would definitely notice a distinction between Renesmee’s picture from last year and now. She had aged another two years since then.
“First let’s worry about getting to her in time”, I resolved.
We had plenty of time to figure out our stories later, being vampires, it would probably only take a second.
Once settled in, I sulked, proceeding over to the window to clear my mind. I groaned. This window happened to have a beautiful ocean view.
I winded the dark wine drapes tight, sending an aura of darkness upon us once again.
From behind me, I heard the doorknob lock. Edward gave me the most beautiful smile, my favorite smile, his eyes a dark gold. He dashed over to my side in an instant, murmuring velvet into my ear.
“We will save your mother in time.”, he urged.
I opened my lips, ready to speak, but he placed his finger gently between them.
“Seems to me someone could use a distraction”, he said, in a very seducing manner.
“If you don’t mind”, I whispered back, hypnotized by his angel’s face, his perfect body. I had the sudden urge to remove the clothes covering them up, to admire the sculpted, chiseled body that perfected Edward in almost unimaginable ways.
“On the contrary. I’d be happy to oblige.”
I nearly screamed as Edward knocked me to the floor, shaggy pink carpet underneath us. Easily, our clothes were ripped to pieces, and my worries were nearly forgotten.
dear danielle
i started to read midnight sun and i was so dissapointed that i can,t read further,
then i found youre writing,and this make me so happy youre such a good writer,tanxxx so much you share this with us big kiss
p.s can,t wait for the next
fantastic still loving it hope that the next one will be on soon. hope you enjoy the new year. christina :)

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