"Great chapter Michelle, I must say that I was laughing at the whole 'Dracula' costume scene... I can just picture the look on Calisle and Esme's faces as they tried to make sense of the costume and can only imagine the comments being…"
"It's beautifully written and I can see that the story is coming near its end... will she still get married and have Renesmee...will Jacob still imprint on the baby...I get the feeling that the battle with the volturi is still impending...I have…"
"That was beautifully written and I'm looking forward to the discussion about marriage, sex, and children...I think those are things Edward will need to put on the table as well as his and Bella's timeline for the change...will there be…"
"This is so good, I love that Bella and Jazz were able to bond again after the incident and I know the intensity Edward feels for Bella, but kids can't be given back once you adopt them and I glad you made the point clear... the…"
"I am really enjoying this story, although I still can't read the remainder of EPOV and BPOV ch. 29, I am so excited about where this story is headed and you really do have a handle of how Edward feels about himself, it's not enough for him…"
"This is a wonderful story, wow I can feel the intensity and passion there with Jacob and also the pain and realization that goes along with it... I'm guessing that at some point you are going to indicate that Bella was successful in leading…"
"Now that I'm caught up, this was a really intense story, I wans't anticipating a modern day romeo and juliet but it is a really good read none-the-less; I'm curious to see what could possibly come next for this story... the only thing…"
"Great work, I really enjoyed reading thsoe chaptres, I can't remember if you wrote her age or not, but how old is Bella in this story, is she 17 and I'm presuming that there will be no werewolves... Charlie's behavior is quite severe…"
"The reason she never fed her was because she was newborn vampire and while she was able to resist killing humans, in the book she says that she wasn't reay to try that. also, Edward, Rose and the rest of the family were able to interact with…"