Share 'Story, please read :)'

This is a story i've been working on for a while, this is just the beginning, ya know giving background info, but please read and give me feedback :)    As I sat in the valley filled with assorted flowers, the beauty of the sunset stole my breath away. If you listened carefully you could hear the fairies whispering behind the flowers. With the rays of the autumn sun hitting my face, I breathed i…