The Twilight Saga

 

PROLOGUE

 

3rd Person POV

 

After Edward flung her into the bolder, Victoria raced through the trees her natural gift allowing her to feel that Edward was not in pursuit so she assumed that he was with the wolf. Those Cullens were the strangest vampires she had ever come across, however she had no doubt that he would be hot on her trail soon. When she attacked Jacob, she heard a howl off in the distance and instinctively knew that it was too far east and not near the others. She was already near the water so she decided to take a swim up north around the small peninsula and come back south closer to the lonely howl. Victoria emerged from the water and wrung the extra water from her clothes, normally she didn't care, but she wanted to be able to move easily.

 

As she moved quickly the terrain began to get more rocky as the elevation grew higher and higher. Her gift was evasion and so she didn't normally pursue danger, but her instincts told her that this was where Bella would be and as she got closer she began to smell her. It was different, with the faint smell of wet dog mixed with multiple different smells that Victoria knew to be the Cullens, especially Alice. Bella baffled Victoria and she couldn't figure out how one human girl could have such an impact on her.

 

To Victoria humans were stupid and weak, she could murder hundreds in a matter of minutes if she wanted, how Bella remained alive was quite a mystery. She wanted Bella to suffer for being simply a pain in the ass, but even more so Victoria was curious about Bella. How was this girl able to surround herself with things that most humans considered to be monsters?

 

Victoria felt confident if the Cullens had not gotten involved then her army would have completely decimated the wolves. Once Victoria knew she was heading in the right direction she climbed up into the trees and began to softly float from branch to branch, trying not to jostle or give away her approach. She could feel that Edward was once again after her.

 

Edward followed her scent to the water and then assumed that she would head south towards either La Push or Forks. So Edward ran along the shore line, but he was running the wrong direction.

 

Victoria did not know that, but could feel Edward's pursuit which made her nervous and anxious. She saw Seth and Bella, she was awake, sitting at his side, and running her hand down his back. When the battle started, Seth kept flinching, while he watched his sister and brothers fighting and his movements kept Bella from sleeping. Alice and Bella continued to ask Seth yes or no questions, and for the first time he wished that he could speak in wolf form.

 

When Alice wasn't asking Seth questions she was trying desperately to see her family, especially Jasper. If there was ever a time that she was desperate to see his future it was then. She would get flashes of Jasper tearing apart a vampire, but then one of the wolves would get involved causing her to loose the image. It was extremely frustrating for Alice, and her head was starting to hurt trying to see things that were either fuzzy or just simply not going to appear. Alice probably should have been watching for Victoria's decisions, but she had to choose because she can't see two futures at the same time and Jasper was her priority.

 

There was a strong wind that helped disguise Victoria's movements and because Alice was worried and distracted trying to see her family, no one noticed Victoria getting closer and closer. Had Alice not been there or Bella not have so much vampire scent on her, Seth probably could have smelt Victoria coming, but with him already sitting with one vampire, smelling another one coming would have been more difficult. Victoria felt that, if she could incapacitate Alice and kill the dog, then she could take her time with Bella, and not have to rush it. She saw Alice leaning against the rock, with her eyes closed, deep in concentration as Victoria leaped from the tree, landing over Alice and immediately tore her tiny head from her body. Then she ripped Alice's arm and threw it at Bella, but Seth's paw smashed it into the ground.

 

Bella screamed and Seth howled fiercely as he stood over Bella, while she scampered behind him. Seth could feel that Leah and Jacob were on their way, but it didn't help him know how to fight and protect at the same time. He felt so unprepared and he was scared that he was going to let Jake down by not keeping Bella safe.

You're next, dog!” Victoria hissed, and leaped at Seth who dodged once, but then instantly Victoria pounced again landing on Seth's back. He tried to buck her off, but he also had to try and be aware of where Bella was. The wolves smelled so terrible to Victoria that she really didn't want to bite another one, so instead she used both of her hands to squeeze hard on Seth's shoulder crushing the bones there. Seth whimpered as Victoria continued to move down his back crushing as many bones as she could. The further Victoria went the harder it was for Seth to remain standing and ended up crumbling to the ground.

 

No! Please, stop hurting him!” Bella screamed as she scrambled to her feet. “You only have a few seconds before the rest of the pack and Cullens know you are here. Take me instead.” Bella wasn't sure what Victoria had planned for her, but based on the warning the Laurent gave, it was going to be something slow and painful. Bella just hoped that it was slow enough that Jacob could find her before Victoria finally killed her.

You really are a stupid girl.” Victoria hissed, as she sprung towards Bella. “Climb on and I'll let him live.”

Bella leaped onto her back, praying that she wasn't making the stupidest decision of her life.

 

 

Jacob's POV

 

I leaped, landing next to Leah and began to search for Bella, but I couldn't see her anywhere. Seth, where is Bella? I asked.

I thought she was here. She was right behind me. Seth answered panicked.

Where is Victoria? Leah asked.

I don't know. Seth began to cry and his body shook, which caused him to howl in pain.

 

The rest of the pack and the Cullens arrived. Jasper ran to Alice and frantically began to piece her back together, with Esme's and Carlisle's assistance. Leah continued to comfort Seth trying to get him to relax so his body could heal, his crying and shaking was making it worse. I began to sniff around trying to find Victoria's scent but it seems that she must have been up in the trees where her scent is much harder to trace. The harsh winds were making it extremely difficult.

The moment her pieces were back in place, Alice snapped back to life and she began screaming about Victoria.

Victoria, has Bella!” Alice screamed.

 

Immediately my snout was in her face, and Jasper looked at me cautiously. Where? Where did she take Bella! I growled, and suddenly I heard Edward's voice interpreting it for me. It's about freaking time you showed up, I mumbled.

Sorry, I followed her scent to the water and then I thought she would be heading back towards La Push for Bella, so I went that direction. I didn't realize that she figured out that Bella was here. I heard everyone running here, so that is when I changed directions and started running.” Edward explained.

 

She is going back to Seattle, but hasn't decided specifically where.” Alice answered.

Let's go! I insisted.

Jake, we can't go chasing her around Seattle as wolves. Embry said, worried that I was going to get mad at him for contradicting me.

We need you, Jake. Leah insisted. Sam deserves to have you here, when we bury him.

I whined, because I knew that they were right. I needed to stay here for my pack.

 

Jacob, Bella is alive . . .” Alice stated.

How do you know that? I questioned.

Because Victoria is still planning different ways to kill her.” Edward answered fiercely.

I couldn't decide if I felt relieved or even more nervous. Of course I was glad that Bella was still alive, but I hated to think of what torture she would endure. Promise me, that you'll bring Bella back to me.I said to Edward.

I will, Jacob.” Edward promised.

ALIVE! I clarified. And truly alive, not a frozen over corpse that moves.

I'll do my best.” Edward answered.

I knew that was just going to have to be good enough, because that was the best answer he could give me.

 

The Cullen family ran together towards Seattle, except for Carlisle who offered to stay behind to treat Seth. Seth wasn't able to phase back yet so everyone, but myself, phased back and carried Seth towards La Push. I ran back to Sam, and I saw his broken and stiff body. I phased back and knelt down by his side, and I couldn't hold it together any longer. I cried for my alpha and wished that he would have been able to train me. I cried for my pack family who lost their leader and was now going to be following me. I cried for Bella and I wanted her here with me and not in the clutches of a sadistic vampire. I was so scared, so alone, and continued to cry until I couldn't cry any more.

 

Then with shaking arms I lifted Sam's body and carried him home. I knew that my life was never going to be the same, from now on, I was alpha.

 

 

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Aww, I understand that you are busy.  I have really missed your comments so I'm glad to have this one. 

Thank you so much!!  I am so glad that you have enjoyed the stories.  It was nice that the ending here comes full circle. I really believe that ending a story well is just as important as starting a story well.  You want to capture someone's attention and leave them feeling complete. 

As for next project, I do not see myself writing another Jacob and Bella story.  I think I said all that I could about them in this story.  I'm sure that I will write many one shots or short stories that involve them, but nothing to this magnitude.  

Something random would be Jacob and Emily.  I think that many people noticed that they have some serious chemistry throughout the story and I wasn't able to let them do anything about it.  I think it would be fun to explore that some more.  It would give me more opportunity to express my bitterness about imprinting as well. :D  

But for right now, I'll take an extensive break from fan fiction, but I have really enjoyed writing and see what I can do at making something publishable. 

Thank you for all your support.  Take care and God Bless. 

What a wonderful, compassion- filled story. I could actually picture myself watching these people like being part of the community. As I have told you before, you have a gift from above to be able to write so that others may share your story. I look forward to perhaps even see you with your first published book someday :)

I love your story. I cried my heart out in the end. You did a great job! :)

Aww, thank you.  I am so glad that you enjoyed the story.  It means a lot to me and glad to bring it to a sweet close, even though it is sad.   Thank you for reading. :D 

I absolutely loved the end of the story, it is so good, but a little sad as you said. I'm glad that Bella and Jacob lived as long as they did, and I'm glad Edward found love once again, because he deserved it; also I loved how you included the descendents of Bella and Jacob's family in the end, I thought that was very clever how Bella found the note  100 years later after their deaths. And I like how you weaved the story into the ending. I loved this story and can't wait to read more of your stories.

I truly believe that an ending can make or break a story and so as this story was approaching the ending it made me nervous.  But once the ending came together I knew it was going to be alright.  It was hardest deciding what to do with Edward, and I knew the only way to make it realistic for him to love another is for a lot of time to go by.  So that lead to the descendants and then I really liked the idea of the whole story actually being read to a young girl by her grandfather. 

Thank you so much, I'm not exactly sure where I am going from here with my writing, but will do what I can to let everyone know. 

Take care and God Bless. 

awwwwwww!!!!!!!!! that is such a sweet  and clever  ending :( awww, poor jake and bella but glad for edward wit his promise :) loved ur story so much cant wait to read more of ur stories,if u make more that is :P lov love love it!!!! so sad that its the end :'(

Thank you!  Jacob and Bella had a long life together and eventually Edward was able to love again as well. I am really so glad that you loved the story. 

Take care and God Bless. 

Thank you so much!!  I hope that you are well, and God Bless. 

I would feel bad that you are crying, but I completely understand why you are.  I am really glad that you found the ending to be meaningful and satisfying. 

Take care and God Bless. 

What an excellent ending well done JJ

Thank you so much DG :D  I am so glad that you enjoyed the ending, that makes me really happy.  

Take care and God Bless!  

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