The Twilight Saga

The story is going to be in Nessie's P.O.V. Most of the time. I might switcht to Jake's once in awhile (Takes place after Breaking Dawn)






Chapter One: Don't you love me?


I woke up in the morning, right as Aunt Alice popped into my room.

"Rise and Shine Nessie! It's you first day of high school!" She squeaked, waking me up completely.

I was exited to finally be going to high school with my best friend Jacob Black.

Except for the last couple of months, he hasn't felt like... just a friend. I wasn't sure why, but I tried not to worry about it.

I got out of bed and went to my over-sized closet, picking out a perfect back to school ensemble.

It was a skin-tight, purple shirt with one sleeve going to my elbow and the other just being a strap. It was my favorite shirt. I picked out a gray pair of extra skinny, skinny jeans. Aunt Alice wasn't very fond of skinny jeans but she said they looked great on me.

I went to my bathroom and brushed through my golden ringlets. My hair hung down to my waist now.

"Hurry up, Nessie. You're going to be late!" Mom called from the living room.

"I'm ready!" I yelled back, putting a head band on.

I ran out to the living room, grabbing my backpack. I kissed mom, dad, and everyone else goodbye, then ran out the door into Jake's car. He had promised to drive me to school today.

"Hey, Nessie. You look great." He said smiling.

"Thanks. You, too." I nudged his arm, playfully as he flashed my favorite smile.


We got to school barely on time and went to our first class. I was only a freshamn so I only had one class with Jake. After fourth period, we had lunch.

I spotted Jake across the cafeteria, sitting with some of the other wolves. I smiled and walked over to them.

I had this really weird pull to him. Like I didn't want to be too far away for too long. It was starting to become weird to me. "Hey guys. What's up?" I said sitting down.

" We were just... talking about something." Seth answered, serious. He looked like he was trying not to say something. I wonder what it was.

"Actually, Nessie. We were just talking about you." Jake whispered.

"Oh." Was all I could say. Why were they talking about me?

"Nessie? Can I talk to you? Alone?" Jake asked getting up holding out his hand for mine.

I grabbed his hand and he led me to a secluded corner right outside the cafeteria.

He looked around to make sure nobody was listening.

"What is it, Jake? You can tell me anything."

"Um... I- I'm not... completely sure how to say this." He stuttered, looking down at his hands.

"Just say it." I encouraged, smiling.

"Nessie. I'm in love with you." He spit out qucikly, but clearly enough for me to hear correctly.

I gasped.

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Chapter Two: Explanations

Did he just say what I think he said? He was in love with me?!
I stood there, frozen. My lips parted slightly.
"Nessie?" He said with worry in his eyes.
I snapped out of it right as he wrappd his hand around my waist, pulling me against his chest.
Our lips were inches apart. I wanted so badly for him to kiss me. But I could tell he was waiting for me to say something.
I reached my right hand up and cupped my hand to his cheek.
"I love you, too." I whispered.
Before I could say anything else, he crushed his lips to mine.
When he pulled away, he had the most gleaming look in his beautiful brown eyes.
I smiled. I was so happy.
"Where did this all come from?" I whispered, curious as to how long he felt this way.
"How bout we cut the rest of school and take a walk on the beach. I'll explain everything there." He answered.
"Okay." I said.
I giggled as we ran to the parking lot and got into his car.
He sped down the road as fast as he could, heading to First Beach in La Push.
As we ame into view of the beach, Jake turned to me and smiled.
He stopped the car and opened my door for me. I stepped out of the car and we began our walk down the beach.
There was only one problem. Someone was following us. I could smell them and I knew exactly who it was.
I turned around and saw my father leaning against a tree.
I never thought about how my parents would feel about me and Jake being.. together now.
"What the hell do you think your doing?!" My dad said walking over to us.
"We are walking on the beach?" I said, but it sounded more like a question.
"Renesmee... You are in so much trouble." Dad said. "Go home. Now!"
"I don't want to go home! Why should I. It's not like I don't know all the crap they are teaching at school!" I yelled at him.
It was true. I already knew everything they were teaching. I didn't see the point of going.
Jake squeezed my hand.
"I just wanted to explain some thing to her. Calm down." Jake said clenching his teeth.
I turned awa from my dad and faced Jacob. I put my hand on his bare chest and he relaxed at my touch.
"Calm down, Jake." I whispered.
"I will give you ten minutes to explain. After that, Nessie is comin home." My dad growled, looking at Jake.
"Thank you." I said, "Go ahead."
We sat down in the sand and Jacob explained why he loved me and that we were always meant to be together.
He told me about imprinting and that he had imprinted on me. After he was finally done explaining, I smiled.
We still had a few minutes left over. He leaned forward pressing his lips to mine.
I sighed and he pulled away.
"What's wrong Nessie?"
"Nothing except for the fact that my parent are never going to let me be with you. There going to think I'm still too young." I said, looking at the sand.
"Your damn right that's what were going to think!" My mom said from behind me.
"Crap!" I said under my breath.
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Chapter Three: Grounded

"It was nice being with you while it lasted." I said pressing my lips to Jake's one last time. My mom grabbed my arm and pulled me through the sand. I tried to fight back but there was no use in playing tug of war with a vampire.
My dad walked up to Jacob and started saying something. It was just loud enough for me to hear.
"...If you ever come near her again, I will rip your head off, dog! Got that?" My dad said.
"No!" I yelled. Miraculously, I got my armfree of my mother's grip and ran to Jake's side.
I didn't know I was crying until I leaned my head against Jake's chest, wrapping my arms around his waist.
I started sobbing. "You... c-can't hurt... h-him!" I yelled into his chest.
Jake wrapped his warm arms around me and laid his cheek on the top of my head.
"It's okay, Nessie. Shh." He whispered, rubbing my back.
After a few minutes, I finally stopped crying and turned around to face my parents.
I wiped the wetness from my cheeks and evened out my voice.
"Jake and I love eachother. You can't stop us from being together. You of all people should know that." I whispered.
My mom and dad exchanged a quick glance and looked back at us.
"Please." I whispered.
Thatnk thats just part one of chapter 3 :D
love it
can't wait for the second part :)
Chapter Three (Part Two)

"Please." I said again. I was hoping they would let me be with Jake. So what if he was a little older. So what if I was only-to my parents- four years old. I looked 14, maybe 15. I wanted to be with Jake. And he wanted to be with me.
Mom sighed and dad answered, "We can see that... you love him, Renesmee. And we want you to be happy..."
"Thank you, thank you, thank you!" I shouted hugging them both.
"But your still grounded for cutting school." My mother whispered.
My smiled faded and my face fell. "Can I at least see Jake?" I asked. Tears welled up in my eyes as I thought of not being with him.
I turned around to face Jacob right as a single tear fell down my cheek.
He cradled the side of my face in his hand and wiped away the tear with his thumb.
I smiled as he kissed my forehead and wrapped his arms around my waist, pulling me into his chest.
I buried my face in his chest and he chuckled.
I pulled away, looking up at his face, "What's funny?!"
He put his hands on my shoulders and turned me around. My parents were gone.
As I turned back around, I noticed we both had huge smiles on our faces.
He pulled me up into his arms, wrapping my legs around his waist, so we could see eye-to-eye.
"You have the most beautiful eyes." I whispered.
"I could argue with that, but there's no use in arguing with you." He chuckled kissing my cheek.
I jumped down and grabbed his hand. I was running torward the water.
It was an exceptionaly sunny today.
I ran through the water and pulled Jacob along with me.
The waves splashed against us, but we didnt move an inch.
He pulled me into his arms again, crushing his lips to mine just as a huge wave crashed against us.
Still didnt budge.
The sun was going down. I hadn't realized we'de been out here for so long.
I wrapped my arms around his neck and saw a flash.
:D hope you like it!
Love it realy
you're a very good writer :)
thank you! but it will get better.. i have a bunch of ideas but they really cant take place til they are married :D
I LOVE IT!! But your killing me with the flash thing, I wanna know what it is!!
Chapter Four: Birthday Girl

I was grounded for two weeks. My parents let me have some time with Jacob before my punishment began. But now I can't leave my house and Jake can't come over. I sat on my bed doodling on a piece of paper when my mom walks in.
"Hey." I mumbled, not looking up from my doodling.
"Sweetie, I know this is hard for you. But you have to know that we are doing this because we love you." She said smoothly as she sat by my side.
He words were so cliche.
"Of course you are. I just dont see why being able to see Jacob is such a bad thing." I whispered.
She looked down at the paper I was doodling on and sighed.
All over it said Nessie+Jake or I love Jacob.
"Listen, sweetheart. I know its hard but your punishment will go by fast. Trust me."
"No. You don't know. You don't know how hard it is for me to be away from him. He imprinted on me! Its hurts to be away from eachother for even a few minutes!" I shouted.
Dad walked in the room and crossed his arms. " Don't even think about it." He warned.
"Dang it!" I whispered. I was thinking about sneaking out. I wish my dad couldn't read minds! Ugh!
He sighed and walked out after my mother.
I fell back down on my bed and shoved my face in a pillow.
Then I heard a tap at my window.
I got up and opened it wide. Nobody was there. Or so I thought.
Jacob came out of nowhere, pulled me out of my window and crushed his lips to mine.
I smiled under his lips and felt relief. I hadn't seen him for almost a week accept for school. I hadn't kissed him since the night on the beach.
He pulled away and had the most breathtaking smile on his face.
We stared into eachothers eyes for a long moment.
I felt like I could see his soul. And he felt like he could see mine.
He pressed his lips gently to mine again. Once. Twice. Three times before my dad was standing next to us.
I ignored him and pressed my lips to his warm chest.
Jake chuckled and kissed my cheek.
"Nessie. I'm sorry if I got you into more trouble." Jake whispered in my ear.
I laid my forehead against his chest and said, "It was worth it."
I let go of Jake and headed back to my bedroom window.
Before I could hop back into my room Jake spun me around and kissed me one more time before he had to go.
He pulled away too soon. I looked up at him with a sad expression.
"I love you, Nessie." Jake muttered.
"Love you, too." I sighed. I pressed my hand to his neck and showed him the doodling I did on the piece of paper.
He ran past my dad and into the woods. I stared down at my feet as tears started falling down my face.
*1 year later* (Sorry it's such a big skip)

I got up out of bed and walked to my closet. I didn't feel like getting dressed but I did anyways. I slipped on jean shorts and a blue tank top. I brushed my hair and went to sit in the living room. My parents weren't here. That's weird.
I checked their bedroom. Nothing.
I walked into the kitchen and found a note on the fridge.
It read:

Went to Grampa Carlisle's. We have a suprise for you.
Come over as soon as you wake up.
Love you, Mom and Dad

I set the note on the counter, slipped on my shoes and ran torward the house.
I got there in a few minutes. I was already exhausted from running tha short distance.
As I walked up to the front door, Jake puts his arms around my waist and whispers, "Happy Birthday."
Oh yeah. It was my birthday wasn't it! I totally forgot!
I turned around and wrap my arms around his neck. "Thank you." I whispered.
He lightly pressed his lips to mine and pulled away so we could walk inside.
Well I knew what the suprise was now.
I walked in the door with Jake's hand in mine and they all shouted, "Happy Birthday!"
I blushed a deep red and my family came up to me one at a time giving me hugs.
I was officially eighteen. Well I looked eighteen anyways. I was only really five.
"Thank you guys. I actually completely forgot about my birthday." I said smiling.
Jake brought our intertwined hands up and kissed the back of mine.
After I cut the cake I started opening gifts. Alice handed me hers first. it was a flat rectangle box with a big bow around it.
"Hope you like it. It was from a long time ago." She said. I could tell she was bursting with excitement.
I untied the bow and opened the box. Inside was a picture. It was of me and Jake at the beach about a year ago.
The sunset was a perfect background and the wave had just hit us. I was in Jake's arms and my arms were around his neck. He had just started kissing me. So that was what that flash was so long ago.
"Thank you. It's beautiful." I said while my eyes began to water.
I opened everyone elses gifts. There was mostly things I really didnt care about but the last gift I opened was Jake's.
It was a little blue box. Inside were the most beautiful diamond earring I had ever seen.
I gasped and when I could finally say something I whispered, "Thank you."
I close the box and put them down and ran into Jake's arms.
"Thank you so much. They are beautiful." I whispered.
"Only the best for the one I love." He said chuckling.
I stood on my tip toes trying to reach my lips to his.
He pulled my legs around his waist so I didnt have to reach.
I kissed him and said, "I love you, forever."
"I love you, too. But I have another suprise for you." He said leading me out the back door.
>:D I made it a cliffy MUAHAHAHA! :D dont wory ill add more today


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