Desire ( a poem on how jake feels when he changes)

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Desire

To see you

To breath your air

To hold your hand

Even hear your voice

All of these things I crave

And still I avoid you

I fear rejection

Harsh judgements

I am a monster now

Filled with anger

There is a chance you wont see me this way

You say you love me no matter what

What I am is a secret

It is not my secret to tell

Hiding this is hard

When there is the desire to tell someone

Someone special

Hints are given to you

I hope you finally remember

If you can't I fear I may tell you

Blow our secret

Just so I won't lose you

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Permalink Reply by Mariah on August 21, 2010 at 4:28pm

i love it!!

Permalink Reply by Diamond on August 21, 2010 at 5:11pm

I like this idea. I post somethng soon.

Permalink Reply by Rejane Mandapat on August 28, 2010 at 6:49am

it is a really great poem, jacob would do anything, be anything for bella.

Permalink Reply by Diamond on August 21, 2010 at 5:10pm

Thanks. I am going to try to post some more poems on how jacob feels. But is going to be hard cause school starts on the 23rd for me.

Permalink Reply by Diamond on August 21, 2010 at 5:57pm

I think I have I'm going to post right now.

Permalink Reply by ♥Edward's Babygirl♥ on August 21, 2010 at 8:48pm

Love it!!! Great job!!

Permalink Reply by k beh on August 22, 2010 at 1:35am

expressed so succintly the anguish

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