As soon as I got into the cabin, Keiro's cabin was a wreck. The table was trashed over and the windows were shattered. I walked around, barely believing what I was seeing. The smell of blood lingered in the air, making my stomach growl.
"Oh Keiro, where are you?" I whined
His shirt lay on the floor ripped and cutted up. Seems like this werewolf was big. Why didn't I just stay with him in the cabin? Why did Brother Jeremiah have to come to see me? If only I had just stayed with Keiro, wrapped in his arms inhaling his scent. Everything would have been perfect. Who knew wherew keiro was now. I could just picture him. Bleeding and moaning. There wasa sudden movement to the room which alerted me. I looked around opening my Third Eye.
"Keiro? Is that you, love?" I said
"No its me your father" a vioce spoke
Nice. Are you writing more?
yes, later on
Yes, I'll see to it.
I added chapter 3
cool.r u gonna rite more?
Cool... This is awesome.. You should write more...
... ok seems pretty good, but she has a 3rd eye and wts this about her father lol :P
do you ahve to always be mean. Just raed the fuing story to find out.