The pain! It is unbearable! I wanted to shriek ''KILL ME NOW!!! PLEASE KILL ME NOW !'' but I knew it would hurt Carslie,I knew he was waiting for me, I heard a young man scream next to me, wondering who would be coming to help...the fire burned hotter, just as I thought it couldn’t GET any hotter, it burned inside me as I thought of the young man beside me and Carslie thinking the fire could only cool down just when I could feel it get even hotter running through my viens,eating up anything in its path, I focused on the boys screams next to me to keep me sane...1,359 screams later ,I noticed an insignifant change, it got slightly cooler thought of Carslie,and of my jump of a clif,then the reason why. I wanted to let the fire kill me, losing my one and only son was the worst thing that has ever happened to me, my heart, beating very abmoraly fast, sank.I almost let the fire burn me to ashes, but by then it was 249,999 screams later from the change, that the burning almost stopped al together...I could see everything, every dust moat. I could taste everything; the flavor in the air was wonderful. I could hear everything I heard Carslie, then I noticed that the boy stopped screaming beside me...and then the fire stopped to, I sat up and so did the boy, he looked like he was about to get killed. ‘‘What!? You’re going to KILL me! '' The boy said, I froze, how he knew that... ‘‘Didn’t you just say you were going to kill me...?'' I screamed in my head. ''what’s wrong why are you screaming?'' this boy could read my mind somehow....then Carsile came in, he explained to us, then let us get used to our fastness and said we had to stay in the room until dark so we won’t get noticed my humans. And he gave us blood, then I noticed the burn in my throught I thought I was burning again then he told me to drink it and it muted the burn...34,500 breaths from the boy later, we got to go home, to Carsile's home anyway, and we were there till we could control our selves said Carsile.....
We got to look at ourselves in the mirror, I looked perfect, apart from the bright red eyes…they were terrifying…shocking, looking at the eyes, I knew they were mine, I just couldn’t look at them anymore, I looked at Carsile,he had gold eyes, why weren’t my eyes like his? ‘’I have no clue why are you asking me?’’ said the boy, he could read minds….how in the world; I let it go, desracted by the eyes. They were terrifying, very terrifying. I looked at Carsile again. ‘’they will get darker then lighter, in a few months then your eyes will be amber. They are still very pretty, Edward how did you know what Esme was thinking?’’ so the boy’s name was Edward, so modern everyone’s name was Edward, he was 17 years old, and now frozen forever, poor boy. Well I was only 29.’’Hmm, I don’t know I thought she said it aloud, at least I HERD it like it was a loud, wait...I can READ HER THOUGHTS, like mind reading…..?’’ he said this with shock he looked at me, there the EYES again they were haunting me ! They wanted to take over my life; I looked at Carsile to escape. ’’It aperese so, tell me what I’m about to say.’’
Edward thought,’’you said ‘this is quite n amazing discovery.’’’
Carslie got this look in his eyes, like he was amazed.
Then Carsile went to go do research he told us to stay there, in the house. He came back with a vary beaten women in his arms, she was screaming, just like Edward was doing, while the fire burned-I quickly looked at the girl again, then at Carslie,he was looking very sorry, Edward looked angrey.’’How could you do this Carslie!’’
‘’I couldn’t just leave her for dead,Edward.’’
Edward put his fingers between his nose, looked at the girl and then at Carslie’’were going to have to move soon, so the people won’t notice, she was well known’’ then I realized that this girl was Roaslie, she WAS well known for her upcoming wedding with Prince Royce. We had to move, and now,’’Once shes done changing we will move…I’m sorry.’’ We spend the rest of the night listening to the girls screams…the next morning we all went to hunt in the woods, our first one at that, Carlisle taught us all how to hunt, then I went off and caught 2 deer, they smelled very repulsive, I drank anyway, then we went home. Rosalie and Edward played checkers, me and Carlisle talked about nonsince, I herd Rosalie scream ‘’CHEATER! HOW DO YOU KNOW I WAS GOING TO DO THAT!’’
‘’Easy. You told me’’
‘’I SAID NOTHING OF THE SORT!’’
‘’what? How did you know I was thinking that?’’
‘’YOU SAID IT ALOUD.’’
‘’Edward, please calm down, you to Rosalie’’ Carlisle interjected...
‘’THEN TELL HIM TO STOP CHEATING!’’
‘’Rosalie, he can’t help it, I told you before, he has a special power none of us have.’’
Rosalie then stormed out of the room, angery as can be, nocked over several vases, sherked ‘’I WANT MY LIFE BACK!’’ at the top of her lungs. Then slammed the door to the room Carslile gave her…then 3 second later we heard the door scream in protest and then fell to the ground,we went to invesagte,and Rosalie’s window was open, and she was nowhere to be seen…
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