(NESSIE AND JAKE STORY)

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Permalink Reply by Jasmin Hernandez on July 8, 2010 at 3:29pm

Renesmee p.o.v.

i cant believe I'm a full vampire off all the things that could happen
this happens. . . not that i wasn't grateful for it but
i really thought i was going to die
my mind was going all over the place spinning with questions
i was unconscious for a while
but then it came to me my eyes were still shut
the memory came so clear of me as a baby not so long
ago
i remember
my family
defending me from the volturi
and how they were surprised to c a half human half vampire

Permalink Reply by Jasmin Hernandez on July 8, 2010 at 3:31pm

child
what really knocked the breath out of me when i realized what was happening to me
i remember
what actually saved me from dying
why i was still here. . .
Nuhuel
the memory came clear when he started to explain when
i would reach full growth

Permalink Reply by Rain Marie Clearwater on July 9, 2010 at 12:01am

new reader in love this is awsome post more soon

love ☮★♥alice+seth☮★♥

Permalink Reply by Jasmin Hernandez on July 9, 2010 at 11:47am

he said it would only take 7 years i never really paid attention to any of this
what difference did it make?? half vampire; full vampire it was all the same to me
i would still have what i loved
i was still unconscious but
for some reason i was able to think
its probably cuz of the transformation
momma said it would hurt
but i felt
peaceful actually almost as if i were floating in the sky

Permalink Reply by Jasmin Hernandez on July 9, 2010 at 11:53am

"Nessy, Nessy"?? i heard someone cry in a frightened voice
someone shook my arm
"yes" i replied in a slurred voice
i rolled over to the floor and realized i was still on the
hard sofa
surprisingly that didn't hurt
all i heard was a thump

Permalink Reply by HeartStealer™ on July 9, 2010 at 8:32pm

WOW, Renesmee is a full vampire; OOOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooo plz go on!

Permalink Reply by Ge Marquez on July 16, 2010 at 11:45pm

Someone suddenly roared in laughter. I wonder who it was. In one blink of an eye, I was on the couch. Strange, I just fell out of it. My head hurt.
"Nessie, are you alright?" Jake asked on my side. I sniffed Jake to see if he stunk. Nothing, he smelled just fine. Rather than earlier.
"Am I a full vampire?" I asked. Jake wondered. The others started to laugh.
"Good shot there, Ryan." I shifted my gaze to the black haired man. Luke, as I could remember the name. I heard it earlier.
"Thanks, man." The one he complemented said. Ryan. The chocolate haired man, pale white skin, golden topaz eyes. I shook my head.
"What is this?" I asked Dad. He sighed.

Permalink Reply by Ge Marquez on July 19, 2010 at 9:55pm

"Honey, you're not really a full vampire. Ryan and Luke we're only testing their newly discovered powers." Dad explained. I moaned. And, I was so into the whole vampire thing. I pouted.

Permalink Reply by LilMiss Werewolf.! ~Jacob/Seth~ on July 24, 2010 at 6:38am

Wait WHAT.???!! Hurry and post please ii have 2 read what happens and what their powers are.!

Permalink Reply by Ge Marquez on July 28, 2010 at 9:12am

R.p.o.v.
The whole thing was all a set up! That's more of like the term I was searching for. Testing their powers didn't quite suit the situation. And, to think everything was going just the way I wanted it to, and poof. Just a test?
I heard Dad chuckle. I glowered at him. He fought to crack a smile, he knew I was mad, and yet...he finds it, utterly amusing.

Permalink Reply by Francisca on July 9, 2010 at 1:46am

Nessie is a full vampire?!!? mmmm i dont like it so much...

but they were really good chapters :D

Permalink Reply by Shauna Caffrey on July 19, 2010 at 1:18pm

Nessie can't be a full vampire unless she was bitten It's impossible!! the story was good until Nessie suddenly into a vampire............

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