Hey everybody of Team Jacob. I'm writing an alternate ending to New Moon. Let me know what you think!
It starts off with Jacob and Bella about to kiss for the second time(on page 411).
Meet Me on the Mountaintop
Chapter 1: The Call
Keeping his eyes on mine, Jacob began to bend his face toward me. And I was still absolutely undecided.
He bent downward and pressed his lips to mine. It was just a little one, but it felt nice. It was the nicest kiss I ever felt. I ever had. Even better than the ones I'm used to. Now I know how much I really do love Jacob Black. I just never realized it before. I'm in love with him as well.
I was sitting there with my eyes still closed, cuddled up next to him like a dork. I should say something. I need to say something.
"Bella," I heard Jacob whisper.
Come on eyes, open, I thought to myself. Why won't you open?
"Bella," Jacob repeated.
"I love you," I murmured aloud.
This time I forced my eyes to open. " I love you," I repeated to him.
He sat there motionless, relief washing over his face. I knew right there that he would never forget this moment.
“I don’t want you to leave,” I whispered to him, breathing hard. “I want you stay with me, and never leave my side ever again. I don’t want you to protect anyone else. I don’t want you to be with anyone else. I want you with me and only me. I know that sounds selfish. But that’s just how I feel about you. I know I said that I’d never feel that way to myself. And I’m wrong. I say I’m wrong. When you kissed me, it was… it was,” I paused, trying to catch my breath.
Jacob grabbed a hold of me, hugged me real hard, and started rubbing my back. “Shh,” he whispered in me ear, his hot breath traveling down my neck. “Shh. It’s okay. You don’t have to say anything. Just breathe. Take your time. I’m not going anywhere. I’ll be right here.” He stopped rubbing my back, let go of me, and kissed me once more. This time with more force. I opened my mouth to accept his lips, allowing his tongue to brush against mine.
That's all for now. But I promise to keep writing. That is, if you want me to.
Let me know what you think. Thanks!